Fan fiction for the week 12th-19th sep - Page 506

ok now me back...ab main stories post kerti hoon

well komal u r a bacha i will call u abhi abhi toh kiran ne comment kiya hai stupid gal

haaaaahayeeeee...komal abhi comment kiya na...yaar ghalat baat hai yaar i love ur stories...acha ab promsie rozana comment karoon gi love kiran!

Komal...again a fight..maza aaaraha hai..inkii larai mei yaar thoda bada part hii likh deti...lekin da part of was rocking...... 👏

ok noiw first of all MERA NAAM HAI MOHABBAT

WELL THIS IS A VERY VERY VERY IMPORTANT PART OF MY STORY...


Rishi leaves the house and Kasak looks at Kashish in a trimuphant way
Kasak: Bhabhi...i am shocked..main nahi janti thi keh ap aissi ho gi...kyun? Big B se dil nahi bharra ap ka na...
Kash: KASAKK!!!
Kasak: dun u dare shout at me! ghalat kaam ke ke ap jhoot bolain gi aur main maan loon gi...forget it!
Kash: aik baat to tum meri kaan khol ker sun lo....tumharay uss Rishi main na to mujhey koi interest hai na hi mujhey uss se koi rishta rakhna hai...aur haan i am not answerable to you...main jawabdeh hoon to sirf apnay pati Sujal ko aur mujhey itna yaqeen hai ke woh meri baat par shaq nahi akray ga....haan lekin tum apnay pyaar per bhut andha vishwas kerti ho i am telling u
Kasak: meri life main interfere na hi karain to behtar hoga
Kash: mujhey tumhari life main interfere karnay ka shauq nahi hai...main sirf itna chahti hoon keh tum Rishi se door raho warna Sujal ko acha nahi laggay ga...aur ussey main takleef main anhi dekh sakti...aur shayed aj takk tum ne Sujal ka ghussa dekha nahi....itna dehaan rakhna ke Sujal ka ghussa kabhi tum per utaray aissi naubat an aye
Kasak: oh Pleaseee!! ap ke boring bhashans....Rishi sahi kehta hai...u r too much! aik baat ko kheench ke kahan le jati hain...aab aiye main batati hoon Big B ko ke un ki patni kia gull khila rahi hain
Kash: Sujal ko batana chahti ho? kia batao gi tum ussay.....yehi ke main ne Rishi ke saath....? tum soch bhi kaisa sakti ho aissa
Kasak: ooohhhh...lagta hai ap ko darr lag raha hai? kahiin Big B ka ghussa ap per nikal gaya to...?
Kash: itna to bharosa mujhey apnay pyaar per hai keh woh mujhey samajhnay main ghalti nahi ker sakta
Kasak: we will see!
Kasak and Kashish are fighting in Kashish's room
Kasak very victoriously goes down and Kashish follows her
Most of the guests have gone cuz teh engagement is over....only the Raheja's and Garewals are left
Kasak: Big B!!!
Sujal, who is standing talking to Kavya, looks back
Sujal: haan Kasak!
Kasak: aj mujhey ap ki pyaari biwi kay barray main ap se kuch baat akrni ahi
Sujal: haan bolo....
Kasak: rukiye..pehley main sab logon ko aware ker doon ke yahan kaun sa melodrama honnay wala hai
she takes everyone's attention....and Sujal has this puzzled look on his face...he sees Kashish standing in front of him...as usual ro rahi hai
He heads towards kashish but kasak gets there before...barri beyrahmi se woh Kashish ka bazoo pakar ker ussay sab ke samnay la ker kharra karti hai
Kasak: yeh...Kashish...ap sab ki ladli bahu...janti hain inhon ne aj kia kiya hai?
Everyone is shocked to see Kasak like this
Veena: kia hua Kasak...tum kia kehna chahti ho?
Kasak: mumma...ap ki yeh jo ladli aur pyari bahu hain na...jo sirf Big B se pyaar karti hain...sab dhoka karti hain
Kashish: Kasakkk!!
