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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
wowwwww very nice
story is very god 👏 👏
i loved it
keep writting
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
its good you are a very good writer 👏 👏
update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Nishttha

arre...eto taratari haal chere disse je!!! 😕 ami tomar 1st chapter ta gotokal e porechi, but net cut hoye gesilo-tai comment dite pari ni 😛
tomar ei notun concept amar khub valo legeche..pls continue koro..
and take care🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: friend forever

hi ami mou....................tomar pratham story to amazing ............................romance vison sundar bhabe likhecho...and ekhaneo tomar second story te naina college girl....so swt......ami o college pari...........I can see myself in her

Hiiiiiiii,mou,amio collg e pori,Thanks for u'r comment & also liking my fic

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ums5

wowwwww very nice
story is very god 👏 👏
i loved it
keep writting

Thanks, for liking my fic

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: VEETI

its good you are a very good writer 👏 👏
update soon

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Posted: 17 years ago
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They both reached in the collg.It was in the center of the town & yet detached from it. A calm atmosphere prevails all around.They saw the tall & huge building,big compound, & a garden maintained with care.
Naina- neelu gate main khade rehne ka irada hai ya andar bhi jana hai?
Neelu- haa, chal rahi hu na,thora wait kar na
Naina- oh main to bhul hi gayi thi ab pandit ji ayenge,mahurat dekenge,phir hum collg pravesh   ; karenge hai na??
Neelu- This is too much,accha tu mujhe ek baat bata tu mere samne itna bolti hai,lekin aur logo ke samne teri bolti kyun bandh jo jati hai??main bas collg ko thik tarah se observe kar rahi thi.
Naina- Neelu tujhe ab late nahin ho rahi hai?lets go

As they entered into the collg both felt the sensation of a new life within them.They had a sense of being suddenly grown up,& felt that they were no longer school girls.Its a new environment.They found out the Arts building. Neelu found out her class in the first floor.
Neelu- Naina mujhe meri class mil gayi hai,teri class 3rd floor main hai,main chor ke aati hu tujhe.
Naina- no Neelu,main manage kar lungi.
Neelu- ok,best of luck yaar.
Naina- same to u.

Naina climbed the stairs.She felt a mild shock of surprise when she saw endless stream of students moving up & down the corridors for their classes,she felt nervous among strange faces & new minds.At last Naina found out her class.As she was about to enter, group of girls blocked her way.
Girl 1- English(hons)1st year?????
Naina- (fightened)- yaa.
Girl 1- Oh, that's cool,your name??
Naina- Naina Das.
Girl 1- oh Naina,nice name,by the way,I am Nandini,Nandini Adhikari,3rd year student in English Department.Well naina tum new student ho to hamari farz banta hai ki hum tumhe welcome kare.
Naina looked at her from head to toe.She was wearing a sleeveless top,& short skirt.

Nandini- ok,Naina, meet yeh hai Arjun,yeh bhi English Department ki 3rd year ki student hai.
Arjun- Hello miss
Nandini- ab Naina tumhe sirf subah se apni daily routine bolna hai aur har sentence ki aakir main itna kehna hai "Arjun ki bahon main"
Naina(shocked)- What???
Nandini- don't worry sweety,chalo class room ke andar chalo,hey,shut the door
Naina- plz dekiye…
Nandini- Lets start,koi fyada nahin,jitna mana korogi,punishment utna barega,tum samajdar dikti ho.
Naina- ok,main subah utti hoon Arjun ki bahon bain
Brush karti hoon Arjun ki bahon main
Fresh hoti hoon Arjun ki bahon main
Khati hoon Arjun ki bahon main
Collg aati hoon Arjun ki bahon main
Ghar jaati hoon Arjun ki bahon main
Study karti hoon Arjun ki bahon main
Shoti hoon Arjun ki bahon main
Nandini(clapping)- wahhh,dekne main to bilkul behenji jaisa,par baat suno,oye tune itna sab kuch to Arjun ki bahon main karta hi hai,to hamare samne zara usse kiss bhi kar le,ofcourse lips pe.
Naina- (angrily)- this is too much Nandini di,main yeh nahin karungi.

Yeh keh kar Naina darwaja kholne jati hai,but Arjun grabbed her hand & pulled her.
Arjun- Yeh kya yaar Tax to deti jao.
Naina- Tax????
Arjun- arre chumma to deti jao.
Naina- app log limit cross kar rahe hai,main Principle ke paas ja kar complain karungi.
Nandini- aur tu uske baad collg main thik jayega,chal kiss kar,sati savitri,disgusting.

But Naina again pushed Arjun,& trying to leave the place.But he grabbed her hand tightly.Then suddenly koi darwaja khol ke andar aata hai,& naina collided with that person.
Naina-(without looking at the person)- plz help.

The person entered into the room,usse dekh kar Arjun side ho jata hai,& baaki jo log enjoy kar rahe the who bhi side hone lagte hai.
Person- ohh, to class room ka darwaja bandh karke yeh sab chal raha tha.Maine mana kiya tha.
Nandini- Look…..
Person- Shut up,& mujhe lagta hai yeh 1st year ka class hai,& tum 3rd year ka student ho,yaha kya kar rahe ho?get lost from here.
Nandini- youuuuuuuuuu?
Person- I said out.
Nandini angrily left the room,baaki sab seniors student bhi already bahar jaa chuke the.
Person- U alright??
Naina- yaa,I am ok,but aap kaun?
Person- Rajveer Chatterjee,iss collg ka G.S


Thats all for today,waiting for u'r comments
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
woooooow it was aweeeeesum dear.too good yaar.how did u manage the both ffs.hats off to u dear.thanks for this interesting update.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
madhu it's cool...kya continuation tha!!!!!!!!!!!!!

plz update
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
hi
i just read ur ff.its so cool and realistic. plz continue soon 👏

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