FF: Pyar Ki Presents/pg26 *FINAL WORDS - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
awesome,

love the kids and the way you have describe them , it is great.

i loved it.

ekta watch out.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22
brilliant story you guys are creating... the kiddies are sooooooooo cute!

please do continuE!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
Awww the kidz r so cute
I love Dimple
Cant wait to see wat there plan is
Plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Kiran_1

Awww the kidz r so cute
I love Dimple
Cant wait to see wat there plan is
Plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon



Thanx everyone.. I will be updating the next bit.. so stay tuned.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
This baccha.. party... is dangerous..
hehe lolzz
continue soon
really interesting
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26

Chapter Two- Naughty Kids

R: Damn It, yeh bache kaha hai?😕 Thinking: Zaroor yeh Dimple ki koi shararat hai… Pata hai ki mein Kanya ke sath waqt bithana chahta hoon..

Ranbir looks behind the bench, and decides the kids must be in the gym room.. so he walks in there and hears a sweet little giggle. He knows exactly whose giggle that is.. Ranbir thinks while smiling: That giggle always reminds me of Kanya.. and then he gets back to his serious mad face.

Ranbir yells: Dimple aur Akash .. BAHAR ao abhi!!

None of the kids come out at all…Ranbir thinks: I better use the guilty track..

R fake crying: 😭Tum bacho kaha chalegaye? Mere bache kaha gaye?

Dimple behind the treadmill whispers to Akash: Yeh Papa bhi na, emotional track use karrahai. Bloody!....🤢

Ranbir comes right behind them and picks them up and looks straight in their eyes.

R yelling: Dimple!! Is this what your Papa and Mama have taught you.. Don't talk this kind of language. Ab chalo, tum log Adita mausi ki ghar chal rahi ho.

Dimple with a smirk, puts her arm on her older bro's shoulder:😉 Kyun Papa, akele Mama ki saat romance karni hey kya… (she giggles)

Akash giggles:😆😆 Sorry, Papa, we just couldn't resist.

R a little embarrassed that the kids understand all this romance stuff he thinks: Damn, it I was 33 years old, and after meeting Kanya I realized what romance was. How does Dimple know about this stuff.

Akash: Papa whoah actually, humne aapko (he starts giggling) well, we saw u kissing Mama yesterday…

Ranbir: Tum done spy karehe the?

Dimple hits Akash: Stupid Aku, tumne kyun bataya.

R scolds Dimple: Ab bas meri ma, ready ho jao. Tum done.. abhi .. So I can leave you at Adita's house.

Dimple: Sure, sure Papa we will get ready so you can start the romance (she winks at her dad) and both the kids leave.

Ranbir smiles and thinks: My kids know me soo well, and he smirks.

::IN Ranya Bedroom::

Kanya is fixing Akash's hair, Akash can tell that his mom is tearing up a little..

Akash wipes his mom's tears: Mama, don't be upset na! We are coming home in four days.

Dimple smirks: Plus, Papa ne kaha ki hum gunde bache hai…. Aur hume jaana chayee.

Kanya has a shocking face. Akash looks at his sister and thinks "Oh Boy, Papa is in trouble.' Ranbir walks in.. and SLAP!

Ranbir: Kannu, ouch, darling why did u slap me?

Kanya yelling at Ranbir: Y did u call my bache… gunde, kameenas! They are my little angels.

Vishal walks in randomly…

Vishal: Mausi, don't yell at Chachu… Dimple is lying…

Kanya gets extremely mad, Dimple has the oh shit face….

K yelling at Dimple: Maine tumahari Papa ko mara… Ab mein tumse baat nahin karungi… for one month.

Dimple: Par Mama I'm sorry, (she holds her ears and bends up and down)

Kanya keeps ignoring her.

Dimple is upset: Teek hai Mama, when I come back I will def. make u smile.

Ranbir: Comon, Kanya maaf kardo, Vaise bhi tumhari haath se slap be mujhe kiss lagta hai.

Dimple, Vishal & Akash giggles: Awww… How Romantic!

Kanya: Chup tum sab log chalo.. Vishal tum aur Azura bhi jaareho.

Dimple goes to her mom and dad: Sorry Mama, Papa!

They all hug. Ranbir tells the kids to head to the car. Kanya comes to Ranbir.

K very sexy voice: Sorry jaan, meine tumhe zoor se mara na.. (she kisses Ranbir's cheek)

He smiles and pulls Kanya by the waist: I need another kiss right here (he points to his lips) They are about to kiss when…. They hear Azura and Dimple's giggles..

Ranbir sarcastically: Bache party ka kaam katam… ab chalo (whispers in Kanya's ear) U owe me a kiss on the lips. (Waves to Kanya) and gives her a fly kiss.

Fav Pic of SugaNain's That I Love this Week:

Comment: Damn it!! I wish I was Kanya in this Pic! And she is not extremely happy like I would be!😡😡



Want to know what happens after the kids leave then…

COMMENT!!! Comment!!!

Edited by suganain - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27

1st to commment
cont soon 😉

btw i wud b happi 2 if i was her!!😳

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
brill update... i loved it... pls continue soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
great.

awww the kids are great.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#30

😭😭😭 I feel like crying. I really do want to see Rankan make mischevious babies. So cute!! I so want to see how Ranbir acts as a parent and how Kanya loves the kids (ranbir's kids)

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