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Posted: 16 years ago
#71
Here i continue , Sorry it is short but at least i am not taking a bigger break
May I have the pleasure "

Naina was transferred to a particular instance of her past. She hesitated a little and rendered her hand to Cap Rajveer., who took it and put it on his shoulder. Naina felt a a hot flame shooting through the nerves of her into her brain, numbing her whole body for a second. The same feeling trebled as she felt his hand around her waist pulling her towards him and jerked stopped to a safe distance from his body. She was afraid that her face would reveal her inner turmoil. She kind of forced herself to smile. She could not look straight into his eyes as she feared they would melt her completely and she would drop down like a jelly fish.

"Let us start:"

Naina nodded in reply.

Suddenly , her feet gave up and she slid on Cap. Das's chest. He thought that the "shot" of martini had made her dizzy and noted it in his mind that he would never again offer any alcoholic drink to Naina. They started to dance. Cap. Das looked at Naina's face and smiled.

"You are really looking very beautiful, Lt. Singh. , mountain air and horse riding have done you good. "

"Thanks Cap Das," Naina decided to flirt and this time it was the actually the "shot" of Martini, "and maybe your company too."

"I am honoured," elated, Cap Das replied.

" I would love to see the sunrise on the famous Kanchanjangha summit. " Naina deviated from the topic of her good looks.

"That is sure a glorious sight ". Cap Das was already planning a romantic sunrise sojourn.

The particular mountain got its name as it turns all golden during the sunrise. It is also known as the Queen of Himalayas.

"I wonder !" Naina looked confused.

"What?" Cap Das was visualizing the effect of the golden sunshine on Naina's skin.

"Being so far from its namesake, why our academy was named so?"

The current musical number came to an end. Cap Das thanked Naina for the dance and led her to her original place. Seeing Mrs. Grewal there, Naina decided to do some chit chat with her.

"Madam, would you care for a drink"

"No thanks, you can dance very well,Lt Singh."

"Madam, call me Naina, and thank you for liking my dance, I was trained by .." Naina stopped in the mid sentence.

" Yes, trained by whom?"

Naina felt herself blushing deep red, "Excuse me, Ma'am , I need to visit the washroom"

Mrs Grewal smiled, wondering who made Naina blush so red - Captain Das or the dance teacher.

Naina ran to the washroom. She splashed some water on her face and eyes and looked at herself in the mirror. She cursed the drink and her state of mind.

"Why am I so excited ? Why have I lost my calm.? "

Her mind drifted towards that small cottage, towards that hastily covered bed, towards that special arrangement of stools , towards that nayantara plant.

"Why do I want to go back there? Who is Raju Chacha . Why he calls a horse - Naina ?. Why KMA was named after Kanchanjangha?", the questions circled around her like a kaliedescope. She did not know the answers yet but was determined to find out soon.

As she returned to the reception hall, she found the dinner was already laid on the table and the staff and guests were taking their seats. She was placed on the left hand side Brig. Grewal, facing Mrs Grewal. Major Dixit was at the head of the table who raised a toast for the commander.

In the other corner of the hilly township, toasts were being raised at different tables. Rajveer thought that moment was right one to complete another task. The tavern was the place where he made contact with his primary source of command and information from the army. He got up from the table and went to the lone public telephone booth. He never kept a cell-phone with him not only because he could not afford but mainly because a working cell-phone made one completely traceable. He called the number but did not get any response. He had no other option but to wait and dial again after some time. He had to get the zero-point information about the next mission.

Edited by sunaina02 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

When Captain Das asked her to dance she went back to the time when Raj had taught her to dance!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Her whole body went numb for a second!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธNaina could not look into his eyes for fear she would melt her completely!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ

Naina slid on his chest!!!!๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ Itna sa peene se hi Naina ki yeh haalat ho gayi hai!!!!!๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜”

Yeh Capt. Das toh uski tareef kar raha hai!!!!๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜กNashe ki wajah se Naina is also flirting with him!!!!!๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’

Accha huya Naina deviated from the topic of good looks and started talking about the sunrise on the Kanchanjangha summit!!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Ish Capt. Das ke mann mein toh abhi se ladoo phut rahe hai and he is planning a romantic sojourn!!!!๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก

He is visualizing the effect of the golden sunshine on Naina's skin!!!!๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜กIski toh main!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก

Naina is wondering why being so far from its namesake her academy was named so!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Mrs. Grewal complimented on her dance and Raj name was on the tip of Naina's tongue!!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Naina blushed deep red and excuse herself in time!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ

Mrs. Grewal is wondering who made Naina blush!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ŠBut I don't need to wonder I know it was Raj who made her blush!!!!๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Naina is thinking why is she so excited and her mind drifts towards that small cottage and all sorts of questions surround her!!!!!๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜•

