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Posted: 17 years ago
#91
fantastic 👏 👏


cont soon dost 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#92
superpppp
great
awesome 👏 👏 👏
RN kuch to kareeb aaye,aur raj bhi naina k liye kuch feel kar raha hai,good 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#93
Too good!!!!

Finally Raj Naina ke liye kuch feel toh kiya 😳 😳 😳 !!!!

Aur unki pyaar ki gaadi thodi toh aage badi!!!

Waise the lines about love was very nice!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#94
first of all m so sorryyyyyyy ki me tumhe itna
late comment de rahi hoo.mujhe tumhara ff
kahin mila hi nahin...me aj kal andhi ho gayi
hoo .lagta hai.hahahha😆
are yar forgive me na plzzzz....😕

ab baat ud ki....omzzzzzzzzzz......mindblowing
kya update tha yar,,,chalo janab ki ankhen to
jhalsi....hehheeh bichara.......dekh ta reh gaya
naina ko....kaise nahin dekhta.......😳😳aur han
Raj au Naina k scenes bahat achhe the ...bahat
aur alekh ki bhi......sab ka convo bahat achha
tha....toooo good.....n yes...Raj kitna soch ta
hai...yar...😉😉aur mujhe wo last wala part
bahat achha laga..jisme ye likha hai every
thing is truth...piece....n love......😳tooo
good ab jaldi update karo na,,,,😕😕😕
love u
Riti



