A Ballad of Two Soldiers- new updates page 13 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
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Raj ne ek Horse ka naam Naina rakha hai...!!! Yeh bilkul sahi hai... kyoun k kabhi kabhi hum jise sab se jyada pyar karte hai...aur use hamesha baht miss karte hai...to hum use aapne sab se kareeb k kisi chiz ko vo naam de dete hai...!!! taki hum use hamesha mehsus kar saken...aap ne baht kareeb...!!!
Raj k dream ko aapne aur Aashi ji ne baht hi khubsurti k sath likha hai...!!! mujhe sach me vo baht achha laga...!!! maine RN k us bandage scene ko yaad kiya...aur aage jo bhi aap dono ne likhen hai...use aad kar k socha to...!!!
to...sach kahun...maine us tym par LRL ko baht miss kiya...!!! aur mujhe dukh hua...!!!
by d way...aage... Raj ka emotion...Naina k liye...just fabulous...!!!
I think ki Naina ko thoda doubt to hua hi hai...varna vo Raj k ghar tak nahin pahunchti...!!!
very sweet ud Sunaina di...!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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for page 8......

it's awesome Sunaina di...!!!
Raj ka is tarh se sajana apne ghar ko yeh batlata hai...k vo kis hadh tak Naina se pyar karta hai...!!!
yeh baat bhi achhi tarah se samajh me aa gayi ki kyoun Raj is halat me hai...vo ek secrete mission par hai...rite...!!! par di...kya Naina bhi is mission ka hissa hai...???
actually jis time par naina ne raj ki diary pakdi...mai apne nails chabane lagi...i know...i know k yeh buri aadat hai...!!! par mai yeh jan na chahti thi k kya abhi Naina ko sab kuch pata chal jayega...ya nahin..!!! par...
yeh ud yeh bayan karti hai ki Raj naina se milne k liye kitna baichain hai...par farz k hathon mazbur...!!! hope ki Raj aur Naina jaldi mil jayen...!!! aap nahin janti di... mai kitne baichani k sath har ud read karti hun...isliye k jab RN ek dushre se milenge...to kya hoga un ka xpression...!!!
actually mai thodi senti type ki ladki hun...aur LRL k aise kai scenes hain jis ki wajah se mere ankhon me tab bhi anshun aaye the...aur aaj bhi aate hai...!!! kyoun ki mai kabhi bhi nahin bhul sakti is serial ko...is liye bhi k is serial ne mere zindagi me bhi baht badlab laya hai.
by d way di...har baar mujhe lagta hai ki aap ka ud baht chota hota hai...par agar aap roz ud dene wali ho...to mai aap se bas yahi kahungi ki ... luuuuuuuuu v sooooooo much...!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
^^^ Hi srojaleen ( dont know your name)
Thanks for your lovely comments. 😊
Comments are very important for fic writers and keep them going.
I am sorry ki due to my time constraint I cant provide bigger updates but i will try my best to update everyday or atleast every alternate day .
Just keep on reading and commenting ................
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
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IV

Naina started dressing for the dinner. Once again she wore the black skirt but decided to do away with the shawl and shirt as she remembered that the dining room was quite warm or even hot with two fireplaces alight. Instead, she took out a pink lacy blouse to match the skirt. The blouse having a wide neckline, accentuated her neck and shoulders and a nave suggestion of unseen cleavage. Her long diamond earrings added glamour to the look. She decided to keep her hair tied up in a French-roll as she usually did during the daytime under the uniform cap. But that enhanced her flawless complexion and she looked not only beautiful but exquisite.

As she entered the dining room, all male eyes were turned towards her and few gasps could be heard too. At that point, Captain Das decided that he had fallen in love. He had fallen in love with this exquisite creature who had invaded the cantonment disguised as a lieutenant.

Naina soon found out that this was a dance and dine affair, the music band was positioned in a corner and a number of spouses dressed in colourful sarees or salwar-suits were seen around. Major Dixit introduced her to Mrs Dixit and few other spouses. Naina enchanted them with her sweet smile.

"Hello , would you like a drink ?" Naina turned around to find Cap. Das behind her,

" Well, I don't drink, I mean, alcoholic drinks"

"Oh, this is just an innocent cocktail with just a hint of Martini "

"OK, thanks,"

"So how was rest of your day, Lt. Singh?"

"It was good, Darjeeling is a lovely place and every little street is worth sightseeing," Naina replied, "even every little house" she added to herself silently.

"Did you enjoy riding? Which horse was given to you?"

"Naina"

"What ….? Oh – they gave you the Queen. Yes, it is a lovely mare, though a bit unruly at times. Don't know why stable people call it Naina. "

" Why you dont like the name Captain"

"Arre , na , na , it is the most lovely name, Anyway, you are looking very lovely today Lt. Singh"

" Thanks Cap. Das."

Naina has already taken a few sips of the cocktail and the "hint" of Martini had warmed her up bringing a rosy blush to her face, making her look even more attractive. Suddenly the door to the dining hall was opened and a very handsome middle-aged army man and a gracious lady in a white saree were ushered in. He was Brig. Abhay Grewal , the "CEO " of Shilligurri Army post. He was accompanied by his spouse Mrs. Asha Grewal. .

Major Dixit started introducing all the new officers to them. As Naina shook his hand , Brigadier smiled and said, " So this is the brave and beautiful Lt. Naina who had the guts to fight against Lala Gehlot !"

Naina could feel her rosy cheeks getting even rosier as the attention of the whole gathering was directed towards her.

