Fan Fic: Hidden Feelings - Page 7

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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz cont soon i am an impatient very person so plz cont soon 😉
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plz cont soon i am an very impatient person so plz sont soon 😉
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plssssssssssssssss continue fast cannt wait more 😭
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😆 😆 😆 i luv it so farr! please continue, its superb!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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NICE JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOUR DOING A GREAT JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE DO CONTINUE!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!
*KHUSHI*
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lambi judaai kab tak wait karogi hai oh rabba lambi judaai lumbi judaai. in short cont soon 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey everyone...once again thanks 2 everyone who relied to the previous part
i wrote this part in a hurry so some of the things maybe won't even make any sense


Kripa sitting in her room calls her bestfriend Sanjana and asks her up and tells her about her latest problem in life and if she will be Angad's fake lover to which Sanjana agrees because she can't see her bestfriend sad.

Kripa: thanks so much Sanjana

Sanjana: ur welcome Kripa and by the way I have something very important to tell you

Kripa: what

Sanjana: that's a surprise

Kripa: you are finally going to let me meet your boyfriend

Sanj: yap..he's coming back tommarow

Kripa: what.....omg.....finally i get to meet him

Sanj: i'm so happy....i haven't seen him for 2 months

Kripa: awww...anyways bye see you tommarow

Sanj: yeap bye

on the other hand Angad is in his room watching TV when he gets a phone call, he looks at the caller id and smiles seeing the name of his bestfriend/ cousin

Angad: hey Prithvi

Prithvi: hey Angd how are you

Angad: gr8....when are you coming back

Prithvi: tommarrow

Angad: what thats gr8 news

Prithvi: yeap....and i want you to meet my girlfriend

Angad: finally your introducing me to her...can't wait to meet her.....at least you could tell me her name

Prithvi: Sa....suddenly someone calls him and he has to hang up

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at the family dinner everyone is sitting down talking....Angad takes Kripa to a corner

Kripa: what

Angad: whens ur friend aka my love of my life coming

Kripa: soon....btw why are you so desperate to meet her

Angad: why do you wanna know....kahin tum jealous to nehi ho rahi

Kripa: jealous and me whatever

Angad: Kripa did i ever tell you that you look so cute when you are mad at me....bilkul ek cute si chipkali

Kripa: Angad how many times do i have to tell you to not call me a chipkali

Angad: sweety....i could call you whatever i want....meri marzi

Kripa: damn you bundar......did i ever tell you that you are the most annoying guy i have ever met

Angad: you forgot to mention the most handsome to

Kripa: whatever

Angad: so you that i'm the most handsome huy you have met

Kripa: Angad shut up....khud ki thareef karka tum ko sharm nehi aati

Angad: sharm.....chipkali....in case you have forgotten you are my fiance and fiance sa kasi sharm

Kripa: Angad theres no point in talking to you

Angad: than why are you

Kripa: you just shut up....and she goes and sits next to her mom ......and Angad sits next to Karthick

suddenly there is a knock on the door and Kripa goes to open it

she comes back with a Sanjana who is holding a kids hand who looks 70 pounds over weight he was holding a bag full of candies, chips and coke cans....he looked between the age of 6 or 7

Gaytri: Kripa is she your friend

Kripa was about to say yes when she remembered that she was supposed to be Angad's fake lover

Kripa: no mom...i don't know her....she said she wants to meet Angad

Angad who was busy playing a game on his cell looks up and looks at the girl standing beside Kripa

Angad: oh so she is my so called fake lover....she is pretty but not as pretty as Kripa.....hey what the hell am i think....i was supposed to hate Kripa....anyways forget....and let the show begin....man if this plan screws up dad's gonna kill me

Naina: beta who are you and how do you know Angad

Sanjana: i think you should ask Angad that

she whispers in Kripas ear when no one is looking at them: who is Angad

Kripa: in front of you

Sanjana looks in front of her and sees three guys standing in a row (they are Dilip, Karthick and Angad)

Sanjana thinking: Damn there are three guys how the hell was i supposed to know which one is Angad....lets do some guessing.....hmmmm let see....it can't be the 50 year old oldy....kripa's parents can't be that cruel to get her married to a bhudda....now that leaves us to two guys (she looks towards Angad) wow that guy is hot.....something must be wrong with Kripa if that guy is Angad and she is doing al this drama to stop the wedding....man that guys so hot and sexy....if i didn't have a boyfriend and wasn't madly inlove with him i would have agreed to marry him right now anywhere....than that leaves us with the other guy.....well he is good looking but looks very boring(karthick)....don't blame Kripa for not marrying him....how the hell could you marry a person....who is boring.....so that must be Angad