Kasak: mujhey bolnay dain...sab ko pata to chalay ap ki asliat ke barray main
Sujal: kia keh rahi hot um kasak?
Kasak: Big B...yeh Kashish...ap ki patni, meri bhabhi aur iss gahr ki bahu...inhon ne aj jo ia hai shayed uss se in ke naam per jo dhabba laga hai woh kabhi nahi mittay ga
Varrun: kasak...what the hell are u saying?
Kasak: chalo..lets break teh suspense now....yeh Kashish...abhi abhi main ne issay aur aik larkay ko kamray main locked dekha hai.....
Shocked!
Kasak: jee haan...abhi abhi Kashish ke kamray main se Rishi ko nikaltay huay main ne dekha hai...woh kamra bhi locked tah aur ights bhi off thi
Sujal: KASAKKK!!!!! YEH KIA BAQWAS KER RAHI HO TUM?
Kasak: yaqeen nahi hota na apko....lekin eyh sach hai Big B...yeh sch hai...ap ki yeh adersh patni...inhon ne uss insan ke saath uss kamray main......
TAPAKHHH!!!! Kasak kay moun per aik zorrdarr thappar....by Sujal
Sujal: tumhain sharam nahi ati...itni ghatia baat akrtay huay...woh bhi Kashish ke barray main
Kasak: kyun yaqeen anhi ker rahay ap meri baat per? Rishi ne mujhey khud bataya hai ke Kashish ne hi ussey kamray main bulaya tah
Sujal: uss Rishi ki baat per yaeen hai tumhain lekin Kashish per nahi
Kasak: haan...kyunki main Rishi se pyaar akrti hooon aur uss per bhut vishwas hai mujhey
Sujal: jahan tumharay pyaar ki hadd khatam hoti hai wahin meray pyaar ki shuruaat hoti hai kashish ke liye....main tumhari baat per bilkul yaqeen nahi karta
Tanisha: agar aissa hi hai Sujal...to woh iss ke kamray main kia kar raha tha?aur phir yeh ro kyun rahi hai?
Sujal sees Kashish who is standing in the middle cring bittery
He walks up to her and raises her head...woh uss ke ansoo saaf karta hai, shakes his head in a answer for a no....Kashish doesnt look up but keeps on staring at the ground
Prerna : Kasak...tujhey ghalatfehmi hui ho gi!
Kasak: no aunty aissa kuch nahi hai...
Prerna: bass Kasak...ab Kashish per ilzaam lagana band akro
Kasak: ap to aisa kaain gi hi na...ap ki beti hai na...issi liye..ap nahi janti kia karti hain yeh humaray peeth peechey...yeh jissay ap log devi kehtay hain na woh asal main paap ker ke ai hai
Sujal at once turns around aur ungli utha ker Kasak ko dekhta hai
Sujal: BASSS!!!! ap iss ke aggay aik lafaz nahi.....aik lafaz nahi....enough...bhut bardasht ker liya main ne...kia...kia kaha tum en Kashish ke barray main/ uss Kashish ke barray main jiss ki mein sachay dil se pooja karta hoon....uss kashish ke barray main jo mera gharoor hai...arey mujhey khud per itna yaqeen nahi hai jitna Kashish per hai...aur agar yahan Kashish pavitar nahi hai to ap main se koi aik bhi pavitar nahi hai...Rishi ki baat maan rahi ho tum?uss Rishi ko main achi tarahs e janta hoon....Kashish meri ankhon main dekho
Kashish looks up direct into his eyes
Sujal: ab to khuda bhi aker keh dey ke Kashish ne yeh kaam kia hai to main nahi manoon ga! iss ki ankhain mujh se kabhi jhoot nahi bolti...
Veena: Sujall! main janti hoon tujhey burra laga hai lekin itna andha vishwas acha nahi (ACTUALLY I WILL TELL U A BIT ABT PAST: VASSU AND TANISHA AND KASAK HAVE BEEN BRAINWAHSING VEENA AGAINST KASHISH FOR MANY DAYS...AND VEENA HAS BEEN ABLE TO GIVE WAY TO THEM...SO NOW SHE IS AGAINST KASHISH...MATLAB USS PER IYNA VISHWAS NAHI KARTI AB LIKE IN KTH...SHE IS 60% OF THE USUAL EVERYDAY SAAS NOW CUZ OF TEH BARINWASHING...NOW BACK TOS TORY)
Sujal looks disbelievingly at Veena
