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Posted: 17 years ago
so sweet love the interactions between Armi and Paddy...ohh a race between Shashank and Armaan...whos gonna win??? 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was amazinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue sooon
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Posted: 17 years ago
ooohhh...Race??..Interesting...This is gonna be good...Plz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks for the update please continue soon

Daulat Aur Sohrat sabke Pas Hai,
Khushiya Aur Ghum Sabke Naseeb Mein Hai,
Pyar Aur Nafrat Sabke Dil Mein Hai,
Par Khush-naseeb Hai Hum kyonki Tum Jaisa Dost Hamare Pas hai
Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 40:

The race is on

Both drivers are very confident of their skills and aim at finishing it off in style

Shashank races first and Anjie goes

C'mon dad, u can do it

Faster!

And looks at Atul staring away at her from the other car

Muski goes

Kya gaadi chalatey hai aap sir !

Armaan to gaya kaam se

Keerti smiles and agrees with Muskaan with a not bothered look

Armaan looks at Riddhima longingly and so wishes she was with him in his car
Riddhima looks back at him, unable to concentrate on the driving and thinks to herself

Ye mai kaisi musibat me pad gayi hoo ?

Yaha papa aur waha Armaan!

Dono mere liye ek barabar hai,kiska saath doo?

Muskaan says

Arey Riddhima ,kya sochne lagi ?

Dekho na tumhare papa kitni mast speed se gaadi uda rahe hai

Armaan ti to chutti kar di ,yaar

Chak de phatte!

Shashank then goes

Nahi Dr.Muskaan!

Armaan bhi bohot achi gaadi chala rahe hai

Lekin lagta hai ki shayad unka concentration kahi aur hai isliye agey nahi bad paa rahe

Otherwise he is very capable of going ahead

Riddhima gets conscious of Shashank and stops looking at Armaan in the fear of getting caught

Shubh is trying hard to see Keerti and regrets sitting in the middle

And is so annoyed that both Rahul and Atul are blocking his view from both the sides

He doesn't give up and keeps trying to catch a glimpse of his lady love somehow

Anjali and the other girls cheer for Shashank

Riddhima cheers half heartedly

Armaan now gives up on the idea of racing altogether and slows down drastically

Atul shouts

Arey Armaan!

Ye kya kar raha hai yaar?

Speed itni kam kyu kardi?

Jaldi se bada speed ,warna wo jeet jayenge yaar!

Rahul goes

Kya hua Armaan?

Bike racing me to bada champion bana phirta hai tu

Ab car racing me kyu peechey rehna chahta hai?

Shashank sir ki driving se dar to nahi gaya tu?

Challenge kiya hi kyu,jab itni jaldi haar maan ni thi?

And looks at Shanshank's car now almost in their front

And Atul sticks his head out to wave to Anjali in the mirror

Shubh doesn't give a damn about the race and is only interested in watching Keerti
And continues with his attempts ignoring all the manic

Padma slowly says to Armaan while the others are busy

Armaan! Tum jaan boojh ke peeche to nahi reh rahe?

Ya phir aisi baat to nahi ki tum Dr.Shashank ko jeetney de rahe hoo jaan boojh ke?

Agar tum aisa kar rahe ho to mat karo,

Kyuki Dr.Shashank ko ye asani se pata chal jayega

Armaan is shocked to know Paddy has just read his mind so well

And goes

Ab Riddhima ke dad se meri kya competition ?

Mujhe acha nahi lagega agar wo haar gaye to

Aur waise bhi ye race ka idea unka hi tha

Maine to bas unka sath deney ke liye thodi si racing ki

Paddy goes

Fikar ,mat karo Armaan!

Is race ka tumhare aur Riddhima ke rishtey par koi asar nahi padega

Ye meri guarantee hai!

Ab speed badao and dikhado unhe

Ki hum bhi kisi se kam nahi

and

May the best man win!

And ,mai shayad jaanti hoo ki who's best in this game and smiles sweetly

Armaan again is pleasantly amazed with her open mindedness and fair attitude
And as per her advice he shifts the gear up and races ahead in a wizzzzzzzzzzz

Atul and Rahul love the sudden gush of speed

and booo! the girls as they pass them leaving them far behind

The girls get annoyed with Armaan beating them in a blink and

Pump up Shashank to increase his speed

Riddhima now smiles whole heartedly

Muski and Anjali with a shy Keerti cheer Shashank

While Riddima secretly enjoys Armaan's victory

They then after a long distance come parallel from the other side this time

The boys were enjoying their mini win

And singing

Robarooo!

