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Posted: 17 years ago
#81

hehehehehehehehehehhehe

madhu mene kal rat se lekar aj su bah tak tumhare sare parts padhe ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh godddddddddd mujhe yakin nahin ho raha mera to haste haste band baj gay hai .😆😆😆 aur ye kya raj naina k upar gussa kar raha tha not fair yar.it was vvvvvv embarassing.plzzzzzzzzz yar ab neelu aur alekh ki l story shuru ho gayi ab raj ab raj aur naina ka bhi to karwao yar heheheh 😉😉come soon sweety ab jaldi ud karna ok . now byeeeeee

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Exam ke din, in Chemistry class,
Saare students bohut tension main, teacher aa kar question paper sab ko dete hai.
Teacher- I hope sab ko paper mil gaya hai, ab mujhe class main pin drop silence chayiye,agar maine kisi ko idhar udhar karte hue dekha, to sidhe class se bahar, samjhe sab?
Alekh- moron dosha, ja ta sab(Bengali word,disgusting)
Question paper padhne ke baad,
Alekh- yeh paper kaun si language main likha hua hai??
Rony- I think English.
Alekh- galat,yeh Hibhru main likha hua hai,mujhe kuch samaj main nahin aa raha hai,eii Raj, tera kya haal hai??
Raj- this is disgusting, ek to itna kaam waqt mila, upar se itni tough paper.
Alekh- Dekha Raj tough bol raha hai, to main kya bolunga yeh Chemistry ka sawal hai to?
Alekh- yaaro, mujhe kuch nahin pata tum log mere liye kisi bhi kimat pe baap arrange karo, plz
Teacher- Alekh,silence,aur students ko disturb mat karo.
Alekh- arre dhatttt, kuch kaam nahin hai kya?
Teacher- 50 marks ka paper hai,only 1 hours time, now concentrate
Raj- aap chup karenge tab to concentrate karunga naa
Alekh- exactly,by the way pass marks kya hai?
Rony- 15, I think
Alekh- kya sirf 15??Raj thora contribute kar plz, objective type bol de, usme 15 aa jayega
Raj- give me your question paper.
Alekh & Raj quickly exchange their question papers,Raj alekh ki question paper main ans. Likh deta hai, then again they exchange their papers
Thori der baad Raj nudged Alekh,queation no. 5 ka ans. Pata karke bata.
Alekh- tu puch raha hai?
Raj- yaa, actually my father name is not Harishchandra.
Ek taraf Chemistry class main sab dil khol kar cheating kar rahe hai, wohi English class main Naina ki kismat kharap chal rahi hai.tough guard,naina ko lagta hai galti se English paper naa de kar French paper diya gaya hai. Alas! Koi Cheating nahin kar paya,uska nit result English exam ki band baj gayi.

After the exam,
Raj- so Alekh exam kaisa raha??
Alekh- bhagban & tere naam par jitna likhna tha likh ke aaya hu.tune to rocking exam diya??
Raj- haa rocking ka to dashu example tere samne exam ke hall main tha, yeh question jisne kiya hai naa pata nahin kaun se janam ka badla liya hai.
Alekh- Raj main chalta hoon, Neelu wait kar rahi hogi.
Raj- yaa, vaise bhi aaj sab jaldi ghar jayenge.par mujhe library main kaam hai,so late hoga ghar jane main.
Alekh- Neelu ke naam pe yaad aaya tune Naina se kya bola tha??
Raj- Naina.kaun Naina??
Raj- ohhh, Naina, haa yaad aaya bus-stop par,uski haalchal suspicious hai.usse jaroor Nandini ne bheja hai.
Alekh- tera dimak kharap ho gaya hai,tujhe sab pata hai phir bhi ajeeb ajeeb baat karta hai,naina acchi ladki hai,apni party ka hai, hum sab ki bohut acchi dost hai woh, tu bhi dosti kar le.
Raj- tera gyan khatam ho gaya to main library ja sakta hu.

Neelu- Naina main Alekh ke saath jaa rahi hu.
Naina- ok, enjoy your date.
Neelu- tu kab ghar jayegi??
Naina- arre aaj meri joint ki tution hai, collg main bethungi,tution padhke ghar jaunga,main Common room main jaa kar bethti hoon, bye
Neelu- bye.

