FF: Pyar Ki Presents/pg26 *FINAL WORDS

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Roshni

@dilkeroshni

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

Table of Contents
Pg 1- Trailer
Pg 2- Chapter 1 ~ Bacha Party!! 👏
Pg 4-Chapter 2~ Naughty Kidz!! 😉
Pg6- Chapter 3~ Other Bachas??😲
Pg 11-Chapter 4~Bachon Se Kabhi Nahi Chutkara!! 😕
Pg 14-Chapter 5~ Airport Dhamal 😈
pg 17 - Chap 6 ~ Ranbir Ki Chaal 😛
pg21-Chapter7~Full Blast Kichdi😆
pg 23- Chapter 8~Hum Tum Ek Kamre Mein Band Ho.😉😉

Edited by dilkeroshni - 17 years ago

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Roshni

@dilkeroshni

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

Pyaar Ki Presents
Chapter 1-Bacha Party

Authors Notes: Family Change: Ranbir and Ayan are brothers in this fanfic.

In the City of Mumbai, a bungalow that gives off an impression of beauty, elegance and novelty through its simplicity stands out to everyone who passes by, The gardens are lavished in many different species of flowers, peonies being the most dominant. The smell of paradise comes from within these gardens where four kids are playing. Two boys and two girls.
One of the boys is known as Akash who is trying to grow his hair like his dad because he wants to be just like him. He is very protective of his younger sister dimple and cousins Vishal and Azura . Dimple is a beautiful child with such an innocent face resembling her mother in appearance but having all the characteristics of her father. Dimple and Akash share the chocolate brown eyes of their mother, while Akash has the sweet smile of his mother and Dimple has the naughty smirk of her father. Vishal is a very sweet boy, who is a Xerox copy of his father ayan except he has a bit more sense of adventure and liveliness than his father had, He is close in age to Akash. Vishal's younger sister is a copy of her mother except a lot smarter and doesn't use her crying as an excuse. Azura and Dimple give Akash and Vishal a run for their money when they join forces.

In the window above these laughing and playing children .

Ranbir is furiously typing in his private journal on his computer.

January 14, 2012

Life cannot be ane better. I got two kids with a gorgeous wife.. Life is beautiful.. It's wonderful, fantastic, superb, awesome. NOT! These baches are such "kebab mein hadis" Romance where is it these days? I wake up with Akash's whining, and hear Dimple's cries for my attention.
Where is the love, romance, passion 😭…. Everyone talks about how there is always time for love.. right YET they forget to mention about the bacha party… wonder why??

K: Rannu!

And ah the voice of my angel 🤗… That's the only thing those lips have been doing.. Rannu! Rannu! The kids need this, the kids need that, and new backpacks and blah blah blah… When will those lips touch mine again? Uhhh… I forget the last time.

Kanya yelling at the top of her lungs: Rannu, the kids are staying at Adita Di's house for four days! Go drop them off and make sure they take everything.. I put their bags near the door.

Ranbir stops typing and looks up from his computer.. and has a mischievous smile on his face.. he looks at Kanya and winks..😉

She smiles back and as if she can read what his mind is saying. Ranbir thinking "Hmmm…2 nd Honeymoon time." He smiles….or was that a smirk??

Outside in the gardens Dimple whispers to Akash…

Dimple: Akash mom ne bola papa ko ke who humme adita kahala ke ghar chor do, common dad ko thora sa darate(scare) hai..(same smirk that was on her dad's face just a few minutes ago is seen on her face)

Akash: rehne do… remember what happened last time…

Dimple: Stop being such a sissy mister and bahut maza aye ga..

Vishal and Azura run up to them

Vishal: tum log yah ape kya khusar phusar( bur bur) kar rahe ho.. koi special planning chal rahi hai kya?

Dimple: haan suno meri baat.

After ten minutes Ranbir walks out the door of the nanda bangalow
and goes towards the garden and once he gets there he is shocked at not what he sees but at what he does not see. 🤬😲

Wanna know what happens next??? then COMMENT COMMENT COMMENT

Edited by dilkeroshni - 17 years ago

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Fatemah

@KC294

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+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#16

yay me first.... mind blowing ya shud i say mind hi blow hochuka.... ye bache kitne chalu hai... apne papa par joke.... i loved it... now i can go and sleep...😆😆😆... gr8 update... eagerly awaiting the next update... TRP Rating from KC 10/10.... 5⭐️ work....

Edited by KC294 - 17 years ago