Sujal: kia kaha ap ne mumma...ap Kashish per yaqeen nahi karti>
Veena: aissa nahi hai...lekin ankhon ka dekha jhoot to nahi hota
Sujal: ankhain hi to dhoka khati hain mumma
Veena: to shayed teri ankhain dhoka kha gayi hain....
Sujal: ap ko kia ho gaya hai mumma....ap janti hain Kashish aissa kuch nahi karay gi
Vassu: to phir yeh abhi takk chup kyun hai Sujal?
Sujal: yeh chup ahi..sach kaha ap ne...yeh chup hai iss liye nahi keh yeh jhooti hai...yeh chup hai kyunki yeh in sab logon se aissi baat ki umeed nahi rakhti...yeh chup hai kyunki aj bhi izzat akrti hai ap logon ki...yeh chup hai kyunki yeh ajni hai keh bolay gi tab bhi gunahgar thehrayi jayegi aur na bolay gi tab bhi...
Veena: lekin Kashish jhoot bhi to bol skati hai
Sujal: Mummmaaa!!!
Veena: BASS SUJAL!!!!bass....uss waqt se sirf aik naam hai KASHISH KASHISH KASHISH...aur kuch nahi samajh ati tujhey?
Sujal: mumma...ap shayed iss ki ankhon main sachayi ko dkeh anhi pa rahi hain
Veena: ap mujhey kuch aur nahi sunana...main ab tum sab ko aik baat batana chahti hoon....main aur tumharay papa Kasak ki engagement ke liye tayar hain...woh bhi Rishi ke saath...Rishi aik bhut hi acha larka hai aur woh Kasak se bhut pyaar karta hai
Sujal: mumma....Kasak aur Rishi? this is not happening...ap uss ko anhi janti
Veena: nahi Sujal...hum ussey jantay hain...tum lgon ke honeymoon main tumharay peechey woh Kasak ka haath mangnay aya tha...aur hum logon ko woh bhut pasand hai...tumharay papa ko bhi..aur main anhi chahti keh Rishi aur Kasak ke darmiyan koi aye..
Kashish speaks up for the first time
Kash: mumma...plz aissey nahi kariye...woh alrka Kasak ke liye theek nahi hai
Kasak: tum chup rao Kashish...main tumse ziada achi tarah janti hoon ke Rishi ko...so better keep out of it
Sujal: ap meri baat to suniye mumma....
Veena: nahi Sujal...bass....ab final ho chuka hai
Sujal: mumma Kasak ki zindagi tabh ho jayegi
Kasak: Big B main apni zindagi ko kaisey guzaroon gi amin achi tarahs e janti hoon
Veena: aur ab aglay haftay in ki engagement hai
Sujal: ap ne mujhey batana zaroori bhi nahi samjha?
Veena: tumhain harr baat batana zaroori nahi hai...main tumhari maa hoon...aur iss ghar main kia hoga main teh keroon gi...terye papa yahan nahi hai jab woh America se ayengay to RNG aur Nanda Enterprises ka bhi merger ho jayega
Sujal: itna kuch ho gaya...ap ne mujhey nahi bataya mumma...akhir main bhi iss ghar ka hissa hoon...aur yeh merger to bilkul bhi nahi hoga
Veena: yeh humara faisla hai aur tumhain humaray faislay tornay ka koi haq nahi hai
Sujal: matlab ab mera iss ghar main kuch nahi...
Veena: haan Sujal...kuch nahi rakha tumharay liye iss ghar main
Prerna: Veena yeh tum kia...?
Veena: Prerna...yeh mera gahr hai..idhar kia hoga yeh aj takk mein decide kerti ayi hoon....Kasak aur Rishi ki engagement bhi hogi aur merger bhi..jissey bhi in baaton se koi problem hai woh ja sakta hai..koi ussey nahi rokkay ga
Sujal: kia? ap jannay ko keh rahi hain...humain jannay ko keh rahi hain ap? apnay betey ko...
Veena: haan Sujal...agar tujhey koi problem hai to tu ja sakta hai
Sujal: apnay khoon ko apnye se juda kaisey kar sakti hain ap?
Veena: tujhey zabardasti nahi bhej rhai main..tu jana chahta hai to u chala ja
Kash:muma ap yeh sab... Sujal ap ka beta hai to ussey kaisey jannay de sakti hain ap?
Veena: NAHI HAI YEH MERA BETAA!!!!!!!!

