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Posted: 17 years ago
lol how sweet so funny 😳 cont soon pls
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Posted: 17 years ago
ohh hina it is awesome 👏
cant wait for the next parttt
i hope ridz will sit with armaan in the car 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Part 39:

Come on girls,get into my car

says Shashank

Padma goes,

Aur mai kaha baithoongi?

Anjali gives Atul a sorry look and walks to her dad's car

Atul goes after her

Rahul stops him and says

Suna nahi tuney?

Unhone kaha girls,tu girl hai?

Atul goes

Nahi yaar!

Lekin unki girl ka boy to hoo na mai

To mujhe uske saath hi baithna chahiye na?

Rahul goes

Chup chaap Armaan ke sath baith ja

Isse pehle ki Shashank sir tujhpe shak karna shuru karde

Atul cries like a baby and goes

Yaar!
Ye Anjali ke papa bhi ajeeb hai

Unko apni beti ka itna bhi khayaal nahi

Dekh kitni udaas lag rahi hai Anjali,mujhse door hoke

Muskaan hears Atul's plea and smiles at how much Atul loves Anjali

Then gives Rahul a sad look before separating

Rahul goes to Atul looking at Muskaan

Dekh Atul,hum sab sirf kuch der ke liye alag honey waley hai yaar

Mumbai jaake to tum sab phir se sath hongey na?

and looks at Muskaan,as if consoling her more than Atul

Muskaan gives him a 'I understand' look and smiles at Rahul lovingly then walks to Shashank's car

Riddhima who was standing next to Armaan's car when Shashank gave his upsetting idea starts walking to her dad's car

Armaan comes from the back of the car,pulls her to the back,where they can have a quicky

Riddhima says
Armaan!
Koi ajayega!

Armaan says
Riddhima,plz tum koi bahana banado na
Plz mere sath meri gaadi me baith jao
Plz plzz,I beg u

Riddhima goes
Nahi Armaan!
Papa nahi manengey
Aur phir mai kya bahana banaoo?

Armaan turns away and makes a cross face
Riddhima pulls his cheeks and goes
Awwwwwwwwwwww!
Tum jab gussa hotey ho na
To chote se cute se bache lagtey ho!

Armaan smiles and goes
Tum phir se bacho ke baare me sochney lagi?

and says teasingly

Phir to chai peene jaldi ana padega !
Kyu?

Pulls her close and holds her face and says

Waise Sasur jee to lagta hai coffee petey hai nai?

Riddhima smiles and goes

Ha!

Lekin is baar chai pee lengey!

and goes

Ok ab mujhe chodo
Papa wait kar rahe hongey

Armaan goes
Thik hai jao!
goes close to her face and says

Pehle ek kiss ......

and goes to kiss her

Riddeema!........

shouts Paddy

Riddhima pushes Armaan way and runs

Haa!
Maa ,mai yaha hoo

Bas wo saman Armaan ki gadi se nikaal rahi thi

Paddy goes

Tumhara saman Armaan ki gaadi me kyu rakha tumne?

Sab ladkiya Dr.Shashank ki gaadi me jaa rahi hai beta

Riddhiam goes

Haa!
Wo maine galti se Armaan ki gaadi me saman rakh diya tha

Chaliye!

Paddy goes

Us gaadi me to jagah hi nahi hai!

Armaan grabs the opportunity and says

Tu phir

Riddhima ,tum meri gaadi me hi ajao

Aur sister Padma us gaadi me baith jayengi

Kyu ,Padma aunty?

Padma smiles and goes

Kyu na Riddhima us gaadi me jaye sab ladkiyo ke sath

aur

Aur mai tumhari gaadi me ajaoo?

Armaan goes unwantedly

Ha !ye bhi thik hai

Sab girls ek sath ho jayengi phir,good idea!

Laiye,mai aapka saman meri gaadi me daal deta hoo!

and comes to take her bags

Padma goes

Sorry Armaan!

Mujheh pata hai ki tum Riddhima ko sath lena chahte they apne

Lekin,baki sab ke liye fair nahi tha na ye

Isliye maine Riddhima ko us gaadi me chej diya

Hope you understand!

Armaan smiles and completely understands her reasoning and says

Sure! No problem!

Koi baat nahi!

Padma whispers

Aur waise bhi agey bohot maukey ayengey Riddhima ko drive par lejane ke

Ab jo tum chai peene aa rahe ho!

and smiles

Armaan loves his Sasuma and loves her attitude and caring nature to bits

Armaan says

Aiye!


Riddhima looks at them from a distance and
smiles at both of them and loves their cute interaction everytime

Shashank goes

Is everyone here ?

Chalo girls get into the car

Late ho rahe hai!

Anjali quickly says

Dad ,mai aapke sath agey wali seat par baithoongi!

Shashank goes

Ok!Ok!

Anjali runs to give Nani a goodbye hug and says

Mai aapko fone karoongi agey ke plan ke baare me!
Bye Nani!
I'll miss You!

Nani says
Apna khayal rakhna aur apna maksad poora karna and they do their little friendship thingy

Riddhima hugs Bua and says Good bye!

and goes and sits at the back behind Anjali

Keerti sits in the middle and Muskaan on the other end behind Shashank

Nani and Bua the go to Armaan's car and

Say good bye to the boys

and both hug Padma and say

Apna aur Shashank ka khayaal rakhna!

Shubh and Atul laugh at them

Then get into the car

with Padma in the front with Armaan

and Atul behind Armaan and Shubh in the middle

and Rahul on behind Paddy

Seatbelts on

Bua and Nani move away and wave to all of them

Shashank gives Armaan a good luck thumbs up

Armaan smiles and does the same

and The Race begins

Zooooooooooooooooooooom................




Hey ,hope u all liked this part
Sorry to have been late again
Plz leave your comments
and tell me if you enjoyed it
Take care
Love u all
Hina



Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wowwwwwwwww that was soooooooooo nice n i agree with the arrangement.... so now armi and shashank are racing hmmm.... shashank and race 😛 interesting... i luv it no pairs together..not even shash and padma wowwwwww.... toooooooooo gooooood

continue soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

wow diii...loved it....but yeh kya...the race begins....heheheheh mujhe toh laga...armaan jeet jayega.....heheheheh lets see now who wins....damad ya sausrjee....heheheheheh haarna toh sasurjee ko padega...warna armi ko ridz kaise milegi😆......cont ssoooon sooon sooon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😉

Edited by komalsirwani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Guys,

Was the update so bad?
Or are all of u enjoying the weekend a bi too much?
Plz reply if u've read the latest update!
Thanks
Edited by hinanaziri - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey ive jus read all of your ff, its really good, and im so interested in it, lookin forward to the update hope its soon take care

Sania 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was so cute!!! can't wait for the next one!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Yaar Hina, aisa kyoun sochti ho ke update itna acha nahin hai. Tumhara toh har update ek se bar kar ek hota hai!
👏 👏 👏

I love the fact that you are moving all the love stories together at the same time, it make it all the more fun. I love the real moments you give.........even the bit where Shashank, being the protective Dad, says girls in my car! 😉

The last few comedy updates have been just as good and worth waiting for as the romantic and hot updates! Kasam se, mein jhoot nahin bol raheee 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG i missed the last part, how can i? shame on me 😆 actually i went shopping so sorry di for the late reply

the parts were amazing and really funny 😆
AR to koi bhi mauka nahi chodte romance karne ka ha............
naughty kids 😆
can't wait for the race, really desperate to know who wins 😃 😃 😃 i hope it's armaan 😉
plz update soon
love heena 😊

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