"Welcome to our Cantonment Lt. Naina , we are very proud to have you here,'

With the arrival of the commander, the music started to play. Brig Grewal and Major Dixit respectively led their spouses to the dance floor and began to sway to the tune of The Blue Danube, the masterpiece of Strauss.

" May I dance with you?" Cap. Das extended his hand towards Naina.

"May I have the pleasure?", was what Naina heard.

The tavern was dimly lit except for a bright light over the bar for the "bartender" to measure the pegs of drinks correctly. Cacophonic sound of latest filmi hits was all over the place. People were seated in groups of three-to five at separate tables. The waiters hurried around with bottles of desi, rum or whiskey and an occasional vodka on their dirty steel trays. Most of the occupants were men , though a couple of women were also seen. Their loud makeup and dress clearly indicated their profession.

Rajveer wrapped the scarf closely around his face and proceeded towards a corner table where two men were arguing over a peg of rum. Rajveer, a connoisseur of delicate tasting wines and champagne, never drank in these places as he had to keep his brain working and head clear. The waiters, generously tipped by him, knew that and always brought a disguised "scotch on rocks " to him . The right mix of cola, limca and blocks of ice did the trick.

" So saale , bol kya khabar hai jahannam (meaning the cantonment ) se?"

" Are bhai , jahannam to jannat ban gaye, hurpadi jo aa gayi "

Rajveer could feel the sudden stiffness in his body.

"Kaun hai wo Nayi officer?"

"Uski naam Naina Singh hai , saale maal hai bahut kamaal ki"

Rajveer clenched his fist hard under the table.

"Kahan se aayi hai wo?"

"Abhi to Deradoon se magar trainng li hai KMA mein "

Gritting of Rajveers teeth was noticeable to his companions too. They looked surprisingly at him

" Tera koi rishta hai un se,?"

Rajveer controlled himself and said, " Arre na, main ne socha ki uska pati bhi army mein hoga aur bahut jaldi yahan unka bhi posting ho jayega. "

"Koi chance nahin hai."

"Kyun?"

"Kyunki , uska koi pati nahin hai.

Rajveer heaved a sigh of relief.

"Koi baat nahin , yahah par kisiko dhund lengi ", the second man quipped from the side.

Rajveer wanted to slap the person hard.

" Wo to zaroor ho jayega , Das to pad gaya line mein. Sare din unka peecha nahin chhoda. "

Dear Reader, if want to know what is the color of jealousy , you should have seen Rajveer's face at this point.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Sunaina
This is Suhana here..I am a new reader of your beautiful story..U were the 1 who wrote RLR in Orkut Forum..It was an excellent story but why did u left it in between..nyways I read all the parts of this superb story..The storyline is new n truely amazing...👏👏👏
These days I dont come online too often coz I am getting married..But I'll really try to read all your updates whenever I have time n reply for them too..
Bye
Edited by suhana_dixit - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Sunaina

This is Suhana here..I am a new reader of your beautiful story..U were the 1 who wrote RLR in Orkut Forum..It was an excellent story but why did u left it in between..nyways I read all the parts of this superb story..The storyline is new n truely amazing...👏👏👏
These days I dont come online too often coz I am getting married..But I'll really try to read all your updates whenever I have time n reply for them too..
Bye

Thanks Suhana and sorry about RLR.
ANd congratulation for your upcoming wedding 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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for part 3
wowwwwwwww di 👏👏👏

superb rajveer naina and horses great

this raju chacha thing is sooo sweet 😊

plus all the kids rajveer has named a mare naina ..and she responds well to it.. woh tyo destined it...

it aws sooo good to read ballad again....i hope this time full stop na lage


for the next part
👏 di the part was so sweet soooo well described wow....
all the details of rajveer's cottage so beautiful..

the rumal her last nishaani still with him at the sacred place in the house .ssooo lovely....😳😳

superb part di....
👏



Edited by digimon_pokemon - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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for part 4
another awesome part so the story moves forward 👏👏👏
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naina ka jadoo sab per chal gay no surprises didnt sh looked the most beautiful and strong Lt. in the army in that uniform,.. koi bhi army officer flat ho jaega..😳😃
😳
rajveer's jeal;ousy oh our dear captain ek baar aap apki naian ke saamne jaian phir jealousy ki koi reason hi nahi bachegi..😊

Edited by digimon_pokemon - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sarah
Love your sweet comments dear. ver encouraging 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Naina is looking beautiful!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

No wonder all male eyes turned towards her and a few gasps could be heard!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Just as I had thought that this Captain Das would fall in love with her aur wahi huya!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

While saying Darjeeling is lovely Naina is thinking about the cottage!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Lagta hai ussi wahi sabse acchi lagi Darjeeling mein!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ka jadoo toh sab par cha gaya after all she is so beautiful and definately the most beautiful officer there!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Brig. Abhay Grewal is complimenting Naina for her guts as she had fought against Lala Gehlot!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

He said he is proud to have her there!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How nice!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Capt. Das asked Naina for a dance but I think Naina is lost in her own thoughts!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The tavern was described very well!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj never drank is these places as her had to keep his head working!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Good for him!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

So those men are saying jahannam jannat ban gayi hai kyunki waha hoorpari aagayi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj is really angry to see hear them talk about his Naina!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡He is trying hard to control his anger!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

But they noticed the gritting of his teeth!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Accha huya Rajveer not only controlled himself but also found out that Naina is single!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

He is really relieved to hear that!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Rajveer now wants to slap that person who said ke yaha kisi ko dhundh legi!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Capt. Das ke baare mein sunke Raj was really really jealous!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Truly his face is the color of jealously!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

After all he loves Naina so much so how can he stand that someone else is after her!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳


Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago

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