“Pehli Mulakat” short stry (last part IV)

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: seasplash
wow......u started a new story thats cool......i liked the story till now.........continue soon.... 😳 😳 😳

Hi dear Khubu.... yup this one also a short story... the story is simple with a certain happenign of a day.. hope u like it... and as I was tellign Monika.. in this i can imagine Angad and kripa as chehal and Mahir..... will conitnue soon...

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

Part II

Chehal reaches the restaurant and looks around its crowded.

Chehal: I have never seen this place so crowded. We should have booked our tables before. Socha hamesha to khali rehata hai, & see now there isn't any place to sit. (She looks around for Mahir)

Chehal: Yeh to ab tak nahi nazar arahe hain. (she looks at the time , its 7:40pm) 7:30 ko milenge decide hua, he should be here in few minutes I guess.

(Mahir reaches within 5 minutes. Mahir looks around)

Mahir: Such crowd! kya restaurant discount offer de raha hai? ya free mey (he looks at Chehal standing in the corner…)

Mahir: Chehal…(waves his hand, Chehal looks & both come near each other.)

Mahir: I am very sorry for been late. I hope u will understand, in the excitement of our dinner I was getting confuse on what outfit to select. I am really sorry for keeping u wait.

Chehal: It's alright, can understand. (She felt nice how honestly he admitted his excitement & confusion)

They step together out of the restaurant. Both looking at each other, then looking across the road.

Mahir: We can have dinner at some other place.

Chehal: Ha, kahan chale? That restaurant near the new mall, I have heard its also quite good.

Mahir: As u wish, lets go there! (Both smiling)

Mahir takes his car and Chehal sits in front with him. They try to take a U turn to get to the other side of the road, soon they hear a loud noise, they look in front…Bike had clashed with the speed breaker & an accident took place. The couple on the bike seemed injured in the accident. Mahir couldn't take the u-turn. They come out of the car. Chehal looks at the injured couple, the Man seemed conscious and was injured with bruises, he was wearing an helmet. The women who seemed bleeding was lying in an unconscious state.

Chehal: Oh my god! What an accident! I hope she is alive. Can't see the blood soaked faces (she turns her face) Mahir! I hope the police comes at time to take them to the hospital…(she looks around & Mahir isn't there besides her) She looks with surprise here & there, lastly finds him near the injured couples…She rushes towards Mahir..

Mahir: Dekhiya aap ghabrayiye nahi , maine ambulance aur police ko inform kiya hai. Woh aa rahe honge.

Man: (trying to breadth….) Apu …..Apu…..

(Chehal hears his voice, the blood around his eyes looking at the women with utter pain. He says again with tears filled eyes)Apu …….Apu…

Mahir: Apu?…Apu hai unka naam (pointing at the women who's lying unconscious at distance )Aap phikar mat kijiye, woh theek honge , abhi ambulance ati hai..

He searches from the mobile, home it's written but when he tried no one lifts the phone. The crowd kept watching & gathering. There was traffic jammed & no signs of the police or ambulance. Mahir gets tensed, as the condition of the Man was getting worst, he thought should he take them to the hospital…as he is thinking about the possibilities, Chehal starts weeping ..hearing the Man crying ..Apu ….Apu….Mahir gets angry .

Mahir: Don't cry! If u can't handle get away from here. If u want, take the car & go home! (in harsh tone)

Chehal realises, she has to control her emotions and wipes her tears.

The Ambulance & police Van arrive. They take the couple into the ambulance. The police asks Mahir few Q's, Chehal keeps listening standing near to Mahir. The Man starts calling ..Bhai Bhai..Mahir looks at him and reaches to him..

Man: Baat kahni hai….(as he is been shifted into the ambulance)

Mahir feels he needs to go to the hosiptal, he looks back at Chehal standing.

Chehal: Chale, unhe Aapki jaroorat hai, kya main bhi aapke sath aa sakti hoon.(with a pleasant smile)

Mahir feels extreme warmth in those few words, & he informs the police, takes his car & drives behind them.