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Posted: 17 years ago
#95
FANTASTIC
KEEP IT UP 👍🏼
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#96
Thanks to all for replying & for patience,I hope aap log iss fic ko bhule nahin, sorry guys mera exam tha.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#97
Next day,Navami(9th day)
Iss din subah subah puja shuru ho jata hai.Aaj sab busy hai,pura group bhi kaam par lag gaya hai.Iss din poor log, jine roz khana nahin milta un logo ko khana kilaya jata hai,kapre bhi diya jata hai.Santanu sir Raj & alekh ke upar sab ko thik se khilane ka zimmedari diya hai.coz he knew Raj ko job hi kaam do who usse pura karega.Naina, neelu, sameera ke upar kapre baatne ki zimmedari hai.sab busy hai.Raj idhar udhar chakkar kat raha hai,aise chances roz roz nahin milta.infact aas paas ki villages se jo bhi log aaya hai unne bhi thik se khana khilana hai.Agar koi bhi garbar hui bohut criticism hogi.
Alekh- relax Raj,sab thik se hoga.
Raj- hope so,by the way khana ban gaya.
Alekh- haa yaar main kitchen main dekh kar aaya hu,almost ready hai.
Raj- ok
Alekh- by the way sab log to aaj khayenge,but sab ko khana distribute kaun karega.
Raj- oye, hum log kisliye hai,hum kar lenge,collg picnic par bhi yeh humne kiya hai.
Suparno- hey guys, need help???
Alekh- aap kaun ji??
Raj- chup alekh, yeh Santanu sir ki bhai hai,arre nahin nahin,we will manage.
Suparno- oh god guys,tum log bhi naa,dono milke kaise koroge??main hath bata leta hu.
Sab kaam pe lag jate hai,3pm tak sab ka khana complete ho jata hai, ladies bhi apna kaam khatam kar leta hai, ab sab family members, aur jo log kaam kar rahe the khana khane bethe hai.
Neelu- dekh naina,aaj to in logo ka darshan hi nahin hua, aur tera Raj to wah kya kehna
Naina- haa dekho bechare kitne tried ho gaye hai.
Now finally sab thik se ho jata hai,raj & alekh 5pm ko khana kha kar uthte hai.Sab satisfied hai.
Alekh- u know Raj aaj hamare kitne paap dho gaye
Raj- kya??
Alekh- arre aise phokat main khana kilane se god maaf kar deta hai,by the way aaj maine kuch zyada hai kha liya hai
Raj- maine kaha tha itna khan eke liye?????
Alekh- kya karu??tabiyat thik nahin lag raha hai
Raj- ek kaam karega chal bahar ghum kar aate hai, kal raat to hum vaise bhi chale jayenge
Alekh- good idea,but paidaal nahin jaa paunga.tu rukh main abhi aata hu.
Alekh do cycle le kar aata hai.
Raj- kaha se mila??kiska hai???
Alekh- tu sawal bohut karta hai,chal naa.
But Neelu & naina came there.
Neelu- arre cycle le kar tum log kaha jaa rahe ho??
Alekh- explain karna jaruri hai???
Neelu- of course,jaruri hai, vaise bhi main guess kar sakti hu tum log ghumne jaa rahe ho
Raj- to puch kyun rahe ho??
Neelu- kyun ki hum bhi challenge
Raj- haa to peeche peeche aa jao
Neelu- how rude Raj,chalo cycle pe bitha ke le chalo, bol alekh tere cycle ki samne bethu yaa peeche???
Alekh- jaan samne betho.
Naina- tum log ghum ke aao
Neelu- nahin tu kyun akeli yaha rahegi, tu Raj ke cycle pe beth jaa
Alekh- common naina jaldi beth jaa
Naina looked at Raj.raj nodded.Naine peeche bethne jaati hai, but dekhti hai cycle ka career nahin hai,so naina samne bethne ke liye aati hai
Raj- arre tum to salwar pehna hai.
Naina- to????
Raj- to apna dupatta thik se wrap kar lo, warna dono saath main girenge.
Naina(in mind) - gir to main chuki hu tumhare pyaar main, ab tumhari waari hai.
Ab dono cycle chala hai, enjoying the fresh air, beautiful surroundings,sweet smells of different flowers.Raj to naina ko lekar steady chal raha hai,but alekh neelu ko lekar idhar udhar kar raha hai.
Raj- Alekh tu kya kar raha hai??thik se chal
Alekh- arre ek to raasta bohut kharap hai, upar se neelu bohut bhari aur moti hai
Neelu- kya bola??sach bol naa tu hai hi nikkama,tu balance nahin rakh sakta,arre arre samhal, alekh…..
Dhammmmmmmmmm
Alekh, neelu & cycle fall in the small lake beside the road.
Raj & Naina stood there shocked, & started laughing
Alekh & neelu paani se bahar aata hai,completly drenched in water.Neelu Alekh ke peeche kick karti hai.
Neelu- hum log chalte hai raj,tum & naina ghum ke aao, main iss kameene ka khabar leta hu.Alekh & neelu jhagda karte karte chale jate hai.
Raj & Naina river ke paas aate hai,& sat there, sath main sunset dekhta hai.
Raj- kitna shanti hai naa yaha?
Naina- haa
Raj- sochta hu politics karna chor dunga???
Naina- whattttttttttttttttttttt??
Raj- shocked naa??cant imagine me without politics, u know mere dad hamesha kahete the yeh mera jagah nahin haa,aaj jab sochta hu, duniya ko dekhta hu, lagta hai woh hamesha thik kahete the.main neeche nahin gir sakta, aur sach ke liye ladne ke liye, desh ke liye kuch karne ke liye sirf yeh ek raasta nahin hai,yeh naa mera laksh nahin hai.
Naina- to kya hai tumhara laksh??
Raj- pata nahin, lekin ek din zaroor dhund lunga,dekha tum ko bore kar diya naa??
Naina- chalo, chalte hai,andhera kaafi ho gaya hai
Raj- don't worry tumhe thik se pauchunga,trust kar sakti ho
Naina- trust karti hu,,,,,,,,,,,,khud se bhi zyada
Their eyes locked.but raj broke the contract.
Raj- lets go.
Next day,dashmi(last day of puja)
Aaj subah se sab dhuki hai,phir se ek saal ka intezar.subah puja hone ke baad sab packing karne lage,aaj hi train hai,Sab ke pao chu kar ashirbaad lete hai,5pm main sab thik jaate hai.
Yeh holiday ki yaadein in logo ke dil main hamesha taaza rahega.


Thats all for today guys, waiting for u'r comments
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Posted: 17 years ago
#98
too good
update soon long asap
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Posted: 17 years ago
#99
hiiiiiii madhu..
yar pata hai orissa me bhi ye sab pooja hoti hai.matlab.saptami,ashtami,
navmi,dasami.aur ek baat me maa ki pooja ki pehle din par paida hui
thi heheh..me tithik anusar.durga pooja k pehle din par paida hui thi
hahah.funny na.aur han update was toooooo gooooooooddddd..mind
blowing......awesommmeeee..just amazing.update soon dear ..tum to mujhse bhi jyada gayab hojati ho hahaha😆 ab tum jaldi
ud karna ok byeeeeee...
LOTSSSS OF LOVE Riti😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Bahut dino baad aaj tune ud kiya hai.
Good update n i love the way u expressed Durga Pooja n a peaceful atmosphere of village. 😊
Update soon.

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