Fan Fic: Hidden Feelings - Page 4

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Posted: 20 years ago
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i'm so intrigued...can't wait to find out how both of them landed up in the jail...post the next part soon.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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angad and kripa in jail
wow i want to see that part 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
#33
Do we still need to tell u COntinue? No dear
U r wrtiin too good
Pls continue
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Posted: 20 years ago
#34
aaaaaw..gr8 fan fic re...! 😃 Plllz continuee! 😉

YummY 😳
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Posted: 20 years ago
#35
please continue soon
I am loving it 😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
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thanks everyone who commented on the previous part......here's the next part


Kirpa was sitting in her room thinking of a way out of the marriage since her and Angad's marriage date was and now she only had two months to make a plan to break the marriage. Kirpa thinking i will run away....but what if mom and dad disown me or i get kiddnapped bad idea...think of another one........i know i will go on a hunger strike....what if mom and dad still don't break the marriage i will die from hunger.....antoher idea....hmmmm......lets see.....damn i can't even think of one good idea
after one hour of thinking sshe decides to call Angad

Angad on the other side was also thinking of a way out of hte marriage when his cell started to ring

A: hello
K: hi....it's me kirpa
A: hey chipkali.....it's only been 4 hours since...aur tumha meri itni yaad aii...ka phone kiya
K: shut up angad.....we have to meet and think of a way out of this marriage
A: fine...i'll pick you up in an hour
K: fine
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Angad adn Kirpa in a resturant

K: we have to think of something....mom and dad are already thinking anout ur engagement

A: i know.....kuch bhi ho jaya mein tum sa shaadi nehi karoonga

K: angad yea kya khe rahaho ho...yeha mein to tum sa shaadi kar na ka liya maari ja rahi ho

A: oh really..luck me

K: shut up.....and come up with a plan

A: fine how about we go along with this wedding stuff adn then after afew days we will pretend that we got into a fight and break the marriage

K: r u sure it will work...i mean mine and your parents are hell bent on getting us married

A: it has to or else i will commit sucide than marry you

K: really.......if you are thinking about commiting a filmy sucide then.....

confused Angad: filmy sucide

K: you know where they stand on a stool and tie there next to a fan or somethinng like that....after that they oush the stool and you know the rest....

A: oh just shut up.....u actually think i will commit sucide....stupid chipkali

K: and here i was think of pushing the stool

A: kirpa just shut up

K: whatever..lets go back

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Angad and Kirpa com to the Sharma house and they see Angad's parents there to

A: mom, dad what r u two doin here

Naina: fixing ur engagement date

Kirpa: what

Gayatri: yeap its next week

Angad: but u gys could have at least asked us

Dilip: y should we ask you........u both said yes.....and now its our duty to arange everything

A: but

Aditya: no but wut....Kirpa u wanted to go shopping right......Angad will take you

Kirpa: i can go by myself

Gayatri: we know u could.but we want you to go with Angad...tumha koi problem to nehi

Angad: mujhe kya problem ho sakthi hai......chalan

Kirpa: chaliya ji



in the car Angad is driving

Angad: so hona wali patni ji......whats up

Kirpa: shut up...........mujhe tumsa baat nehi karni.....

Angad: kya nusibaat hai....i hate shopping aur woh bhi tumhara saath....god help me

Kirpa: mujhe bhi koi shaookh nehi hai tumhara saath shopping jaana ka

Angad: what ever chipkali

Kirpa: quit calling me a chipklai warna......

Angad stops the car in the middle of the road

Angad : warna kya

Kirpa: warna mein tumko

Angad: mujhko

Kirpa: tumko

Angad: kuch bhi nehi kar sakthi......adn then he starts calling her a chipkali non stop

now they have sreated a traffic and people are totally pissed off

Kirpa: quti calling me a chipkali u......bundar........lofer.......idiot.....monkey.....
donkey....

Angad: itna kuch khaa tumh na mujha..apna hona wala pati ka liya tumhara liya koi bhi respect nehi hai.......chipkali kahi ki

Kirpa: pati my foot....tumsa shaadhi kar na sa to accha hai mein kisi bhudda sa shaadi ka lo

Angad: to kar lo na.....whos stopping you........mera peecha to chooda ga tumsa

Angad and Kirpa start pulling each others hair and yelling at each other...unaware of the traffic jam they created

suddenlly a police officer comes..he is the same officer who caught than fighting when they met for the first time

police oficer: u both.....again

Angad: officer we were just..ahhh

police officer: shut up.....he than takes out hand cuffs and arrest both of them

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in the jail

Kirpa and Angad are in teh same jail

Kirpa thinking to herself: Angad once i get out of here...i will make ur life hell....damn mom and dad are going to kill me........and it's all because of this stupid bundar

Angad thinking: because of you chipkali i'm stuck in this stinky old jail....dad won't even get me bailed out of here...damn......all because of you chipkali......choodoga nehi tumko mein



next part: Angad and Kirpa come up with anther plan to stop the wedding


plz send ur positive/negative comments
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Posted: 20 years ago
#37
AWSOME I LOVED IT!!! when will there be romance between them??
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Posted: 20 years ago
#38
awesome part. loved it 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#39
😆 too good yaar, plz cont soon
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Posted: 20 years ago
#40
😆 That was an awesome part....enjoyed it

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