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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
great update.can't wait 2 see them sharing there special friendly talks.plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update very soooooooooooooooooon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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PART 3
Thnks a loooooot for ur comments guys… it really helps, believe it or not…. :D:D:D

Hmm… continued
Recap : Armaan and Ridz meet each other after a long time and Ridz is there in LA for some exchange programme for 1 month and is in the same hospital as Armaan… and armaan persuades ridz to stay at his house seeing tht they are best friends(she was staying in a hotel b4)… ab aage…


( a lil'bit of part2 included to give a continuation (recap))

Ridz- hugs him and holds her ears making an innocent puppy face and says – Lekin main….


Armaan- Lekin tum kyaa??? Tum mere ghar mein hi rahogi and that's it !!! Duty ke baad hum tumhaara luggage lekar ghar chelenge.. ok??? Aur phir bahut saari baatein bhi batani hai tumko? Ok? While grinning…

R – OK !!! DONE !!! grinning !!!


And both go to their respective duties!!!

After a long tiring day, they go to their locker room and put their lab coats and other things away.

Armaan – Chalein basket?? he said grinning

Ridz – Haan chalo…. She replies with a smile

They walk out of the hospital and Ridz misses a step and is about to fall but Armaan catches her from her waist. Both go into a eye-lock session for abt 15 seconds and both come out of their tance and straighten and Armaan says:

Armaan – Basket, sach mein, in 6 saalon mein tum bilkul nahi badli ho... Abhi bhi bin dekhe hi chalti ho kyaa?

Ridz – Oh shut up Armaan !!! Badle to tum bhi nahi ho… Pehle bhi mujhe bachaate the, ab bhi bachate ho… Kyun, haina ??? she says smiling to herself…

Armaan – Woh …. Umm… Arre ab chalo bhi, yahin par saari baatein karne ka irrada hai kyaa?

Ridz – Haan haan to chalo

They walk towards the car and go to tht random XYZ hotel in which Ridz's luggage was kept.
They go to Ridz's room and Armaan picks up the luggage , loads it in his car and they leave for his place…


AT ARMAAN'S PLACE… IT'S QUITE HUGGEE !!!!

Armaan shows Ridz her room, puts her luggage down and Ridz says

Ridz – Thnx Armaan !!!Oops I mean – dumbo…

Armaan – Smiles at the word "DUMBO" but then makes an angry face and says – Basket, tum apna promise tod rahi ho…

Ridz – confused look and says – Kaunsa waala promise??

Armaan – arrreeeee… Best friends mein…

Armaan and Ridz TOGETHER - NO SORRY, NO THNK U !!!! and both laugh…

Ridz – oh sor ( was abt to say sorry)….. I mean, chalo I wanna c ur room…

Armaan – smiles and says – sure, chalo… takes her to his room which is right next door… It's a pretty cool room with posters and pics (lots of childhood ones, functions, bithhdays- (most of the pics had her in them)) and a bit of mess … lol:😆 😆

They sit on his bed and Armaan takes out a small gift box from his bedside table

Armaan - he says while handing her the gift box- – Yeh tumhaare liye laaya tha, yahaan aane se pehle dena chahta tha lekin bhool gaya…and smiles cutely 😳

Ridz giggles slightly and begins to open the gift box…. 😆

Thts it 4 now guys
THE GIFT IS A HUUUUGE SURPRISE CUMING UP IN THE NEXT PART…… 😉
IF I GET ENUF COMMENTS, I WILL CONTINUE 2DAY ITSELF ….

HOPE U GUYS LIKED IT……PLZ COMMENT… I worked vry hard for it guys… plzzzz!!!!!
If u hv any suggestions, plz PM me…. And dun 4get to comment frnkly
Tc
tajju

Edited by Cutie_tajju - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
hey tajju
wonderful part
👏
thanx for pm
plz update one long part
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
👏
gr8 cont soon
its damn cute 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
PLZZZ COMMENT GUYS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭 😭 😭
its nt tht baaddd is it???????????????? 😕
i worked very hard 4 it... and dunt 4get its mi 1st 1 everrr so plzzz there is plenttyyy of room for improvements....
plzzz guys suggestions and frank comments are most welcum!!!!!!
and if u hv any suggestions, just PM me...
tnnks
TC
TAJJU 😊 😉 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36

Pleeeasseee comment !!!!

pleeeeeeeeeaseeeeeeeeee....

wud u like me to continue or not????????

tell me franklii.......

pleaaseee

tc

tajju

Edited by Cutie_tajju - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
hey wow yaar i hv jst read ur all prts nd i must say yaar it ws mindblowng yaar superb vryyyyyyyyy vryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy nce ff it ws superb i lvd it yaar
wow armaan nd ridz bst buddies wow grt cnt wait fr ur nxt prt
cont sooooooooooooon
luv yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
GUYS M NT RECEIVING ENUF COMMENTS !!!!!!!
M SOOOOOOOO SAAAAAD !!!!!
PLZZ TELL ME IF ITS BAD OR NOT !!! 😕
thos hu want me to continue, next part will b up tonight or tomorrow !
tc
tajju
I NEED COMMENTS PPL !!!!
I WORK VERY HARDDDD 4 THIS FF !!!!!!PLEEEEASSEEEE>..
at least tell me if i shud continue or nt.....or whether u like this FF or not......PLEEASEEE... its an humble request.....
it onli takes a minute !!!!!wud rili appriciate ur comments ppl!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
hey tajju
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww..............
dat was such a cuteeeeeeeeeeee prt yaar
cho cho sweeeeeeeeetttttttttt 😃 jus luved it 😳
n plz thoda bada likho na
cont super sooooooooooonn
luv ya n tak care
mahru
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: mahi4u

hey tajju
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww..............
dat was such a cuteeeeeeeeeeee prt yaar
cho cho sweeeeeeeeetttttttttt 😃 jus luved it 😳
n plz thoda bada likho na
cont super sooooooooooonn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

THNKS A LOOT MAHRU !!!

i was chooo sad.. tht no one was commenting

so plzz tell me shud i continue or not???

tc

tajju

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