Sanjana: jee aap Angad sa poochiya ka mein koun hoon....and she starts to walk towards Karthick thinking he is Angad

Kripa thinking damn sanjana thinks Kharthick jiju is Angad....kuch ka na padaga
than she gets a idea and puches Sanjana towards Angad making it look like a accident

Kripa: sorry...than she looks at Angad and says his name extra loudly.....ummm ANGAD do you know her

Sanjana thinking: that guy is Angad...wow

Angad: yea she is....ummm she is.....woh....her name is
thinking: Kripa at least you could have told me her name....now what do i do

Dilip: who is she Angad

Angad: woh.....than he looks at the coffee table which had a magazine with Rano Mukharjee's picture on the cover

Angad: her name is Babli

both Sanjana and Kripa look at him and think BAbli

Sanjana thinking: out of all the names.....the only name he could give me was Babli......cheeee

Aditya: koun Babli

Sanjana: ji woh mein hoon....Angad won't you introduce me to everyone

Angad: yea....ummm why not....this is my bro and bhabhi....and this is Gaytri aunty and Aditya uncle...Kripa's parents and this is my mom and dad

as soon as Angad said that Sanjana/Babli goes to Dilip first touches his feet and then goes to Naina and touches his feet

Naina: how do you both now each other

Angad: actually mom....woh....we .....me and babli....we....ummmmm

Dilip: whats wrong with you Angad....why can't you answer one simple question without saying ummm

Angad: she is actually mine

Sanjana: i will tell you who i am...i am well lets see ummm yes....i am Angad ex girlfriend....we both were madly in love.....but someone you know like those typical bollywood romance movie villans.....couldn't see our happiness and created misunderstandings between us.....and i went back to California where my parents live with a broken heart.....thinking Angad betrayed me....and after those misunderstandings were cleared....and i came back to India.....and apoligise for not trusting Angad.....but i got a shock that he is engaged to someone....so i found out that everyone was here for dinner and i came here to say sorry to Angad....and ask for a second chance....so yea thats my story

Aditya, Gayatri, Naina and Dilip were shocked after hearing the story and Misthi and Karthick were just standing there enjoying the drama since they know its another of Angad and Kripa's plans to get out of the marriage

naina: i didn't expect this from you and then Dilip joins her and start to yell at Angad and Angad is just standing there with his face down listening to everything

Dilip: well you both can't get back together

Sanj: why

NAina: b/c Angad is marrying Kripa....what ever happened between you and Angad was the past and Kripa is his future

Sanjana: but you can't do this to me

Aditya: why

Sanjana: because.....well because....what will happen to mine and Angad's baby

Dilip: angad what the hell dies she mean by babby

Sanjana: i mean that i'm the mother of angad's child

Dilip who is ready to kill Angad: Angad tell me all this is a lie

Angad scared of his dad: dad woh no it isn't

Naina: wheres the baby

Sanjana points to the kid who has chocolate all over his face and hands filled with junk food

Sanjana: thats mine and Angad's sweet little baby Pinto

Angad thinking: Pinto why thehell would i name my kid Pinto....and how the hell could that fato be my kid....even if is my fake son....still look at me and look at him...Kripa i'm gonna kill you after all this is over

Naina with a shocked expression on her face: he is Angad's son

Sanjana: and mine

Dilip: Angad what the hell is all this....yea tumna kya kiya....mein tumko abhi disown kardoonga

Angad thinking: ooops this is gone abit to far.....if he disowns me i will become a street romeo.....gotta stop this fast....hmmm but how.......kripa i'm gonna get you for getting me in this mess

he then looks at kripa who is sitting on the sofa eating one of Pinto all so known as his fake sons candy....and looking at everyone like they are performing in a play that is dedicated just for her

Sanjana was about to say something when she stops and is baout to scream when she sees the person who just entered


next part: Prithvi's entrance

please tell me if you liked this part or not
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68
wow, I love it. By the way, Who is sanjna, played by.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#69
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha that was soooooooooo funny 😆
Edited by angadkripafan - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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very funny

Cant wait for next part

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