FF: 'Under The Shade Of Love':Part 8-7/5 - Page 24

Originally posted by: urmila_17

hey its really wonderful part 👏
oved ARs meeting
omg who is this rahul 😡 😡 😡
pls yaar say him to leave ridhima
and i loved armans jelous
thanks for ur pm
pls continue supersoon

hehe...Rahul is just a close friend of Ridhima's...nothing evil😆...Thankoo😃

Originally posted by: missing Vmars

Seriously vicky is her boyfriend ... its taking me a hard time getting over dis fact ... she jus needs 2 dump him esp wen she has armaan waiting for her !!! i jus totally luved da whole elevator scene .... deres sumthig abt holding a conversation in an elevator (or mayb dats coz i have seen 2 many grey's anatomy episodes) .... amazing update ... cant wait for rahul 2 question riddhima !!! waiting for ur next part(s)

I know rite...having Armaan right in front should be such an easy decision to dump Vicky😆..elevators epitimize romance😳😳...Thankoo for commenting!!😃

Originally posted by: jia..

Ahh Rida truly a treat to read!! 👏

Thankoo jia🤗

Starting from the first the way he was thinking abt her , his desires,his dilemma, just brilliant.....

I love writing his emotions...they come out so naturally😳😳

But Ridz is vivek GF??????😕 found it hard to face, hope hes out soon, poor armaan. But i must say outstanding description of each emotion.

Ahh ofcourse my favourite was the lift scene,fantastic dialogs there. 👏

Your not the only one😉

didnt like the tone in which Rahul said it though. Waiting eagerly for you to continue Rida....pls do so soon. Ur ff is a real excellent treat to read.
Love ya
Jia

Thankoo so much jia for liking it...and most of all for commenting it in such a sweet way😳😃

Originally posted by: Bubbly_Shelly

I absolutely looved it, Ridaa! 👏

Thankoo so much shells🤗

It was all very well written. You're an amazing writer! 👏 👏 👏

The elevator scene was great! Really liked the emotions and all described there and the scene where Atul and Angie were discussing Ridz and Armaan knew all the answers right there! 😳

Even I had fun writing it out😃

I can't wait to see what happens next. Pleaseee continue sooner this timee yaar. I've been so impatient to know what happens next! 😳 😳

Hehe...aww...will try my best!!😳😳

Once again, really nice job. Waiting for the next update..

Thankoo shells...really appreciate your comments!!😃😳

Originally posted by: niya

👏 Amazing Rida...You are a FAB writer 😳 I cannot WAIT for the next bit 😃

Can't believe Ridz is taken But Armaan will win her around?

Thankoo niyu😳😳. Ridz is just too pretty...to not be taken😆😉...but in the end we know who her hero is, don't we??😉

Originally posted by: er.Sheetal

Hey i di enjoyed reading d new part...

BUT d conversations between Armaan & Riddhima was quite confusing... 😕
I m such a dumb head... cud not understand it properly...
Sorry...

But rest of d things were interesting... Specially d game between Atul & Anjie... & Of course Rahul seems to b a smart guy... looked like he got d clue... 😊

- Sheetal

Firstly, thankoo for commenting and liking it so much Sheetal😳😳

And no, your not dumb...I myself found myslef having writer's block while writing that scene...so I'm sure it's my writing skills that confused you and not your mind.😊

In that scene...Armaan is asking her why she left. And she responds that would he have preferred to hear the truth of her having a boyfriend already?. And he doesn't belive that it's the only reason why she left. So, that's basically what the scene is. I'll be happy to make things clear if you have any more doubts😳

Originally posted by: armaanaddict

omg that was absolutely brilliant!!! i luvd it sooo much!! i wish they wud have stayed in the elevator... but rahul seemed to be smart enough to know that he had to come and disturb them! i had shivers when i was reading the elevator part.. and it's ridiculously hot here!! plz continue soon!

Hehe...don't you just hate the drop-ins??😆😆

lolz...I'm glad you loved it to the point of shivering in hit temperatures😆😳😳

Originally posted by: Naina123

Hey Rida!!!!

Sorry for commenting kinda late....I was in "shilpa is leaving" depression mode...But ur FF came like a breath of fresh air, Thank you!!! Thank you for this wonderful wonderful update!!

Aww...nainu...were all in the same boat...me going through the same thing. I have to admit that I'm so freakin surprised to know that I actually updated in this state.

Firstly, thanks for clearing up the mystery of Ridz's boyfriend and Secondly WHY WHY WHY? why did you clear up the mystery boyfriend Ridz had, I'd rather not know then be told that it's Vicky!! I wudn't mind Rahul being her BF...but then again, I'd rather have her leave Vicky for Armaan then her leave Rahul...because I like Rahul!! Although I prefer Rahul in ur FF then Raoool in DMG because Rahul in ur FF is way more sarcastically cool...especially when he said "So, where did you two hook up?" I just loved that line!!!

So your glad that I introduced him...and then your mad that you know it's Vicky??😆😆...I'm glad you like this Rahul better...I always imagine Rahul as being this very smart sarcastic man from inside...that's how he looks like😕...even me loved that line.😳

Okies I'll stop my ranting and comment on the part....OMG!! I loved the restaurant scene!!...I'm speechless!! It was soo beautiful...Atul was asking Anjie but Armaan answering in his mind was just....WOW....I don't know what to say... I think I may have told you before, but you are one of my fave FF writers! and you have proven to me time and time again, that you are an awesome writer!!

Thankoo nainu🤗...I love you for making me feel so good about my writing talent. I really don't take it really seriously but it's good to know that I have some creative aspect to me😃😳

The lift scene was fabulous...even though they had less speech verbally their bodily gestures spoke so much! *sigh* I feel so content for some reason, even though the great Shilpa depression is taking it's round...seriously I think you have saved me from falling into further depression with ur FF...just please don't stop writing after Shilpa leaves.

If only I could feel content after writing it...oh well..I guess nothing can take away the pain of Shilpa leaving😭😭...let's stick with each other to pass through this depressing time!😳

Take Care
Luv
your true and loyal pankha
Nainu
XxX

PS: Thanks for the PM

Thankoo nainu...your comments always give me a high(not in the literal sense😆)

Originally posted by: saira_1

amazing part! 👏 !
it was really well written 😳
update soon 😳

Thankoo saira😳

hi rida,

sorry for replying late.......I was so in *shilpa leaving depressed* mood...

thanku for making us smile wid this update...

thanx for d pms...

cont soooooooooooooon.....

luv,
shivani 😳