FF: Pyar Ki Presents/pg26 *FINAL WORDS

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Niroo

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Posted: 17 years ago

#31

aww that was really cute..
this kids a tell u..
i mean. they act like.. adults
geez
continue soon please

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Kiran

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Posted: 17 years ago

#32

that was soooooo cute
Plzzzzzz continue soooooooon

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SugaNain

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Posted: 17 years ago

#33

Sara will be updating the next part.. So Stay tuned!😃

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Aysha

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Posted: 17 years ago

#34

That was really cute. Ranbirs children uspe gaye hain. Mischievious. 😆

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Shazeen

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Posted: 17 years ago

#35

i luveeeeeed itttttttt
continue karo 😆 😆

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Roshni

@dilkeroshni

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Posted: 17 years ago

#36

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Thank you for reading everyone and commenting and all the silent readers... PLs COMMENT

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SugaNain

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Posted: 17 years ago

#37

I know Sara we soo rock the Fan-Fic World... "Aasman ko Choolege Hum Dono" 😃

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Roshni

@dilkeroshni

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Posted: 17 years ago

#38

Chapter 3- Other bachas??

In the Car:

Ranbir comes out to see that everyone is sitting in the car like little angels. ( he narrows his eyes and thinks little angels .. yeah right more like little devils *_*)

He walks up to the car and tries to open the drivers side door… tries it once more and still no luck.. he looks in the window to see dimple and azura laughing like crazy and akash and vishal sitting there like their gulams.. Dimple holds up the car keys and swings them back and forth to taunt her father. (he thinks in his mind O hohohoho its sooo not working this time my little jaan.. I am your father after all hehe) he makes the same face dimple has and out of his pant pockets he pulls out another pair of the car keys and swings them back and forth. He sticks his tongue out at dimple whose face has a frown on her face. He sits in the car seat and turns to look at dimple and azura..

R: with a mocking smile… so my little darlings did you like my little surprise…. I am your father/uncle after all… mera hi game waapis mere pai… I'll show you who is the nanda bad***…

D: please dad… stealing kisses from mommy and using that tapoori language and acting like a kid most of the time does not make you a bad***..

R: ….(with a very serious and stern look) Did you just use a bad word in my car young lady??

A: please if you considered that a bad word then why do you use it yourself…. And if your going to stop the car and make Dimple get out… first you have to do it then you can ask dimple to step out… otherwise you'd be such a hypocrite…

A & V: yeah she's right ( all the kids started laughing and Dimple sticks out her tongue at Ranbir and in return he makes a face at her)..

R: uhuh… if I get out and leave how will you get to Adita Mausi's house???

It gets really quiet in the car now…

R: Uhuh.. that's what I thought so…

10 mins later they reach adita's house…( she and suhaas have finally bought a house of their own so no more churail saasu maa)

S: Ranbiiiir… goes up to him and gives him a hug… which he returns in a very awkward manner… then Suhaas turns to the kids and gives them all a hug and candies out of nowhere.

Adita: walks up to Ranbir and gives him a hug.. hey kids how was the car ride?….

All the kids: the long face towards Adita who turns to ranbir..
Adita: What did you do now Ranbir???

All the kids in their mind: hehehe hes in big trouble now….

Ranbir: I didn't do anything.. they tried to lock me out of the door and Dimple said a bad word…

Adita: O.. I see I think we should tell Kanya about this done you Ranbir (with a little smile on her face)

All the kids: Oh …..

Adita: clears her throat and all the kids apologize…

Ranbir: well here are your little devils… enjoy well as much as they let you and I can have my freedom for atleast two weeks and time w/ my beautiful Angel (he imagines Kanya in her white silk nightgown for five seconds)…. Bye everyone! (makes a face at the kids and runs toward the car.looks behind to see all four devils following him.. he stops all of a sudden and turns around and gathers them all in a hug..

Dimple in a sad tone: Papa… Papa won't you miss us??

R: of course my little devils I'll miss all of you and have fun here while I have fun at home (with a mischievous smile on his face)

D: oh ho for one minute stop thinking about mom and say bye to us at least before you get lost in your own little world….

R: hehe (he gives all of them a big bear hug and kisses them on the cheek ) have fun.. don't give your Adita mausi a hard time.. and if you give her trouble I swear I will tell everything to big commander at home.. got it??

D & Ak & A & V: with innocent faces why would we bother mausi and suhaas mamoo…

R: to mere akele ke hi shamat ati hai.. okay aneways bye kids.. ( everyone waves to him and then they all go into the house. He gets in the car and leaves…

All the time on the way back he was just thinking of Kanya and their next two weeks alone in heaven… he speeds up in order to try to get back faster… within 15 minutes hes back home and walking towards his room.. with a big smile on his face that can light up the whole mansion… he goes in and sees Kanya with her reading glasses on reading her novel facing towards the window.. he locks the door and goes behind her and starts kissing her neck..

K: what if my husband comes home??

R: your husbands a very lucky man.. BTW.. u look like a Sexy Liberian..

K giggles and removes her glasses: My husband's a lucky man …really how so?..

R: moves in front of her and sits down on the floor and pulls her toward him…

Their lips fit perfectly onto each other… at first it was a tender kiss… and as seconds went by it seemed to catch fire and become more and more passionate….

R: Kanya….he's a lucky man because he gets to have someone as perfect as you..

He picks her up and takes her to the bed where he lays her down… and takes off his shirt.. and goes on top of Kanya with a very hungry look in his eyes…about to open her silk blouse.

R mischievous look: Kanya…Baby

K mischievous look: Ranbir…sweetie..

All of a sudden there is a knock on the door…

Ranbir ignores it…And is about to unloosen the strap of the blouse.

K nudges R: Ranbir someone is knocking on the door

Ranbir does not want to pay attention that annoying knocking: I know if we stay really quiet maybe they'll go away..

K: what if it's Mallika Mom or Big D…?

R: argh… abhi bacha party se chutkara mila aura abhi yeh…

Knock on the door again and it's a specific knock that only Ayan makes.. and they can hear Shanaya crying from the door

R: lagta hai is bacha party ko bhi kahi bhejna parega…… Ayan aur Shanaya.. Err! (angry face)

You want to know what Happens Next then Comment!! Comment!!!
P.s we are not updating until we get 20 comments at the very least =p

Edited by dilkeroshni - 17 years ago