Aaj collg bilkul khali hai,sab exam ke baad masti karne nikal gaya hai,kuch common room main,kuch apne class main beeth kar masti mar rahe hai.upar se aasman ki halat dekh kar lagta hai baarish hoga.Raj jaldi jaldi neeche aa raha hai,usne umbrella lana bhul gaya hai,achanak he collided with someone.
Raj(without looking)- sorry.
Person- arre tum??????
Raj- oh god,dekho main bohut jaldi main hu,abhi plz koi faltoo baat mat shuru karo,what u'r name, yaa Naina
Naina- arre main kab se tum he kuch baat batane ke liye taras rahi hu.main bina bole nahin jaungi.
Raj- agar main naa suna to???
Naina- arre sun na parega, aise kaise naa sun kar chale jaoge
Naina- suno main tumhari party ka hoon, dushmaan gang ka nahin hu.dosti karna chati hoon,tum he baadnaam karne ka irada nahin ha mera,.
Nandini door se dekh rahi thi Raj & Naina baate kar rahe hai,class main bethi hui thi woh,usko dekh ke bohut gussa aa rahi thi.She made up her mind,came near to them,& Naina ko dhakka deti hai,Naina thora off balance ho jati hai, but raj usko pakad leta hai.
Naina- can't u see???
But Nandini ko dekh kar chup ho jati hai,who samaj jati hai Nandini usko jaan bhuj kar dhakka diya hai.Naina ko lag raha tha Raj kuch definitely bolega.
Nandini- sorry, maine dekha nahin tum dono ko,hey Raj sorry haa.
Raj- it's ok nandini.
Naina thora disappointed ho gayi, Raj kuch nahin bola.then,
Raj- hey Nandini wait, main kuch bhul raha hu.
Nandini confused ho kar rukh jaati hai.
Raj took out his wallet,took out a 10rs.note.
Raj- u know Nandini meri mom hamesha kehti hai raaste main agar tumko aandhe dikh jaaye, to usse kuch daan karna chayiye.lo yeh 10rs rakh lo.
Nandini- kya??kya kaha tumne??
Raj- arre baba main 5ft.9inch. ka hu,Naina ka height mujhe nahin pata,lekin tum ne nahin dekha, to iska kya matlab hua?
Nandini- main yeh insult nahin bulungi, dekh lungi
Raj- kab??kaha dekhogi??plz mujhe bata dena, main aa jaunga.
Naina tried her best to control her laughter.& Nandini tried hard to swallow the insult.
Raj- main chalta hoon.
Naina- arre rukho main bhi bus-stand jaunga.
Raj chal raha hai, Naina Raj ki peeche peeche chal rahi hai.
Bus- stand main dono ko jaldi bus mil jata hai.Raj & Naina same bus par utthe hai.
Raj- tum iss bus main??
Naina- arre aaj meri joint ki tution hai, isliye iss root ka bus pakhra hai.
Raj- hmmm
Fully packed up bus, thik se khade hone ka jagah nahin hai.Next stoppage main ek ladki bus main utthi hai,mobile pe kisi se baat karte karte utthi hai,Uth kar,
Girl(to Raj)- hathiye naa
Raj idhar udhar crowd ki taraf dekh kar chup chap khada rahta hai.
Girl- plz hatiyee naa
Raj( micmicking her tone)- kaha hatunga dikha dijiye naa, I promise main abhi haath jaunga.
Ladki ek dum chup ho jaati hai, naina samaj jaati hai Raj kisi ko ek inch bhi zameen nahin chorega.
They came down from the bus in the same stoppage.but baarish shuru ho gayi hai.
Naina- tumare ghar yaha hai??
Raj- haa, tum Tarun sir ke paas joint padhne aati ho??
Naina- yaa, par barish shuru ho gayi hai, main kaise jaungi.
Raj- Tarun sir bohut lazy hai, phone kar ke zara pooch lo padhenge yaa nahin??
Naina- ok, main phone karke aati hu.P.C.O kaha hai??
Raj- tumhare paas mobile nahin hai??
Naina- no.
Raj took out his mobile & gave it to Naina.
Raj- yeh lo baat kar lo
Naina- par…
Raj- common kar lo.
Naina phone karti hai, & usse pata chalta hai sir aaj tution nahin padhenge.
Raj- nahin padhenge naa, I know it, dekho bus to bohut kaam ho gaya hai,tum apne ghar main phone karke kisi ko bolo tum he pick up karne ke liye.
Naina ghar main phone karti hai.Then,
Naina- meri bhaiya aa rahe hai,wait karne ke liye kaha.
Raj- ok.
Naina- mujhe sirf wait karne ke liye kaha.
Raj- baarish ho rahi hai, raaste main log bhi zyada nahin hai, pehle tumhare bhai aa jaye, tab tak plz chup chap khade raho.
Dono shade neeche chup chap khade hai,Raj kaafi bhig chukka hai,his black shirt strucked with his body,baarish main he looked pure & also damm sexy.Naina's eyes fixed on him.

