“Pehli Mulakat” short stry (last part IV) - Page 5

Originally posted by: ssh57

Nice story or rather it felt more like a real life incident. Names were very nice - umang , tarang and especially the heroines chehal. As I have read so many of your better stories I feel this wasn't to that level. I hope I didn't hurt u. sorry. I know that no mother likes to hear that her child is not good. For u each of your stories must be like your baby. But I thought as a writer u should know a reader's honest opinion.

Hi, Am happy u liked the story concept.. it looked real .. i wanted it to be half a day incident which would be sweet simple.. names am glad up till now u have liked all the character names ...Hmmm so u felt this story is not up the par with other stories that i have written.. oh ok.. this is a story whcih i wrote in my start may be this was the 4 story.. I am not at all hurt dear... i think when u say u like my other storie more than this one.. why woudl i feel bad... I thnk everyone had likign to certain stories and certain charcters touch u deeply... many of my readers have liked this story much more than few other.. so its all readrs heart which story has touched more.... for me its not just my baby.. but my confusion , my nervousness before i am posting some story.. like Advika wasa story where i felt readers may disagree and may be feel disappointed or may be zindgi ek safar they may read and feel sad.. which i didnt want... so readers not too happy with a certain story is ok.. but reader dispapointed with a story efects... but I do learn why what happened..

Ur honest opinion surely helps me to learn and understnad myself as a writer.. i thnk i get to know more about what can be disliked or what can be repetative while readign for a reader and what must have had a ok factor . i will try to work on it and make it more real and engrossing .. 😃

heyyy bhoomi
this was a really nice short story
just loved taruns helping nature n mahirs caring
ur stories always leaves me amazed

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

heyyy bhoomi
this was a really nice short story
just loved taruns helping nature n mahirs caring
ur stories always leaves me amazed

Hi Seema,

thank god this topic is not closed...!!...
hey i loved this story soo very real n touchin....
keep it up 😊

and evn ur other story " Dil ki Baatein" is simply awesome d way u've described suvi's and ankur's marriage is brilliant and d quote @ d end was soo very true ..... (couldn't cmnt there coz topic is closed 😔....)

i mean all ur stories have a meaning attached to thm and d emotions n feelings r so pure n ethereal
i'm really really moved by them....very touching indeed....

Hats off to u Bhoomi di and ur writing skills 😊

-Fatima

Originally posted by: charming.angel

thank god this topic is not closed...!!...
hey i loved this story soo very real n touchin....
keep it up 😊

and evn ur other story " Dil ki Baatein" is simply awesome d way u've described suvi's and ankur's marriage is brilliant and d quote @ d end was soo very true ..... (couldn't cmnt there coz topic is closed 😔....)

i mean all ur stories have a meaning attached to thm and d emotions n feelings r so pure n ethereal
i'm really really moved by them....very touching indeed....

Hats off to u Bhoomi di and ur writing skills 😊

-Fatima