Rebirth(FF) dream pg 26 - Page 19

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ammyfan_pragati

hi ash!!!ur ff is 2 GOOD!!!LOVE IT..I CNT WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS WHEN THEY MEET!!I SIMPLY HAVE NO WORDS TO DESCRIBE UR FF...EACH UPDATE IS BETTER THAN THE OTHER...BUT THERE IS NOTHING LESS I EXPECT FROM YOU..YOU ARE A ABSOLUTELY WONDERFUL WRITER.....CONT SOON...CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT PART!!!


thanksssssssssssssssssssss a billon yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
i will soon update it for u guys thanszzzzzzzzz a lot for commmentingggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg😳gg😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
realllllllllllly very great.
hope that AR meet soon without any confusion.
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.continue soooooooooooooooooooooon.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rashi_23

realllllllllllly very great.
hope that AR meet soon without any confusion.
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.continue soooooooooooooooooooooon.


thankxz a billon for commenting
ya AR hmhm hm😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
choo sweet and naughty uncle of Armu good continue soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: yamnovbloom

choo sweet and naughty uncle of Armu good continue soon 😳


yami thanxz a thousanddddddddddddd
for commenting yammi
miss u
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Posted: 17 years ago
please update it

Friendship never has a volume,it never demands proofs,it also does not have happy ending,simply b'coz it never ends as frnds r true,khuda ka diya yeh kimati tohfa hain,jise woh dubara nahi dehta.
Edited by kvn1983 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks a lot for ur encouragment n comments
i see many view less comments 😭


so i m contining



recap;armaan's family get togther with atul's family
ridzi n anji with there familyyyyyyy
armaan n ridzi will get a new dreamm this time


~~~~~~~~~~Dream~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~'''''
a 5 year old boy is playing in front of a park garden with many girls behind him he was just ignoring them a girl of 4 years come there n karan was pleased to know that the girl was ignoring him he thought she was really different
our small boy is none other than our handsome karan n girl is shilpa
karan;heya charming girl wanna be friends??????
shilpaaa;ya sure why notttttttt
karan;i m karan
other girls are soo jealous offffffffff shilpa because they all tired to gain attention but no effect karan igonore all

shilpa;heya i m shilpa


next scence

a small of a 10 years playing cricket n the ball hit on neighbour's wndow the glass broke the owner is shouting
we see a boy running with a girl
karan;shilpa common be fast warna we will be dead that mrs boss sach much ka devil hey
shilpa;haan karan i m running na
karan;thoda fast yaar
shilpa;may PT usha nahi ho karan
karan;hoo god tumhara joke abhi now runn
they both runn towards a small jungle type place where we see a tree house
shilpa;oye karan sara haath do
karan;it is always there for u
shilpa blushinggggggggggg


next scence
we see a teenager girl holding many manyyyyy cards n roses and soo many girls are behind her
girl1;gave this to karan its from tina tell him
shilpa wriitting down ;okay tine next
and all girls gives there present
then we see shilpa going to a small cafetira
with all those things
shilpa;karannnnn u are here and i was searching for u 😡
karan with heart thorbing smile;sorri jaanu u know i m too scared to come to school just look at u
with all presents of mineeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 😆 😆 😆 looking sooo charming
shlpa; 😆 😆 😆 haan karan this year u have double dhammaka lots of prsents this is only 1 third
😆 😆 😆
karan;hey bhagu but i will always give u a rose
he gave a rose to shilpa
and shilpa accepts it



sorri yaar its too short i will update it soon
leave ur commentssssssssssssssssssss 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey ash though small its very sweet the dream was excellent 👏 that dream was excellent and all girls falling for karan when he is young and ridz isnot jelous when all girls are asking her to give gifts to karan 😕 but very sweet karan gave her rose thats great
hey pls continue soon i cant wait and thanks a ton for ur pm
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Posted: 17 years ago
hi ash.pls mujhe joote mat marna becauase i read ur ff rite now.mujhe maaf kardo main aisi galti dobara kabhi nahi karoongi .bytheway all ur ffs are cool yaar.kahin writer banne ka iraada toh nahi hai 😆
well agar hai toh mujhe shock nahi lagega because ur awesome and ur ffs are mindblowing
yaar agli baar jab update karogi toh mujhe pm zaroor karna
continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks a lot urmi,vidu n kvn for commenting
here goes my nest part



recap;armaan's family get togther with atul's family
ridzi n anji with there familyyyyyyy
armaan n ridzi will get a new dreamm this time