Beheta hai mann kahin, kahaan jaante nahin -2 koyi rokle yahin Bhaage re mann kahin, aage re mann
chala, jaane kidhar jaanu na -2 Beheta hai mann kahin, kahaan jaante nahin, koyi rokle
yahin Bhaage re mann kahin, aage re mann chala, jaane kidhar jaanu na -2 Aa...haanaa Hochale
thhandi hawahosang mann bhi gaya Dhhundhhu main kahaan usko, batlaaye koyi mujhko Ke haan haan
haan re Bhaage re mann kahin, aage re mann chala, jaane kidhar jaanu na -2 Beheta hai mann kahin,
kahaan jaante nahin, koyi rokle yahin Haanhaaye aisa samahmmphir hoga kahaan Jee loon main isse
khulke, saawan bhi zara khulke Arre sun sun sun Bhaage re mann kahin, aage re mann chala, jaane
kidhar jaanu na -2 Beheta hai mann kahin, kahaan jaante nahin, koyi rokle yahin Bhaage re mann
kahin, aage re mann chala, jaane kidhar jaanu na -2

She lost in some different world, jab Naina apne sapno ki duniya se bahar nikalti hai, tab dekha uske bhai aaya hai.
Naina- Rajveer yeh mera bhai Naveen.Bhai Rajveer, my senior.
Naveen- Thanks, tum bhi iske saath khade rahe yaha par, ab iss barish main zyada waqt nahin lunga, chalo tum bhi bike pe betho, ghar drop kar deta hoon.
Raj- no, no, main chala jaunga.
Naveen- umbrella bhi to nahin hai
Raj- main chala jaunga, paas main mera ghar hai, vaise bhi mausaam bara suhana hai,thora maza to lene dijiye.bye,
Naveen- hey, ek din ghar zaroor aana
Raj- ok, I 'll try
He started walking slowly, enjoying the rain.




Thats all for today, waiting for u'r comments
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83

hii madhu

how r u ,u know what dat was mind blowing mind blashing, fantastik,fantabulus,wat a ud dear n yes raj aur naina k scene bahat ache the yar pata nahin agar sach ka lrl aisa hota to kya hota hehehehhehe aur aj jab vik ta hua hai to naina uske piche lattu hojati hai hahhahaha aur wese bhi raj naina k liye hi to bana hai kash wo dono ek hojate hehehhe mind blowing yar aur raj ka nandini ko chidana hahahaha tooooo good aur han naina ko raj ne pakad liya hehhehe greattttt aur to aur naina aur raj barish me ek sathh wowwwwwww .yar witing for the next part.........update soon dearrrrrr .bye

love

Riti😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
again it was a hilarious update.... 🤣 🤗 Raj ne Nandini ko bhaut hi accha sabak sikhaya...Navin ke entry se bhaut hi accha laga... 😛 Naina-Raj convo was very interesting...examination hall situation was very well described..love the whole update... 👏 thanku sooo much for marvelous update...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
Awesome!!!Too good!!!!

Aur Raj ne Naina ko pakad liya 😳 😳 !!!!Haaiiii!!!!

