FF: 'Under The Shade Of Love':Part 8-7/5 - Page 22

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Posted: 17 years ago
I absolutely looved it, Ridaa! πŸ‘

It was all very well written. You're an amazing writer! πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

The elevator scene was great! Really liked the emotions and all described there and the scene where Atul and Angie were discussing Ridz and Armaan knew all the answers right there! 😳

I can't wait to see what happens next. Pleaseee continue sooner this timee yaar. I've been so impatient to know what happens next! 😳 😳

Once again, really nice job. Waiting for the next update..
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Posted: 17 years ago
πŸ‘ Amazing Rida...You are a FAB writer 😳 I cannot WAIT for the next bit πŸ˜ƒ

Can't believe Ridz is taken But Armaan will win her around?
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey i di enjoyed reading d new part...

BUT d conversations between Armaan & Riddhima was quite confusing... πŸ˜•
I m such a dumb head... cud not understand it properly...
Sorry...

But rest of d things were interesting... Specially d game between Atul & Anjie... & Of course Rahul seems to b a smart guy... looked like he got d clue... 😊

- Sheetal
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Posted: 17 years ago
omg that was absolutely brilliant!!! i luvd it sooo much!! i wish they wud have stayed in the elevator... but rahul seemed to be smart enough to know that he had to come and disturb them! i had shivers when i was reading the elevator part.. and it's ridiculously hot here!! plz continue soon!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Rida!!!!

Sorry for commenting kinda late....I was in "shilpa is leaving" depression mode...But ur FF came like a breath of fresh air, Thank you!!! Thank you for this wonderful wonderful update!!

Firstly, thanks for clearing up the mystery of Ridz's boyfriend and Secondly WHY WHY WHY? why did you clear up the mystery boyfriend Ridz had, I'd rather not know then be told that it's Vicky!! I wudn't mind Rahul being her BF...but then again, I'd rather have her leave Vicky for Armaan then her leave Rahul...because I like Rahul!! Although I prefer Rahul in ur FF then Raoool in DMG because Rahul in ur FF is way more sarcastically cool...especially when he said "So, where did you two hook up?" I just loved that line!!!

Okies I'll stop my ranting and comment on the part....OMG!! I loved the restaurant scene!!...I'm speechless!! It was soo beautiful...Atul was asking Anjie but Armaan answering in his mind was just....WOW....I don't know what to say... I think I may have told you before, but you are one of my fave FF writers! and you have proven to me time and time again, that you are an awesome writer!!

The lift scene was fabulous...even though they had less speech verbally their bodily gestures spoke so much! *sigh* I feel so content for some reason, even though the great Shilpa depression is taking it's round...seriously I think you have saved me from falling into further depression with ur FF...just please don't stop writing after Shilpa leaves.

Take Care
Luv
your true and loyal pankha
Nainu
XxX

PS: Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 17 years ago
amazing part! πŸ‘ !
it was really well written 😳
update soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: meow23

dat was a mindblowing prt. bt y is she behavng lik dat.......... thanx 4 d pm.plzz update soonn 😊

You'll know soon...thankoo😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: heyy_babyy

This FF is really interesting...But you really have to update sooner!!!

I'm trying my best...hope you'll understand😳

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jenny1000

That was breathtaking Rida πŸ‘ This is all I have to say πŸ˜ƒ

Thankoo jens...the words are enough!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: kumpal12

Its amazing part yaar...........poor armi felt so bad...
wats wrong with u ridzy πŸ˜‰ .... just kidding.....only AR in elevator....damit y did it come to halt.... u could have done a breakdown to elevator πŸ˜‰ 😳.....
its a nice update........ but do it sooner yaa............continue sooooooooooooonnnnnnnn ya.....
πŸ‘

Hehe...the romantic moments always come to a halt...even me hate thatπŸ˜†...thanx for commenting!!πŸ˜ƒ

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