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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Very nice!!

But GS matlab...General Secretary ya girls samachari 😆 😆 !!!


And if they are science students so shouldn't they have taken up science subjects????

he he, very funny,girls samachari😆😆,padhte chalo, sab pata chal jayega,thanks for u'r comment

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Now,Naina properly looked at the person infront of her.very handsome & youthful face,but his personality & eyes were more striking to her.Something new in his eyes,uske aankhon main ek aag hai.He was wearing a simple black shirt & Jeans,& carried a bag.
Raj- Fresher ho who to dikh raha hai, naam kya hai tumhara?
Naina(completely lost)- hmm
Raj- hey what is u'r name?
Naina- haa,ohhhh,naina…. Naina Das
Raj- ,agar bapas yeh log kuch bhi karne ki kohsish ki to mujhe batana,ok
Naina- …………
Raj- lagta hai tum kafi kam bolti ho,khair welcome to the collg
Naina- Thanks,but aisi koi baat nahin hai
Raj- ok, main chalta hu,best of luck for u'r first class
Rajveer came out from the class room,bahar aate hi Raj dekta hai uske samne Arjun & Nandini khada hai.Raj walked ahead towards them.
Raj- If I am not wrong tumlog 3rd ki student ho,matlab sabse seniors,bacche nahin ho,hai na?to thora responsible bhi ho jao,sahi & galat ka fark karma sikho.
Nandini- tum yaha hamare insult karne aaye ho?
Raj- INSULT,oh my god.. meaning pata hai,? tumhari dictionary main hai yeh word?mujhe nahin lagta.Khair yeh sab harkat main collg main bilkul tolerate nahin karunga.Next time agar maine dekha to…
Arjun- kya kar loge?priniple ke paas ja kar complain karoge??
Raj- Nahin,bilkul Nahin,u know Arjun main Gandhiji ko bhi manta hoon,Netaji Subash ko bhi manta hu,main na tumhare shakal ka geography badal dunga,tab yeh Nandini jiske tune par tum dance karte ho kuch nahin kar payegi.
Nandini- kis baat ki tumhe itna gamand hai?GS hone ka?
Raj- look u,mere pass basically itna waqt nahin ha ki main tumlogo ke sath yaha khade ho kar faltoo batein discuss karu,kaam hai,maine apna point samjha diya hai,baaki tum logo ke haath main hai,agar nahin mane,to anjaam ke liye bhi tyair rahena.tum log jante ho na main jo bolta hu woh karta hu,baad main mat kehna main warn nahin kiya,main nahin chata last year koi jhagra ho,chalta hu.
Nandini- samajta kya hai apne aap ko???
But Raj already started walking.
Raj took out his mobile,& dialed a number.
Raj- uffff, not reachable,pata nahin Alekh kaha reh gaya?hey Rony Alekh ko dekha??
Rony- Nahin re,ja dekh class main hoga shayad.
Raj- Alekh aur class,match nahin kar raha hai Alekh & Canteen best match hai.

After sometimes later,someone called him from behind.

Person- hey Raj
Raj- Alekh, itna late,kaha tha tu?mobile kya hua?recharge nahin kiya kya??
Alekh- arre puch mat kal mobile paani ki tanki main gir gaya,tab se bilkul slient ho gaya hai.ab new mobile lene ka soch rahi hu,but pehle kanjus baap ko patana parega.
Raj- tub hi na,by the way yeh hamara final year hai,thora to serious ho ja yaar
Alekh- hmm,hum Chemistry final yaar pe hai. To raj is final year main kuch real life chemistry na ho to chemistry ka badnaam ho jayega.
Raj- class main chale
Alekh- who to jayengehi, kadam kadam baraye chal,class taraf jaldi chal.
Raj- very funny,chal.


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Posted: 17 years ago
#33

hii madhu..

main bas abhi exam se aayi aur tumhaara ff padha aur maza aa gaya 😳 😳 😳 wow yaar bahot accha tha,raj ka role kya likha hai ekdam zakaash 😉 😉 😉 naina k to hosh uda gaye 😆 😆 😆 waise raj ne kya daata nandini aur arjun ko 😆 😆 😆 i love ur this part.awesome 👏 👏 👏 👏 but yaar itanaa chota part😭😭plzz thoda bada karo na.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
bahut hi accha tha..............aur naina toh gayi samjo 😉 😆 ..........also good dialouges 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Very nice!!Even though not much development!!!But Aalekh was very funny!!!

Aur Naina ka toh hosh hi ud gaya Raj ko dekhke!!!Haiiii!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
very interesting update.but it was too short.anyways thanku soo much for this faaaaaaaabulous update.too good
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
madhu it's a fantastic part

raj ka josh dekhke naina ki to hosh i ur gaye.....

it's lovely.....

and the way of scolding 2 arjun and nandini
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

alekh 2 funny na!!!!!!

