Fan Fic: Hidden Feelings - Page 5

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keep it up
plzz continue

Just read the whole story. Very nice plz continue.

mast hai with all the fighting and shouting...more plzzz...

😊Anamika😊

Great story! 👏 👏 👏 Plz Continue.

i luv A-K fights 😆
this is a great fan fic plz cont soon
add more n more fiting of our lovebirds 😳

It's a funny story! Plz continue. :D

its really awesome..continue soon pls.

plz continue dear
Its very nice

thanks for all the comments...heres the next part



Angad and Kripa sitting in the jail looking as if they are going to kill each other

Police officer: i have called both of your parents and they are coming

Angad: gr8 dad's going to disown me....and it's all because of you

Kripa: what the hell do you mean its all my fault....ur the one who started the argument

Angad: what the hell do you mean i started the arguement

Kripa: well your the one who stopped the car in the middle of the road and then you started calling me a chipkali

Angad: you were also calling me bander

Kripa: thats becaue you are a bander

Anagd: and you are a churail no a chipkali wait actually you remind me of bhootni

Kripa: mein tumko aaj nehi choodongi

Kripa gets up and was about to punch Angad whwen she see's her and Angads dad

Kripa: Angad tumhara aur mera dad aagya hian

Angad: damn

Aditya: POlice officer why did you arrest Kripa and Angad

Police officer: they were fighting like idiots creating a traffic jam

Dilip: fighting you must have mistaken they love each other and they are getting married

Police officer: what do you mean getting married and love each other..i have seen them two times and both times they were fighting like jaani dushman

Angad: dad he's lying......we both were just talking and he thought that we both were fighting

Dilip: if you both were talking....than what was the point of stopping the car in the middle of the road

Kripa: actually we were talking but than Angad turned it to a argument

Aditya: argument

Angad thinking: what she meant is that i asked Kripa where she wanted to go on a honeymoon....and we disagrred on the place...and after uhhhh......oh yea....she told me to stop the car...and i did...she got out......and i got out of the car to ask her to get back in the car......when the police officer came and started to accusse us of having of creating a traffic jam and then the next thing i knew was that someone had handcuffed me and kripa.....and locked us up in this stinky jail....yea so thats about it.....understood.....(nad than to himself) because i didn't

Dilip: well i guess than it was all a misunderstanding and here are the documents for their bail

police officer: well fine...but i'm telling you they are jaani dushman

Angad and Kripa are released and they are in the car.....the whole drive back Kripa didn't say anything and Angad was quite surprised.....when all of a sudden Kripa screams: IDea

Angad: what

Kripa: i have a idea and i promise you that our parents well break our marriage

Angad: really and whats this plan

Kripa: how about if your girlfriend who you loved alot....wait still loves alot left you because of some misunderstanding but now she realized that it was just a misunderstanding and she wants to get back together and she finds out that you are getting married and she comes and clears the misunderstanding and you both decide to get married again

Angad: babe my dad will kill me for cheating on you or the other so called girl friend

Kripa: dumbo....she will come when mine and your parents are there and she will make up a story about how you both fell in love and some villian created some misunderstandings between you both and she left you cause of that and now the misunderstandings cleared and you and angad want to get back together again

Angad: and if my parents decide that i should get married to you because you were supposed to be in love with me.......and ask the girl to sacrifies her so calle dlove then

Kripa: but we will add a twist to the story and mine and you parents will have no choose but to break our marriage

Angad: and what will this twist be

Kripa: your girlfriend doesn't come by herself....but with your child....now your parents wouldn't want you to seperate from your love and child cause of me

Angad: yo this sounds more like a typical bollywood movie or a serial rather than something that will happen to someone

Kripa: shut up and just do what i say....and wait till tommarow when your girlfriend comes at the family dinner

Angad: who will my so called girlfriend be

Kripa: don't worry about that....i will ask one of my friends....but if you want one of your girlfriends to come and claim her place than you are wellcomed to do so.....

Angad: shut up



next pat: family dinner

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