FF: 'Under The Shade Of Love':Part 8-7/5

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123abc123

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Posted: 17 years ago

#201

awwwwwwwww amazin updte once again
poor armi he is soooo into her luvin da concpt
n da way it was al writen great work as usual
updte sooon n thx 4 da pm

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prerna

@prernawaghray

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Posted: 17 years ago

#202

hey rida 😊
lovely part sweety
finally AR met wow 😳
but a bad encounter 😭 😭 😭
plz make their next meeting a pleasant one yaar
plz just chuck this vivek out of ur story 😉 😆
update fast
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p_a_l_s

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Posted: 17 years ago

#203

wow!!!this fic is amazing...the concept is soo different...continue soon..

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d101

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Posted: 17 years ago

#204

OMG AMAZN was so intense, i had goosebumps...d scene wid atul angie armaan 👏 n den d elevator...i cud feel d tension. and how can i forget wen he saw her...d whole damn thing 👏 👏 👏

in such few words u conveyed so much..every line was layered with so much emotion. ur really talnted.
thanx for da pm. update soon cant wait.

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Kiara

@perfectpiscean

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Posted: 17 years ago

#205

Mind blowing!

Hope Vicky gets dumped...Or...! 😡 😳

Please cont. soon! n thanx 4 da PM!

Marisha

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Kanchan

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Posted: 17 years ago

#206

Lovely!! Finally they meet!!Rahul knows about it???? Vivek go out from the story! Update soon.

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280866

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Posted: 17 years ago

#207

AHH .. great part Rida! 👏
You write so well! 😳 Love itt 😳
Continue soon .. 😃
Thnx for the PM.

Love,
Sanyaa

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urmila

@urmila_17

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Posted: 17 years ago

#208

hey its really wonderful part 👏
oved ARs meeting
omg who is this rahul 😡 😡 😡
pls yaar say him to leave ridhima
and i loved armans jelous
thanks for ur pm
pls continue supersoon

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missing Vmars

@missing Vmars

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Posted: 17 years ago

#209

Seriously vicky is her boyfriend ... its taking me a hard time getting over dis fact ... she jus needs 2 dump him esp wen she has armaan waiting for her !!! i jus totally luved da whole elevator scene .... deres sumthig abt holding a conversation in an elevator (or mayb dats coz i have seen 2 many grey's anatomy episodes) .... amazing update ... cant wait for rahul 2 question riddhima !!! waiting for ur next part(s)

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Jia

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Posted: 17 years ago

#210

Ahh Rida truly a treat to read!! 👏

Starting from the first the way he was thinking abt her , his desires,his dilemma, just brilliant.....

But Ridz is vivek GF??????😕 found it hard to face, hope hes out soon, poor armaan. But i must say outstanding description of each emotion.

Ahh ofcourse my favourite was the lift scene,fantastic dialogs there. 👏

didnt like the tone in which Rahul said it though. Waiting eagerly for you to continue Rida....pls do so soon. Ur ff is a real excellent treat to read.
Love ya
Jia