Aur dono baarish mein shade mein.....haaiiiii!!!!

Aur Raj bheega hua...pure and damn sexy 😳 !!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
very nice RN scene bahot accha tha,ab raj ne kuch to baat ki naina se,
😳

aur woh nandini ko bahot accha sunaya raj ne 😆 😆 😆
awesome update 😊 😊

but yaar next time thoda bada karana.

👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
Next day,
Naina- hey Neelu, exam kaisa raha??
Neelu- horrible, maine itna ghatiya exam aaj tak nahin diya.
Naina- same yaar,mujhe to bohut dar lag rahi hai, agar pass mark score nahin kar payi to kya hoga??
Neelu- chill, don't worry,pass marks aa jayegha.
Naina- sun naa tujhse ek baat karni hai??
Neelu- kya??
Naina barish ki experience Neelu ke saath share kiya.
Neelu- wow yaar, teri to chandi hi chandi hai,by the way iss baar puja vacation kaise spend karegi tu???marketing complete???
Naina-nahin abhi finishing touch dena baaki hai
Neelu- dekh yaar har baar to hum puja kolkata main hi enjoy karte hai,iss baar chal naa village main jaa kar puja celebrate karte hai,bohut thrilling hogi naa
Naina- so to hai but u know my family naa
Neelu- Santanu sir le jayenge, hamara poora group jayega, & most importantly Rajveer jayega.Alekh ne mujhe bataya.
Neelu- sooch mat,arre collg main aa gaye hai hum thora masti nahin karenge.main to jaa rahi hu.
Naina- ok, try lene main kya problem.