SHOCK SHCK SHOCK!!! lagta hai aj ke liye kafi shock ho gaye hain...baq baad main...PLZ COMMENTS DO...LOVE KIRAN!

thanxxxxx for all ur comments guys aur main aage se bade parts post karne kii koshish karoongi. 😛

KASHISH PYAAR KI

After some time,Parvati and Om coem down...they are looking quite good and cute couple hehe...kahir veeryone wishes them and then they start talking to guests
Kripa comes up with some people to Parvati and Om
Kripa: Badi-Ma...yeh meri friend hai Sneha...aur yeh us ski barri behen Ganga..
Ganga: namaste AuntY!
Parvati: namaste beta...kaisey ho tum?
Ganga: main theek hoon....
Kripa: arey Kashish...Pooja tu chal amin tujhey kashish se milwati hoon...Ganga Jiji aiye na
They move to where Kashish, Sujal, Varrun, Mehek and Saahil are standing
Kripa: hi everyone! i wnat u to meet my friend...this is Pooja...aur yeh un ki barri behen Ganga
Kashish: hi!
Kripa: this is Kashish...Sujal....Varrun and Mehek...aur yeh Saahil Bhaiya
Everyone: Hi!
Pooja: arey mera call araha hai...main ati hoon....excuse em please!
Everyone is left standing tehre
Kashish: Krippa Sujal....chalo yaar aik important baat karni hai...excuse me please
She takes away Krippa and Sujal...left beind are Mehek and Varrun...Ganga and Sahil
Varrun: to Ganga Jiji...ap kia karti hain?
Ganga: main? main to apnay papa ki company main kaam karti hoon...Viraani Industries main Managing Director hoon main
Sahil: Viraani Industries? un ke saath humari copnay ne to bhut kaam kia hai...
Ganga: Garewal Companies and Ltd? right? ....mujhye pata hai...infact Garewals have always fulfilled their work splendidly
They start talking....
Well....after soem time the party gets over (THE STORY HAS BEEN GOING ON FOR TEH PARTY FROM TEH LAST 5 PARTS SO BETTER STOP IT)

The next day, Kashish wakes up very late when Veena wakes her up...she wakes up and comes down to breakfast in her night suit...she has her hair open, her eyes are heavy with sleep, masacara moun per phela hua..hehe...sheis looking weird..well jab woh nashtay ki table per ati hai to sirf Sujal aur Angad table per hottay hain...Mehek and Varrun are off to college.Shruti has gone home, Krippa is in the kitchen and the elders are done with their breakfast...Sujal is also in his night suit with his hair ruffled and Angad is dressed...Kashish comes and sits down with Sujal
Sujal: yaar tumhain bhi jaga diya...itni subbah to main kabi nahi jaga
Kashish: nashta....?
Angad: Krippa abhi nashta tayar ker rahi hai
Kashish: haye sayapa....abhi takk nashta nahi bana...
Sujal: yaar aik to raat ko itna late so ooper se subah subah jaga detey hain
Krippa enters
Krippa: Sujal..yeh subah subah hai? subah ke 11 bajj chukay hain...yeh Kashish to rozana late uthati hai...mujhey laga tah tum to kaam ke punctual ho gay
Sujal: jo baat Kashish main hai woh mujh main na ho...not possible
Krippa: waisey Sujal...tum jab bhi attay ho na meri best friend ko mujh se door ker detey ho
Kashish: Krippa...baqwas na akr...aissi koi baat nahi hai
Krippa: mazak kar rhai thi yaar....acha bata kia khana pasand kerey gi?
Kashish and Sujal say at the same time: Aloo ke parathay!!
then they look at each other and laugh
Krippa: main abhi layi...
She is about to leave
Angadd: Krippa.....
Krippa stops at once and looks back....her heart beats going real fast
Krippa: haan Angad...
Angad: mere liye aloo ke parathay nahi banana...
Krippa: phir?
Angad: toast, fried egg and one glass juice...
Sujal: yeh restaurant nahi hai Angad...araam se bata tu to order de raha hai..
Angad: Krippa...is that ok with u warna main aloo ke parathay hi kha loon ga
Krippa: no porblem at all...main bana deti hoon...anything else?
Kashish: Krippa...ho gaya...tu ja aur nashta bana dey pleaseeeeeeee
Krippa smiles and goes from there...
Angad, for the first time, looks carefully at Kashish
Angad: arey tumhain kia hua?
Kashish: kia hua?
She is so sleepy ke uss ne apna sarr Sujal ke shoulder per rakha hua tha
Angad: tumharay chehray ko...?
Kashish: kia hua mere chehray ko?
Angad: pooray chehray per mascara aur kajal phela hua hai....aur baal phattay huay hain
Kashish: haye main marr gayi...main ne kal raat moun dhoya, waisey hi so gayi aur ab waisey hi uth ayi...oh no
Sujal: koi khaas farq nahi parta...
Kashish: Sujalll!!!!!!!
Sujal: acah nashta kar lo phir ja ker change ker lena...
Nashta comes aur woh nashta kartay hain...talking
COMMENTS LOVE KIRAN!

Adiiiiii chemistry ... 😆 mere bhi 0 aate the chemistry main too.... not my cup of tea..mujhe pata hai meri mummy kaisi hasti thi mere upar ..meri halat dekh kar ...( unhone masters ki hai chem aur English main ) ....khoob mazaak banati thi mera ..par phir bhi mujhe kabhi samajh main nahin aati .... aur practicals main to Farre kaam aate the ..... 😆

mujhe mere ek classmate ne Tepa marvaya tha chemistry ke practical ka ........ he he he ...kabhi nahin bholoongi usko main ...sir saamne khade the aur eoh mujhe DICTATE kar raha tha .......... 😆

now LIFE HO TO AISSI
LIFE HO TO AISSI!!