~~~~~~~~~~Dream~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~'''''
a 5 year old boy is playing in front of a park garden with many girls behind him he was just ignoring them a girl of 4 years come there n karan was pleased to know that the girl was ignoring him he thought she was really different
our small boy is none other than our handsome karan n girl is shilpa
karan;heya charming girl wanna be friends??????
shilpaaa;ya sure why notttttttt
karan;i m karan
other girls are soo jealous offffffffff shilpa because they all tired to gain attention but no effect karan igonore all

shilpa;heya i m shilpa


next scence

a small of a 10 years playing cricket n the ball hit on neighbour's wndow the glass broke the owner is shouting
we see a boy running with a girl
karan;shilpa common be fast warna we will be dead that mrs boss sach much ka devil hey
shilpa;haan karan i m running na
karan;thoda fast yaar
shilpa;may PT usha nahi ho karan
karan;hoo god tumhara joke abhi now runn
they both runn towards a small jungle type place where we see a tree house
shilpa;oye karan sara haath do
karan;it is always there for u
shilpa blushinggggggggggg


next scence
we see a teenager girl holding many manyyyyy cards n roses and soo many girls are behind her
girl1;gave this to karan its from tina tell him
shilpa wriitting down ;okay tine next
and all girls gives there present
then we see shilpa going to a small cafetira
with all those things
shilpa;karannnnn u are here and i was searching for u
karan with heart thorbing smile;sorri jaanu u know i m too scared to come to school just look at u
with all presents of mineeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee looking sooo charming
shlpa; haan karan this year u have double dhammaka lots of prsents this is only 1 third

karan;hey bhagu but i will always give u a rose
he gave a rose to shilpa
and shilpa accepts it

next scence we see an
young beautful lady running towards her neigbour(her face is not clear)but she was defintly bpreetty we can only see her eyes properly her eyes had the rare hazel colour which attracted many people
she was standing at the gate yelling
girl;karannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn are u comming or not i m getting lateeeeeeeeee arghhhhhhhhhhh common on fasttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt
an young lady comes his charm was awsome can't see anything proerly but glance can tell he was smart he had blue eyes
karan;shilpaaaaaaaa i m not deaf don't yell like this i m comming i m just late for
he llooked at his watch n
to the girl's face with an innocent yet naughty look
the girl smiled naughty;onl;y 30 mintues
now comon warna we will be late for sanjeevani
karan;haan haan baba sorri gussa chodo please



then we see karan n shilpa apporaching sanjeevani
shilpa;agar Dr rahul ney humey dhata na then its ur fault
karan;haan kaha na sorri n we are not late
shilpa;i think i m going to vomit
karan;i didn't knew that when it did happen (he place his hand on shilpa's stomach)
shilpa ;arghhhhh (removing his hands)karannnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn tum na bilkul nahi sudhorgeyyyy i got vomittingtendency because of ur rid arghh how much fast u go arghhhhhhhh
karan;oh u spoil my hopes(naughty way))
shilpe;u are impossibleeeeeeeee(getting angry or acting angry)
she was going her chappel broke
next moment she was in hands of karan
they looked at each other's eyes wind blowing
shilpa in karan's arms u can imgine the situation

next we see
the sanjeevaniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii the place of dreams
we see all room's of sanjevvani,canteen,dean room,many many rooms we see all the map of sanjevvani




thats it for now
next part will be AR meeting
do comment



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