update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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heyyyy madhuuu abhi mene late to kiya hai par mind blowing yar just amzing👏tum na raj aur naina kafi acha represent karti ho yar😳tumhare ff me bahat sare romantik scenes hote hain aur tum na amzing ho yar😛dil khush hojata hai tumhara u d padhke hehe😊😊n urrrr great aur raj g.s hogaya woww..aur naina ka mu raj k samne nahin khula aisa hi hota hai hahahaha😆😆😆kyun naina baki sabke samne bolti hai aur raj k samne chup hojati hai aur raj bhi wohi karta hai😆😆😆bt d ud was superbbbbbbbbb👏👏👏 keep it up n ud soon👏👏👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks to all for replying ,individual comments ki baad main reply karti hu
Edited by sania_58 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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In Chemistry classroom,
Alekh- hey Raj,chal last bench pe bethte hain
Raj- why?last bench par kyun?jo log professors se aankh milane se darte hain,who bethte hain last bench par, but I don't care.last bench par sab bohut baatein karte hain, main concentrate nahin kar paunga.
Alekh- accha chal mere bhai,middle pe bethte hain,eii,Rony chal
They sat on the bench
Alekh- Raj thik se note lena, main tujhse Xerox kar lunga,vaise bhi mujhe SB sir ki baatein kuch samaj main nahin aata,eiii sun raha hai hai na??
Raj- kis baar tu apne khud ki notes padh kar pass hua hai??
Alekh- is liye tu hain mera best- friend,from childhood,yeh dosti main to mar kar bhi nahin todunga.
Rony- don't be emotional alekh
Alekh- eiii saala tu apna aur Raj ka rishta nahin samjhega,naak mat gusha,by the way Raj tu aaj itna ghum shum kyun jain?
Raj- kuch khaas nahin,bas uss Nandini & Arjun se thora
Alekh- jhagra. kiya.yaar tu English Dept.main kyun gaya tha? Raj tu kab tak uss baat ko lekar ….
Raj- main uss baat ko lekar kuch nahin kaha,in fact main uss ladki se baat bhi nahin karna chata,
Mere status ko match nahin karta,but kya karu main iss collg ka G.S hu,who kameeni ek 1st year ki new student ki ragging kar rahi thi,& saath main tha uska pet dog Arjun, jo dhum hilata hua usko follow kar raha tha.& main woha Santanu sir se milne gaya tha.
Alekh- chill raj,chor na woh sab baatein,by the way yaar tu lucky hain, u know mujhe aaj tak kisi ladki ne kiss nahin kiya,main kisi ko kiss nahin kar paya, isliye cigeratte,another from of kissing.

Raj lost in different world
Flashback
Raj & Nandini dono 1st year ka student hai,but they knew each other,H.S exam ke waqt dono sath main Bengali coaching padhte the,Raj & Alekh cycle pe aate the,but Nandini,hamesha apne car use karti thi,driver drop karke wohi wait karta tha,class khatam hone ke baad madam aakar car main betheti thi,& ghar jati thi,class main hi sirf baatein hoti thi,but they shared notes.
1st year ke final exam ke pehle study leave chal rahi thi,but Chemistry ki students practical class ke liye aate the.
One day,in afternoon,
Raj khane ke liye canteen ke taraf ja raha tha,achanak samne nandini aayi
Raj- Nandini tu?study leave chal rahi hai na??phir bhi collg main??lagta hai puri tyaari ho chuki hai,answer paper main sixer maregi,hai na???
Nandini- sixer to tu marega,aur hamesha se maarta aaya hai.by the way main suggestion lene,aur kuch Rhetoric & prosody le kar doubt thi, woh clear karne aayi thi.tu free hain????
Raj- haa,free hu,kyun??
Nandini- ek baat karni hai
Raj- bol na,dekh ab to main tujhe note nahin de sakta.
Nandini- akele main baat karni hai,idhar aa.
She dragged Raj in the nearby class- room & came very close to him.
Nandini- tujhe pata hain main kaunsi perfume use karti hu??
Raj(shoked)- ahh,kya bol rahi hai tu?main ladies perfume use nahin karti, so pass
Nandini- hmm,kabhi kuch feel nahin kiya??khair,but tere after shave ki khusboo bohut acchi hai, its really intoxicating,she came very closed to him
then suddenly,Nandini forcefully kissed his lips.
10sec blank for Raj.
Nandini- silly boy, u don't know how to kiss?where is u'r tounge?I hope u understand that I love u.
But Raj left from the class-room without saying a word.totally red.
After few days,
Raj- Nandini main seedhi baat karna pasand karta hu,I don't love u,mere dil main dosti ka sivah tumhare liye koi feeling nahin hai.
Nandini- hmm,by the way Raj mujhe sex main koi problem nahin hai??
Then,suddenly, Raj slapped hard on her face,
Raj- nandini yeh thappar tumhare modern soch ke liye nahin maara tumhe,mujhe itna ghatiya samajne ke liye tha yeh
Nandini- ho kya chiz tum,mere status pata hai tum he,aate the to cycle main, ab H.S pass karne ke baad bike mili hai,mobile mili hai…
Raj- Nandini main apne duniya main khush hu, I am happy with my parents, lifestyle, believes & dreams,so, dubara mere raaste main maat aana,dost ban kar bhi nahin.
Tab se Raj & Nandini ke beech dushmani ka rishta hai.
Flashback end.

Alekh- Raj tu phir se who sab sochne lag gaya??purani baat chor na.Cigeratte lega???
Raj looked at Alekh
Alekh- Nahin baba, main to mazak kar raha tha, tu & cigeratte.
Rony- guys, pata hai Pamela ne mere saath baat karma bandh kar diya hai.
Alekh- haa, pata hai ab tu usske premik se Prem Chopra ban gaya hai.
Rony- salt kyun daal raha hai tu? By the way Raj tub hi ek chakkar chala yaar,itna saaf record, kya yaar?
Raj- not interested, by the way sir aa rahe hai, ab I think hum he faltoo ki baatein chor kar kuch kaam karna chayiye.



Thats all for today, waiting for u'r comments

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