Sujal kamray main beth ker laptop per kaam kar raha hota hai jab Kashish wahan ati ahi...
Kashish ke peechey hi sneha aur vansh bhi arahy hotay ahin
Sneha: mumma plz na plz plz plz...
Vansh: haan mumma plzzzzz.
Kashish: kaha na nahi!
Sujal: uffooo....kia hua tum log shor kyun macha rahay ho?
Sneha: papa dekho na mumma choclate nahi de rahi
Sujal: yaaaar...tum log poora din choclate khattay ho...dil nai bharta
Vansh: papa choclate se dil nahi pait bharta hai
Kashish: Sujal...plz inhain sambhalo main change ker ke ati hoon
Sujal: kyun tumhain kahiin jana hai?
Kashish: nahi to...
Sujal: phir kyun change ker rhai ho?
Kashish: aissey hi..mood agaya
Sujal: din main chaar baar to tum kapary change kerti ho...aissey lagta hai ke kisi party main ja rhai ho
Kahs: tumhain problem kia hai?
Sujal: meir probem tum ho...
Kash: aur meri problem yeh bachay hain
Sujal: to iss main main kia karoon?
Kash: meri problem ki main wajah bhi tum hi ho...
Sujal: lo!!! ab main en kia kiya?
Kash: tum kuch na kartay na to meri problem na hoti...
Sujal: Kashish...kuch to lihaaz kiya karo...bachay kharray hain
Sneha: papa papa...
Sujal: kia hai?
Vansh: dont worry humain waisey hi sab pata hai...
Sujal: kia pata hai?
Sneha: jo mummy bol rahi hai....problem ki wajah
Kash: dekha! dekha...bilkul tum per gaye hain tumharay bachay
Sujal: haan haan....mujh per gaye hain issi liye sab kehta hain bhut pyaaray bachay hain..nahi to sab darr jattay gar tumharay jaissey hotay
tab hi raju aur khushi bhi ajatay hain
tthey end up in afight aur Raju Sneha ke baal kehnch raha hota hai aur Vansh ko Khushi se chandain per rahi hoti ahin
Kashish aker sab ko do do thapar sarr per lagati hai
Kash: badtameez....koi sharam nahi ahi...harr waqt Komolika aur Prerna ki tarah laraty rehtay ho
Sneha: mom...correction...Parvati aur Pallavi ki tarah
Khushi: no no...GK aur Simran ki tarah
Sujal: SHUT UPPP!!! harr waqt STAR PLUS.....
Vansh: arey papa ap dkehain to sahi..itni hot hot larkian ati hain
Sujal rakh ker sarr per thapar marta hai
Sujal: badtameez beyhuda....sharam nahi attay...dhai inch ke ho na to utnay ki raho..aik thapar parray ga zameen main ghuss jao gay
Kash: Sujal chup karo.....haan Khushi batao kal Kavyanjali main kia hua?
Sujal: Kashis tumhari hi wajah se yeh log...
Kahs: ssh.....haan beta bolo
Khushi: mumma kkal na Kavya Pammi ki beyizati karta hai...
Sneha: aur Pammi Anjali ke khilaaf bolti hai...
Khushi: phir ghussey main Pammi bahir jati hai...
Sneha:aur Anjali un ke peechey jati hai...
Khushi: lekin Anjali ko garri lagti hai..woh girr jati hai aur...
Sneha: uss ka khoon nikalta hai...phri woh pammi ko kehti hai MY BABY! aur pait pakar leti hai...
Sujal: OH MY GOD! KASHISH...tum bachon ke saath ebth ekr yeh beyhuda dramayen dekhti ho?
Sneha: papa...
Vansh: iss main beyhuda kia hai?
Khushi: its natural!
Kashish: to kia hua...in ki wajah se main apnay dramay miss nahi akr sakti
Sujal: natural ki bachi.....chalo bahir nikalo...aur ab aissi baat suni na main ne to dkehna!
he throws them out of teh room...lol and Kashish goes to chang
FOR UR INFO: THEIR CHILDREN
KHUSHi: 6
VANSH: 5
SNEHA: 5 (TWINS WITH VANSH)
RAJU: 4

well thats it....comments plz..love kiran

Nidhi tumahra bhii birthday hai...chaloo i will also wish u in advance.... 😛

WISH U A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY MAY LIFE B FULL OF SUCESS N HAPPINESS... 😃