Naina ne apne family ko manaya, Navin ne Naina ka saath diya, Neelu bhi help kiya,sab jane ki preparations main busy the.Nandini nahin jaa rahi hai, yeh sun kar Raj bohut khush hua,neetaja Alekh ko ek din canteen main free main khana mil gaya.So fanally decide hua Shasti(6th day)subah Howrah station se train hai.team main hai Raj, Naina, Neelu,Alekh,Sameera, rony.
Finally,as per plan,sab subah subah uth kar train pakarte hai, Alekh thora late ho gaya tha,but train miss nahin hua.Train main kuch kash nahin hua. sab Anataksari khel rahe the,uske baad tried ho kar sab so gaya,Raj window ke paas beeth kar dekh raha tha bahar ka nazara.tez hawa se Raj ki baal udh raha tha,naina notice kar rahi thi.thori der baad train main ek bawul(jo log gaana gate hai,village side main in logo ko dekha jata hai)uthte hai.& he sang a song.sab uska gaana sunte hai.
Eii batha ki je batha,boje ki ar jone
Sojoni ami bhuji morechi prem kore(Bengali song)
(yeh dard ek ajeeb sa dard hai,isse sab nahin samaj sakte,main yeh dard samaj sakta hu,kyun ki maine khud pyaar kiya hai, aur iss dard ko ehsaans kiya hai)
Naina sochti hai yeh song uske situation ko ek dum shoot karta hai.As usual train late karta hai.sham ho jati hai.sab station par utarte hai,station bilkul sunsan hai, light bhi nahin hai.village ka naam hai bhubandihi.station se van rickshaw pe 1hours lagta hai.
Shantanu sir Van rickshaw arrange karke rakhe the.
The roads are poor.
Alekh- yaar mera kamar toot gaya, bapre kitna bura haal hai raaste ka, upar se itni dust, dekh main bilkul safed ho gaya hu.
Neelu- u are right,pauch kar hum he pehle nahana parega.
Raj- Government ne to village ka raasta thik kar raha hai naa, yeh uska nazara,chee
Finally the reached in the village.Village main sirf ek hi badha ghar hai, Santanu sir ka ghar,unke forefathers uss village ka zammendar the,uss ghar main durga puja hota hai,karreb 100 saal purana,sab log ek saath ho kar bohut masti karte hai puja main.Logo ne bohut acchi tarah se un logo ka welcome kiya,sab tried the,sab fresh ho kar so gaye,boys & girls different kamre main.
Next day Saptami(7th day)
Subah se sab puja ki arrangement main lag gaya hai.in logo ne bhi haat lagaya kaam main,sab bohut hairaan hai, kitna apnapaan hai yaha ki logo main, kitni jaldi apna liya,kitna pure hai.puja main bohut masti ki sab ne mil kar,khana bhi ek saath khaya.
Next Day Asthami(8th day)
Iss din main puja hota hai.Raj & Alekh jaldi uth kar ready ho kar puja ki arrangement kar raha hai.Puspanjali ke waqt sab ek saath khade hai, Raj ne Naina ko dekha,Naina was wearing a white saare,apni beegi baal usne khuli chor di hai,ek glow hai uske chere main, kuch khaas baat hai usme.Raj ke dil main ek ajeeb sa hulchal hone lag gaya.Naina ne bhi ek baar Raj ke taraf dekha he was wearing a white sherwani.
In afternoon,
Raj- eii Alekh chal naa thora aas paas ghum ke aaye.
Alekh- plz Raj mujhe sone de,vaise bhi aaj raat bhar jhagna parega,tub hi so jaa,thora rest karle.
Raj bahar aaya.Dekha Naina khadi hai bahar.
Raj- arre tum yaha bahar kya kar rahi ho??
Naina- andar accha nahin lag raha tha,isliye bahar khadi hu.
Raj- hmm,chalo thora ghum kar aate hai,khubsurat jagah hai, miss kyun kare??
Naina- ok. Chalo
Naina bohut khush hai.20%mission successful,dosti tak to pauchi.har taraf trees,kitno ka to naam bhi nahin pata.phoolon ki khusboo,. Kaash(Catkine)flowers ki field,. ek intoxicating environment,
Chota chota ghar,ghar ki bahar ki walls main khubsurat designs.Beauty of the countryside,& the grimness of proverty existing in it.
Achanak kisine awaz diya
Person- suniye aap log Santanu ke saath aaye hai??
Raj- jee,aap kaun??
Person- main Santanu ka bhai.Suparno,andar aao naa.
They both entered into the small room.idhar udhar dekh rahe the dono.
Suparno- yeh village ka school hai, main yaha akele padhata hu.
Raj & Naina dono superise ho jata hai
Suparno- kya karu??Jadavpur university se M.A pura karne baad yaha aa gaya,school banaya,yaha ke baache, bare sab ko padhata hu,subah tum logo ko dekha, baat hi nahin ho paa rahi thi.
Raj & Suparno kuch der aur baat karte hai.kuch der baad Raj & naina dono bahar aate hai.
Raj- dekho naina hum sab sapne dekte hai naa,apne liye, yeh karunga, woh karunga
Naina- kya keh rehe ho??
Raj- tum doctor ban na chati ho naa,kisliye??apne liye naa?paisa kamaunga,apne dhun par jeeyunga??main bhi aisa sapna dekta hu.par Suparno ko dekho dusro ko sapna dikhata hai,andhere main bhasa in logo ko zindagi ki roshni dikhata hai,hum sab kitni selfish hai naa.kitna purity hai yaha ki logo main hai naa??
Naina chup ho jati hai.
Shaam ho rahi hai.
Aaj dono ko ehsaas hua Beauty is no phantasy, it has the everlasting meaning of reality.Peace is true,not the conflict.Love is true not the hatred.Truth is the one,not the disjointed multitude.
Naina ke dil main aaj ek ajeeb sa ehsaas hai.
Meeting you was fate
Becoming your friend was choice
But falling in love with u was
Completely out of control
Raj ke dil main bhi ek hulchal hai,kuch strange feelings hai.
Love Isn't a decision,it's a feeling, love means to see someone with closed eyes.to miss someone in the crowd,to find someone in every thought.
If I could be any part of u,I would be your tear,conceived in your heart,born in your eyes,live on u'r cheeks & die on your lips.



Thats all for today, waiting for u'r comments
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
Simply superb.Kaafi accha part tha chlo Raj ne kuch feel kiya Naina k liye.Update soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
RNs part is so cute 👏 .plz cont soon.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
maaaaaaaaarvelous update dear...so Raj is falling for Naina...soo sweet...now can't wait for the next update...last line was too good...thanks for this fabulous update 👏

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