Fan fiction for the week 12th-19th sep - Page 504

hey ppl i am here...koi to notice kero!

Nidhi ki bachi tum to shaitano ki nani ho .... manu naam hai mera naki ramu ..samjhi ....

hi Richa! HAPPY BELATED BIRTHDAY! sorry for a late reply yaar...may u live a very long life luve kiran

tumhe notice karne ki koi zaroorat hi nahi kiran kyonki tum jahan jati ho automatically sabko pata chal jata hai

hehe nidhi...yaar main kal jaldi main thi...i had to go...lekin tumharay omments parh ker sach main main sab se ziada khush hoti hoon..lurve ya kiran

opps sorry ramu i mean manu
waise i was also wondering that tum jaisi ladki aur naam ramu 😕 but waise manu is a sweet name

I agre wid Nidhi...Kiran hoo aur hum notice naa karay...asai hosakta... 😉 hii Kiran..kya chal chal raha hai.. 😳

OK GUYS SO HERES MY STORY'S 3RD PART.SO HERE GOESLAMHE
recap:kashish n sujal met in london n a fight between wich was stopped by zaib n kripa
kashish n kripa reach the hotel.they reach their room n kashish is very angey while kripa is trying to control her.
kripa:kashish cool down yaar
kashish:nahiin kripa main use chodungi nahiin ek baar bas ek aur baar vo mujhe mile toh bas then
kripa:ok ok nahiin chodna par ab to cool down
kashish:ok fine
kripa:bas yunhi ek smile to do
kashish(gives a sweet smile):ab theek hai
kripa:tats better
kashish:accha yeh sab chod tu bata zaib se kya baatein hui
kripa:arre yaar vo to(n she's lost in her dreams)
FLASHBACK:
kripa stood outside zaib's room n she knocked on the door.she heard sum1 say "come in".she was 2 excited cause she knew tat it was zaib who called her in.she was abt to get in wen she tripped n was abt to fall wen zaib caught hold of her.they looked in each others eyes for sumtime.they were lost in each other wen suddenly they hear sum1 talking outside zaib's room so they got up with a jerk.
zaib:aap theek to hain naa
kripa:haan main bilkul theek hoon.thanxx
zaib:waise aap kaun hai aur yahaan kaise
kripa:main aapki bohot badi fan hoon aur mera naam kripa hain.main yahaan aapse milne aayi hoon
zaib:wow lovely name.hi im zaib vo to aapko pata hi hoga(n he brings his hand forward)
kripa:jee main(seeing his hand)
zaib:haan haan yeh haath maine aap hi ke liye badaya hai...can v be frnds ms.kripa???
kripa:(very xcited n shaking his hands)sure
after this they both went out to find kashish n sujal fighting.
END OF FLASHBACK
kripa was telling all this 2 kashish
kashish:wow kripa u'll r frnds now
kripa:haan kashish n i think i have feelings for him
kashish:kya tu sach bol rahi hai kripa
kripa:teri kasam
kashish:im so happy 4 u(n they both hug)
both of them then went to sleep.
kashish n kripa both enjoyed a lot 4 1 week in london.they did nopt meet zaib or sujal.
kashish n kripa r on the airport.they r ready to go back to shimla.they were moving towards their flight wen kashish saw ice-cream n she wanted to eat it so she said kripa to board the flight she'll xcum in 5 mins.she runs to buy ice-cream for herself.wen dhe was cuming back she collapsed with a guy n her ice-cream fell on her dress.
ok guys here ends 3rd part.plzzzz comment guys. 😛

hehe nidhi...taht was so cute...main kia koi DHAMAKA ker ke ati hoon jo sab ko waisey hi pata chal jata hai!

Hiiiiii Kiran .....

good aur yeh baat hamesha yaad rakhna .....

Thanx Adi ....abhi mere dimag main ek aur gaana bhi hai ...nahin actually main poem hai ..woh bhi post karoogi ....thodi der main ....
To aaj Tutor ne tumhein kya padhaya ???? 😆