Fan Fic: Hidden Feelings - Page 3

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WOW< AWesome. Comtinue..... 👏 👏 .....
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dat was soooooo awesum
continue soon
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Amazin story...u ROCK....plz continue...SOON.... 👏
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amazing story, great parts 👏 👏 plz cont soon 😊
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here's the next part...

It's been six months now since the Sharma's have moved to India. Misthi and Karthick got married, Adiitya and Dilip decided to merge their business, Angad joined the family business and Angad and Kirpa successfully avoided each other, but cauldn't stop thinking about each other.

Dilip, Naina, Aditya, and Gayatri were sitting out side the Khanna house.

N: mujhe lagta hai humma Kirpa aur Angad ki shaadi kar dani chayi

G: aap aaj shaam ko humara ghar dinner ka liya aai aur hum Kirpa aur Angad ki shaadi ki baat unn sa kartha hai

D: yea that sounds like a good idea

A: ok so decided tonight's dinner at our house

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Angad is in a resturant w/ his friends Akash, Vinay, Rick and Aryan

V: Angad your so lucky....har ladki tera aaga peecha ghoom thi hai.....aur yeha hum ladkioon ka peecha ghoom tha hain aur who hummari tharaf dekh thi bhi nehi

A: that's b/c there is only one Angad.....aur koi mujh jaisa nehi baan sekhta

Akash: but Angad you have dated so many girls....and the longest you have been in a relationship was one week.....wasn't there one girl that with who you wanted a long term relationship

Angad: nope.....i still haven't found a girl with who i could spent the rest of my life with

Vinay: Angad i forgot to tell you something..guess who is came back from New York

Angad: who

Vinay: Manya

Angad totally shocked: WHAT

Ayan confused: who is Manya

Vinay: she is Angad's old girlfriend......totally crazy about him.....when Angad broke up with her.....she found out about who Angad was dating and somehow she found out where he was taking her on a date.she went to that place and started slapping and yelling at the girl....after that she followed Angad everywhere

Angad: she thinks we are meant to be togeter....ek number ki paagal hai....she scares the hell out of me

Vinay: she has been looking for you since she came back

Angad: damn ab mein kya karoo.....woh to mujhe bhi paagal kar da gi

Akash: anyways......forget about that.....want to go to the disco today

Angad: can't i have to go to Aditya uncles house for dinner

Aryan: come after dinner

Angad: fine

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It's eight o'clock and everyone is sitting in the Sharma house talking Kirpa just came back from here friends house.she greets everyone and than coldly says hi to Angad and Angad returns her hi just as coldly

Aditya: Angad, Kirpa mujhe tum dono sa zaroori baat kar ni hai

Angad: ji

Naina: woh hum chata hai ka tum dono ki shaadi ho jaya

Kirpa: kis sa

Dilip: tum dono ki

Angad: what.i'm not marrying this chipkali....nerver.....ever

Kirpa: like i wanna marry u.....will rather marry Raja

Angad conjused: who is Raja

Kirpa: my dog

Angad: what the hell ur comparing me with your dog

Kirpa: of course not......i'm not going to insult Raja by comparing him to you

Gayatri: shut up Kirpa...baat karna ki tameez nehi hai

Kirpa: but mom

Aditya: enough both of you

Dilip: i'm giving bout of you two weeks.....in these two weeks both of you will try to get to know each other...and after these to weeks if both of you decide not to marry each other than......

Naina: than both of your marriage will be fixed with someone else....with sho we say.......an arranged marriage

Angad: mom i don't even you on a blind date with a girl i don't know adn u want me to marry someone who i have never seen or know about

Kirpa: i know i'm not marrying someone i don't know

Naina: well you both know each other

Kirpa: but.......