With Paddy happy that Armaan is being himself

Shashank looks at her and asks her if she's enjoying herself with the boys

Singing out loud

Paddy covers her ears and laughs at Atul and Rahul going crazy

Rahul's gaze meets Muskaan's while him and Atul were singing and dancing away in full swing

Muskaan gives Rahul a 'whatever' look

Rahul smiles and feels sorry for her and stops singing

And stares at her

Muski likes the way he abrubtly stopped singing only to make her feel better

And smiles at him with a Thank you look

Anjali goes

Chaliye dad,jaldi kijiye

Lagta hai Armaan abhi poora interest le raha hai race me

Dad plz,warna Armaan bohot ziddi hai

He's so adamant you know about winning

Let it be basketball,bike race or car racing

He just can't take defeat!

Shashank goes

Anjali,calm down

I'm trying

Aur rahi baat Armaan ke stubborn nature ki

I like it !

Beta, jeetney ke liye ziddi hona achi baat hai

Infact, I think it's a very positive way to deal with challenges

It wil help you become a successful doctor and good human being too

I quite like the boy,

He has the right attitude and a good mindset to life!

I am proud to have him as a part of Sanjeevani!

Riddhima listens to every word Shashank says so carefully

As if Armaan was being honoured in a ceremony and she was with him together ,recieving the appreciation .

She listen to him very attentively

also to narrate the whole thing back to Armaan with all the exact words her dad used to praise her man

She gets so excited to let Armaan know that her father likes him and

Would have no problem in giving his daughter away

and gets more happy with the thought of Armaan's euphoria when he finds out about Shashank's opinion about his future damad

She thinks that now they're almost there

and this relation is ready to go public!

Muski notices Riddhima's happiness and smiles

And wishes the very best of luck to them

Anjali wasn't paying much attention to Shashank's views about Armaan

And all she was bothered about was beating Armaan

Then suddenly Shashank takes a lead

And Anjali screams out loud excitedly

Atul goes

Armaan!

Phir se?

Kuch kar yaar

Itna agey akey haar nahi saktey hum yaar

Armaan gets irrirtated and goes

Abey yaar champ

Isse zyada speed nahi kar sakta mai

Hum koi formula one racing nahi kar rahe

Aur hamari bharat ki sadke koi racing ka track nahi hai

And says sadly

Aur waise bhi good luck to us gaadi me hai!

And bites his tongue to let his frustration out

Padma laughs at his slip of tongue

And Atul goes

Ha yaar,Anjali meri good luck us gaadi me jo baithi hai

Shubh goes dreamily

Ha Keerti is very lucky

Rahul grins at the two and thinks to himself

Muskaan is my good luck charm

Both cars are running neck to neck now

The expectations from both sides are real high

Both drivers trying their best

Top gear reached

The tension is soaring

And

Shashank takes the lead and zooms away…………..


Only to stop after a short stretch




To find out why?
Watch this space for the next update
Guys, I haven't slept the whole night
Was just watching the old episodes back to back
Its almost sunrise and I'm still awake
Mera husband mujhe maarney wala hai subah,jaldi nahi uthi to
That's if I get to sleep at all
Anyways,enuf about my insomnia
Please reply guys,and sorry for any mistakes,I was typing in a dark room
I 'll be waiting for your comments on this part
Take care
Love u all loads
Hina.

Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
superb job!!!!! can't wait for the next one!!! and thx for the pm!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
ooo...excellent job...wonder what happened to shashank's car!
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice one thank u please continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Too good hina di!! 👏 sorry I didn't comment on earlier parts cos I don't get internet on weekends, I acess IF in the office, where I spend most of my time..... ok...I loved the way the boys tried to scare the girls but landed in trouble themselves...then the moments Armi/Ridz spent togather, that was icing on the cake...you are so romantic....the next day morning was hilarious, when the girls tried to them the guys get out....the yoga step....too good....finally the race bit...you have described with such maturity the whole thing...Arman racing up...then slowing down to please his future sasurji...then again racing cos sasumom gave her blessing....very very nice....enjoyed reading each & every part...great work....I hope you did catch some sleep....thanks so much for keeping us entertained....take care

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