Mahir (thinking in his mind): She has been so sweet, She might have got emotional looking at the gruesome site of accident & the man crying, bas woh rone kya lagi , maine use gussa kar diya….Use kitna bura laga hoga. I should have taken care and should have been sensitive towards her… I am really not good for her.(he feels extremely guilty within)

Chehal (thinking in her mind): His eyes look so alert and focused, how much concerned he is about others. Such a brave & helpful person. The crowd kept watching none came forward to help. He needs someone who's as dynamic as he is. May be I am no match for him.

Both r a bit upset, they feel they r no match for each other. Though the amount of respect they started having has increased tremendously. They drive away silently to the hospital, thinking about each other.

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monika

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Hi Monika... how r u doing.. sab kuch theek na... hey am glad u r enjoying my short stories.... yup chehal & Mahir.... I can imagine angad and Kripa in this one...hehe... what u say?😉

oh tum ne mere man ki baat keh di bhoomi 👏👏

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monika

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

😭 😭 😭 oh god yeh kya hua dono ki pehli mulakat mein , dono eak doosre ko leke pareshaan ho rahe hai sooooo sweeet.

I Love these lines soooo much. 👏 👏

Mahir (thinking in his mind): She has been so sweet, She might have got emotional looking at the gruesome site of accident & the man crying, bas woh rone kya lagi , maine use gussa kar diya….Use kitna bura laga hoga. I should have taken care and should have been sensitive towards her… I am really not good for her.(he feels extremely guilty within)

Chehal (thinking in her mind): His eyes look so alert and focused, how much concerned he is about others. Such a brave & helpful person. The crowd kept watching none came forward to help. He needs someone who's as dynamic as he is. May be I am no match for him.

Mindblowing update 👏

Edited by monikaseth - 17 years ago

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sonali

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

yup will post the first part soon...waise whats ur name?

Sonali ..😊

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Daebak

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 lovely parts 😳

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Bhoomi

@bhoomikauttam

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Posted: 17 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: monikaseth
😭 😭 😭 oh god yeh kya hua dono ki pehli mulakat mein , dono eak doosre ko leke pareshaan ho rahe hai sooooo sweeet.

I Love these lines soooo much. 👏 👏

Mahir (thinking in his mind): She has been so sweet, She might have got emotional looking at the gruesome site of accident & the man crying, bas woh rone kya lagi , maine use gussa kar diya….Use kitna bura laga hoga. I should have taken care and should have been sensitive towards her… I am really not good for her.(he feels extremely guilty within)

Chehal (thinking in her mind): His eyes look so alert and focused, how much concerned he is about others. Such a brave & helpful person. The crowd kept watching none came forward to help. He needs someone who's as dynamic as he is. May be I am no match for him.

Mindblowing update 👏

Hi Monika... yup one of my friend had told she liked this bit scene.. ehheh looks like this scene has been a lot of people fav... I just tried to portray how we can be good when our guilt can make us feel we r so bad.... .. 😃..

am glad monika u r enjoying this one.. too.. will post the next one soon...😃

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: togepe30
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 lovely parts 😳

thanks Vandu.... lovely...hmm... next part... dekhey kya love leke atta hai...😉

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#19

Part III

They reach the hospital, the injured man is been treated and is out of danger, by looking at his driving license they come to know his name is Ashotosh Sinha, while the women is operated as she has serious head injuries &wasn't protected by a helmet.

Ashutosh: (to Mahir): Bhai…jara mere bacho ko leke ajao…(he still is not able to speak properly) woh address mere wallet mey hai…us jagh bus ayegi,….. picnic pe …gaye…(saying each word after much pause..)

Mahir understands that his children need to be brought from the said address, they must have returned from the picnic.

Mahir: Apu apki ki patni ka naam hai?