Dilip: shhhh both of you.....Angad you were doing to go to the disco after dinner.right..take Kirpa with you

Angad: dad i just changed my mind i'm not going to to the disco

Naina: when it you change ur mind

Angad: right now...i mean

Dilip: shut up.....both of you are going thats final

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Angad and kirpa arrive at the disco they hadn't said one word to each other thru out the whole ride to the disco

When they enter all the attention is on Angad and Kirpa's pair......some are commenting on how perfect they look together....Kirpa heres some of them and thinks to herself: what the hell happened to their taste...me look perfect with Angad.....whatever

just then four guys come up to them

Angad: these are my friends Aryan, Akash, Vinay andRick

they say hi and all of them keep on staring at Kirpa

Kirpa: pehla koi ladhi nehi dekhi kaisa dhek raha hain mujhe...then again they are Angad;s friends what can you expect

Angad: shit.hide me.....hide me

Kirpa: what happened

Angad: manya

Kirpa confused: manya

Aryan quickly tells her about Manya's maddness for Angad

Manya comes up to them

Maya: Angad......omg.i've been looking for you since i came back......than she hugs him very tightly......i missed u soooooooo much........i'm soooooo happy now we both can finally be together.....right

Angad: woh.........mein........woh

Manya looks at Kirpa: who is she

Angad: woh hi toh..yea meri fiance hai.....we are getting married

Kirpa totally shocked was about to punch Angad when she see's Pintoa guy who had a crush on her since elemenary school......and still does.......thinking to herself: only way to get rid of him is to make Angad my fake fiance

Kirpa: yea....Nagad's my finace and we are getting married....she than holds Angad's hand

Angad who is totally shocked since he expected the opposite reaction from Kirpa just says: yea

Manya who now has tears in her eyes starts to yell at Kirpa and pulls Angad towards her and says Angad mera hai.....Kirpa see's Pinto walking towarrds her.....takes Angad's other hand and starts to pull him towards herself

Kirpa: Angad mera

Manya grabs his other hand and says Angad mera hai.....now Manya and Kirpa are playing tug o war with Angad each pulling one of Angads arms

Manya: nehi Angad sirk aur sirf mera hai

Kirpa: tum na khaha aur who tumhara ho gaya

Manya: haan

Kirpa: shut up.....me is only mine

Manya: lets ask Angad

they re still pulling him

Kirpa: Angad tell her u and me 4ever

Angad who is close to tears b/c of the pain....manages to weakly say Kirpa

Kirpa: see i told you......she then leaves his arm and sees Pinto approching her.....she goes up to Manya who is still holding Angad's arm tightly

Kirpa: let go of his hand

Manya: no....never.....Angad is only made for me

Kirpa: din't you hear me...lave his hand right now

Manya: gets scared and lets go of his hand

Manya: kirpa.Angad is only my......we will never be yours

Kirpa thinking: what the hell does she see in this bandar.....anyways mujhe kya lana than out aloud: sweety he is only mine and if i ever see you near my man again...than....

Manya: than what

Kirpa: trust me...you don't wanna know

Angad is just standing there with a shocked look on his face

Kirpa sees Pinto crying...... grabs Angad's arm and whispers in his ear: lets get put of here

outside the disco

Angad who is back to normal says to kirpa: Kirpa i didn't know u were that possisive of me

Kirpa: shut up Angad.....i'm very mad right now......the next time i see that Manya..i'm going to smack her face..who hell she thinks she is...threatened me Kirpa Sharma...and than she looks at Angad with a deadly look...and you what kind of girlfriends do you have

Angad: she wasn't my girlfriend...paagal hai woh

Kirpa: shut up

Angad decides its best to shut up and the whole ride back they both don't say a word

Once in side the Sharma Mansion they see everyone sitting laughing and eating sweets

Angad: what happened

Dilip: i'm so happy u both agreed to get married

Angad and Kirpa with a shocked look: what

Gayatri: now don't try to denie it ur friend Aryan called and told us what happened at the disco

Naina: i'm so glad


next part: Angad, Kirpa marriage date is fixed and both in jail


plz tell me if i should coninue or not


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Posted: 20 years ago
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continue soon. i love it.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Both in Jail or shaadi ka jail... 😃 Please continue but on one condition.... let their fighting and arguments also conmtinue... 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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whoa angad and kripa are going to be jail together?
great job please contiue soon! 😉
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Posted: 20 years ago
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awsome loved it!!! hahaha thats funny!! romance in jail?? 😕
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Posted: 20 years ago
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awesum plzz continue
keep it up

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