No I do not think a mountain belle should appear who falls in love with Raj!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜” ๐Ÿ˜”Capt. Das is enough trouble as it is!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก
Here Raj is trying to get some information about his next mission!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
cool update.....
but when Raj and Naina will meet????
I can't wait for that.............
Please continue soon.............
prerna1 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74
that was really good
waiting for RN meeting
plz continue soon
hinal60 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75
it was short but nice UD
just one question when will RN meet
jaldi milado
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76


@su di

short but superb update ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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naina is enjoying herself .hmm effect horaha ai why not she is so near to him......๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜Š
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capt das flirt kar rahe hain naian k saath too bad but bechare kaiy karein naina hai itni beautiful........๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ

i hope raj and naina jald hi milen .......


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AdorableAyesha thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
oooooooooooow great story
i loved
raj naina
sunaina02 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
(Next Part,)
Rajveer returned back to his table and ordered for a plate of hot savoury "momo" ? a Tibetan dish quite popular in Darjeeling. His companions were already a bit unruly after their drinks and were arguing over nonsensical issues. While waiting for his food to come Rajveer got lost in his dreams.

"Sir !"

"Yes Naina , it is me !"

"I cant believe it, " she ran into his embrace and hugged him tight, hiding her face in the depth of his chest. He too held her tight, lovingly caressing her head. Her hair seemed smooth as silk to his fingers and had the loveliest earthly fragrance. He kissed the top of her head and then held her little away from him to look at her tear filled face. His shirt had a big wet patch too.

"Meri Naina," he said with a blush and wiped the tear away from her face.

He had never called her with any endearments except the famous "Ah" always uttered with a wink. His love was always silent, never declared, never spoken about, but was so naturally obvious to everyone., that no one ever thought that Naina did not know or understand!!

It made Major Bhargav scheme nasty plots; it made Dr. Ritu to trick him into engagement and the nuclear trigger fiasco; it made Huda jealous; and it was so apparent to Pooja that once she said to Naina,

"Wo jo bhi karte, tere wajah se, jo nahin karte, wo bhi teri wajah se."

But it was only Alekh who understood, sympathized and ultimately helped Naina to face the truth.

" Oey , kahan kho gaye ho ? " ? the man sitting beside him nudged at Rajveer's side bringing him back to the present. Rajveer saw that the waiter had already placed a plate of steaming hot momo in front of him. He took a bite and wondered where their first meeting should take place. "In her office or at my home?" "In the stables or on the streets?"

Rajveer once again got lost in his dreams.

"So Lt. Naina, tell me more about yourself ," Brig. Grewal started the polite conversation,

"Sir, I passed out from KMA last year and spent six months in Ladakh before coming here. In Ladakh, I received special training on fighting in high altitude locations ."

"That is excellent, but I heard that you faced a lot of problem at KMA due to a certain politician and a couple of army-officer even got killed."

"Yes sir. "

"Who were those officers? Can you please tell me a little more?"

"They were Cap. Rajveer and Col. Shakti , Sir."

"I knew Col Shakti personally as once he worked directly under me, but who was Cap. Rajveer.?"

"He was a very able officer and a very good teacher. We learned a lot from him?." suddenly Naina was very enthusiastic to tell someone about Rajveer, feeling exactly the same way when Rajveer used to ask her about Navin.

Brig. Grewal listened to her with interest and was delighted see the enthusiasm in her .

"Ok Lt. Naina, are you ready for some work ?"

"Yes Sir, I am always ready for work, " Naina promptly answered Brig. Grewal.

"I will ask Major Dixit to make you participate in Monday's mission."

"Thank You Sir "Naina answered politely and did not ask any further question.

Edited by sunaina02 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
wow!! pz make raj and naina meet asap๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Now Raj is lost in his dreams about when he would meet Naina!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜

Naina ran to into his embrace and was crying!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

His calling her Meri Naina and blushing was very beautiful!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ โ˜บ๏ธ

Waise Pooja ne bilkul sahi kaha tha ke woh jo bhi karte hai teri wajah se karte hai jo nahi karte woh bhi teri wajah se!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘

Raj broke out of his dream and again started wondering that where their first meeting should take place and once again got lost in his dreams!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Naina is very enthusiastic and proud to tell Brg. Grewal about Rajveer!!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

Mujhe kya pata why KMA was named what it was!!!!!๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜•And I thought BC met his lady love Chitra at his academy!!!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

A catfight is always interesting but I doubt there will be one between Naina and a mountain belle even if one appears!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

I think it will just lead to misunderstandings and confusion instead of an exciting catfight!!!!!๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’ ๐Ÿ˜’

Monday ke mission mein Naina participate karne waali hai!!!!๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜ŠThats great!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š

I am sure thats when they are going to meet!!!!๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago

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