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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey, I updated. Enjoy!

Chapter 2: A new beggining or not.

Padma came and saw Ridhima having breakfast. Ridhima saw her.
Ridhima: "Give"
Padma:"Here"
Ridhima: " Cho Chweet!"
Padma: "After all,it's yours"
Ridhima:" My sweet Ali"
Padma: "Ali?"
Ridhima:"Ali, I think I'll name her Ali.No but soon I'll find a full name with Ali."
Padma: "That's good. I've spoken to the doctor, you're coming with me."
Ridhima: "But..."
Padma:" No but's, you're going to stay with me till your life settles again."
Ridhima: "Till when?, a new start is difficult without a past in my life."
Padma:" Everything is posible."
Ridhima:"I don't know."

Padma began helping her pack.
Padma: "Is there something you remember?"
Ridhima:"I did a course of architecture."
Padma:"Great! Then start from architecture."
Ridhima:"I'll think about it."
Padma:"It's strange, suddenly you got out of coma.The doctor began told me that it can be difficult for you to survive with such a trauma you've been through.A young man came here just before you breathed heavily. Nice guy, I felt he knew you but no."
Ridhima:"What was his name?"
Padma:"It was...ya...Armaan."
Ridhima:"Armaan,nice name."
Padma:"He suddenly stopped at your door."
Ridhima:"I'm finished."
Padma: "Come on!"

Ridhima left with Ridhima, meanwhile:
Dr.: "You're free to go, Mr.Mallik.
Armaan: "Thank you Dr."

Armaan came out and headed towards the exit with the few things he had.
Ridhima was talking to Padma,with Ali in her lap, and also going to the exit.

Both walking together without knowing eachother were going. Just then it was predicable that they were going to clash but.
Dr.: Mr.Mallik?

Armaan turned around, Ridhima heard the name and turned around too.
Padma: What happened?
Ridhima: Nothing, I thought I heard the name before.
Padma: Let's go then.
Ridhima: Ok.

Meanwhile:
Dr: Mr. Mallik, your purse.
Armaan: Thank you very much!
Dr: Something important ?
Armaan: Very.
Dr: Meet you soon.
Armaan: Better not.

Armaan went and before that Ridhima.

After 2 months:

A girl running up and down.
Padma: Ridhima, don't run, You're stressing yourself.
Ridhima: Don't worry Amma. I've got to rush.
Padma: You're just going shopping.
Ridhima: For Ali.
Padma: And buy something for yourself too.
Ridhima:Let me see. If there's some money left.
Padma: Naughty!

Ridhima quickly hurried to her room, took Ali and left in a cab. She came upto a mall and stepped into a baby shop. She just bumped into someone who happened to have a baby just like Ali's age.
Woman: I'm sorry.
Ridhima: Actually, It's my fault. Sorry
Woman: New here?
Ridhima: Ya, I'm confused.
Woman: You have a baby?
Ridhima: Yes and I guess, you also.
Woman: Anjali and this, my baby Anaya.
Ridhima: Ridhima and Ali.
Anjali: Nice names.

Ridhima and Anjali kept talking and soon sharing some secreets. Both found a sister in eachother they never had.The shopping went very good.
Anjali:Come, meet my husband.
Ridhima: Actually, I've got to go to the washroom.
Anjali: Give Aliyah, I'll take her with me. She's enjoying it with Anaya.
Ridhima: Take care.

Anjali went to the coffee shop where she had decided to meet her husband.
Anjali: Atul, Order something.
Atul: First you tell me, from where did you get another baby?
Anjali: Atul, I gave birth to 1 now.
Atul: Now!
Anjali: Chill, I made a friend. It is her's.
Atul: Better.
Anjali: Where is He?
Atul: He said he needed to do some work.
Anjali: So he left.
Atul: No, he's here.In the mall.
Anjali: Ok. Now go order something.
Atul: Ya.

Atul went to order something meanwhile Ridhima also came.
Anjali: Atul, This is Ridhima and Ridhima, This is Atul.My husband.
Atul: Hey.
Ridhima: Hi.

They sat to eat.
Anjali: Where is he?
Atul: There.

We see a guy walking towards Atul but in the mind calculating who's the 3rd one there. With a white shirt and blue jeans, he looked handsome.

Edited by kdrs - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
anothr amaziz updte
readin i can jus pictur it as a real serial lol
really nce updte
cnt wait 4 da nxt part
updte sooon plzzšŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
u know its just superb šŸ‘
armaan/riddhima ko jaldhi se mila do
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54
Very nice part and I think that the man is Armaan.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
hey wonderful update šŸ‘ loved it but ARs scenes are missing ALI how did she remember that name šŸ˜• i think that guy is arman
oho so i think again they will fall in love great concept
thanks for ur pm
and pls pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow great FF!! šŸ‘ continue soon! 😳

Avanti
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
too good plz continue soon i love it its awesome i mean you rock i can't wait for the next part its amazing mind blowing rocking awesome wonderful sorry can't think of any other word but i am pretty sure you story is all these plz make me happy by writing the next update remember i can't wait šŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
#58
Hey this FF is too cute...A bit sad...But I think everything is going to get better!!!...Plz continue soon!!!

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