Ashutosh: Haan, Uska naam Apeksha…hai…. Apu bulata hoon,…. jhagda kar liya….theek se Bike chala nahi paya..woh bhi mujhse naraz thi….mujhe pakad kar nahi bethi…Apu…Apu…theek to hai na? woh….(he cries, the nurse comes & give him injections, he goes into sleep)

Mahir looks for the address from the wallet. He looks at Chehal …

Mahir: I think I will get late, should I drop u home. ( with a very concerned look)

Chehal: Don't worry I will not cry again, I will accompany u. I hope u don't mind.(smiling)

Mahir: I know U r a brave girl. Sure, lets go. (with a broad smile, every time she smiled, Mahir's heart melted)

They both drive to pick up the children. Both converse about the accident

Mahir: I am sorry, I just was trying to make Ashutoshji feel safe & better. Neither police nor the ambulance had reached, me was a bit tensed. I m really sorry, I know it was my mistake, I should have cared about ur sentiments…I m Sorry!

Chehal: I can understand. No need to say sorry, actually my reaction at that point of time, the situation was really sensitive, I know I should have been sensible to understand that. Actually u know we call my elder sister who's married & stays in Dubai, her pet name is Apu…her name is Aparna…When Ashutoshji called, I suddenly got emotional, it was just as I imagined my sister in such condition, what would I do…?

Mahir: U r very matured. I know my reactions were not sensible as well. U know Aparna di did call me & spoke to me.

Chehal: What? Di called u ?

Mahir: Yes, She inquired, about my likes-dislikes, I think it was phone interview (laughs). She was very sweet and it was a pleasure to talk.

Chehal: I know how she is, She must have asked about 25 Q's in 5 minutes. (laughs)

Both r smiling, soon they reach the said place. They see no parents or Bus. They ask the watch man, he tells them the bus left, two children r inside waiting. They go inside with Ashutosh's driving license. Informs them about the accident. The children r playing near by, both look so cute. Both r boys, looking quite similar. The teacher informs, they r twins, their name's r Umang & Tarang!

Chehal: Hi, Umang & Tarang.(smiling)

Umang & Tarang: Hi Aunty…

Mahir: Hi children, chalo ghar chale…hum tumhe lene aye hain.

Umang: Hum chirf mamma ke shath jayenge..

(They look out for their parents. Both children start feeling alone & scared without their parents.)

Chehal: Mamma Papa ne hi hume bheja, actually woh arahe the aur unki Bike kharab hogaye, to Papa ke dost hain Yeh (pointing towards Mahir)Papa ne kaha unhe Aapko ghar le aye..J …(talking softly with much love & care)

Tarang: Bike khalaab ho gayi…? mujhe nahi achi lagti Bike!. ..

Chehal: Haan, Aap chalo hum to gadi leke aye hain…(talking excitedly, smiling & takes them close)

Umang: Gaadi, Car! Chalo. (They run towards the car)

Mahir is so glad how Chehal made them comfortable. Mahir drives the car, children r sitting on the back seat, happily looking outside & r having a great time…unaware of anything, except their enjoyment of sitting in a car.

Mahir: r u fond of children.? (looking at the children from the rare view mirror, smiling)

Chehal: Yes..(says very excitedly) & U?

Mahir: Me as well.

They look towards each other, realizing what they r talking about. They feel a bit awkward. With a smile they start looking at the opposite sides to hide their faces, as both r blushing…

The Hospital is 5 mintues away, Mahir realises how they will explain the children. He asks Chehal, she feels 1st they need to contact & inquire Ashutosh & Apeksha's condition. Doctors at the hospital inform them that they r both unconscious. Ashutosh is under medication & Apeksha is still under observation. The Children do inform they have their Nana & Naani here while Dadi stays in villlage.

Suddenly Mahir realises the Wallet with him, his company address is there, he calls. He gets to know the number of Ashutosh's in-laws. They decide to hand over the children to them. They inform them on phone, Father in-law goes to the hospital. Mahir & Chehal drive away to Ashutosh in-laws house. They reach & the children r happy to meet their Naani, they Thank Mahir & Chehal for the drive….they r much happy after a great picnic & long drive in the car. Mahir & Chehal r relived as children r in safe hands.