A Ballad of Two Soldiers- new updates page 13 - Page 7

The way you have described Naina is beautiful..!!!
Capt. Das has fallen for Naina...!!! Bechaara he's gonna be so heartbroken once Naina meets our Raju chacha....!!!
Raj is sooo jealous ....I can't wait for them to meet...!!!!

N Di its okay abt the lenght of the updates...as long as u r updating regularly, I have no problem...

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Naina is looking beautiful!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

No wonder all male eyes turned towards her and a few gasps could be heard!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Just as I had thought that this Captain Das would fall in love with her aur wahi huya!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

While saying Darjeeling is lovely Naina is thinking about the cottage!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Lagta hai ussi wahi sabse acchi lagi Darjeeling mein!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ka jadoo toh sab par cha gaya after all she is so beautiful and definately the most beautiful officer there!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Brig. Abhay Grewal is complimenting Naina for her guts as she had fought against Lala Gehlot!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

He said he is proud to have her there!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How nice!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Capt. Das asked Naina for a dance but I think Naina is lost in her own thoughts!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The tavern was described very well!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj never drank is these places as her had to keep his head working!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Good for him!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

So those men are saying jahannam jannat ban gayi hai kyunki waha hoorpari aagayi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj is really angry to see hear them talk about his Naina!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡He is trying hard to control his anger!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

But they noticed the gritting of his teeth!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Accha huya Rajveer not only controlled himself but also found out that Naina is single!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

He is really relieved to hear that!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Rajveer now wants to slap that person who said ke yaha kisi ko dhundh legi!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Capt. Das ke baare mein sunke Raj was really really jealous!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛How cute!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Truly his face is the color of jealously!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

After all he loves Naina so much so how can he stand that someone else is after her!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

awesome ud Sunaina did...

that was so good

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Naina loved the outer view of Raj's cottage and its garden!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Haan haan uska ghar usse pasand toh aayega hi naa!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

When Naina asked bacche bol rahe hai woh bahut chikna aur jawan hai bilkul uske jaisa!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj is watching Naina getting into his cottage and thinking how frequenty he had dreamt of carrying Naina in his arms over that threshold!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ He will one day 😛😉

The description of Raj's cottage was beautiful!!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

So the jeans is seeming familiar to Naina!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj had kept flowers on that rumaal jo Naina ki akhri nishani hai uske paas!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Wow!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏yes, he didnt have a photo 😭

Naina toh abhi se ghar theek karne lagi!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Too bad Naina ne woh diary nahi padhi!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔Warna usne usmein apna naam dekh liya hota!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

She should have learn to snoop after all she is in the army warna how will she find things out!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊she is not in the espionage branch 😆

Raj bol raha what is Naina doing at his home??😛 😛 😛 😛

Arre maine kaha naa Naina tumare ghar pe nahi hogi toh akhir kaha hogi??😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊Thats her rightful place!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He is nervous that Naina will open his diary or identify the small piece of cloth underneath the flowers!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

He did not want to meet her right now and wants find out about her present status first!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj went into his room and is breathing in the whiff of Naina's very recent physical presence!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Haaaiiii!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳kyun ?whiff na karke , direct taste kar lena chahiya na 😳😳😳

His room seemed to him a lot more attractive and cozier!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Haan akhir Naina jo waha aayi thi!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj soch raha hai he needs a clean shave, a hair cut and clean clothes!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Haan ab Naina yaha aagayi hai toh he has to look good for her!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊( out of context , i think we have found out the reason "urgghhhh" Peter look 😆😆

Three days baad he had a mission to complete toh yeh sab usse pehle toh nahi ho sakta!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

He now wants more detailed information about Naina especially her personal life!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

So he is going to the countryside bar which is his prime source of information!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

No wonder as all suspicious men aise bars mein aate hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Hi readers dont worry , Raj and Naina will soon meet .

Originally posted by: srojaleen

awesome ud Sunaina did...

naina khubsurat hai...par aap ne us ki khubsurti ka kuch is tarah se describe kiya hai ki...vo aur bhi jyada khubsurat lagi mujhe...aap ki fic me.👏

capt. Das ki one-side love story one-side rahe to behtar hai. kyoun ki unhe to jhatka tab lagega jab naina raj se milegi...hai na...!!!😉

par did...naina aur raj kab milenge...!!! aap nahin jante mai har ud ko is umeed me padhti hun ki RN is baar...mil jayenge...sayad...!!! par aap hamesha humain...LOLIPOP... dikha k taal rahi hain...!!! plz did...RN ko milwaiye na...plzzzzzzzzzzzz😊

Raj is so jealous...vaise hona bhi chahiye...!!! kyoun ki jis ki girl-frnd itni khubsurat ho...us ki to yahi prob hoga na din-raat...!!!😆

vaise is ud me mera fav scene tha...jab Capt. Das naina ko dance k liye puchte hai...aur naina ko rajveer ki yaad me sunai deta hai......'May i have d pleasure...'😃

at last...aap se 2 reqs hain did...

1st one...plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz RN ko jaldi milaiye...!!!😊

2nd... plz RLR fic ko bhi cont kijiye...!!!😊

Loooooooooooooots of luuuuuuuuuuuuv😊

Priya

hi

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

hi

finally finished reading all the parts that you have posted...And the only thought that came to mind was WOW....

The story line is amazing...very interesting and totaly different...

I am waiting to see naina and raj together...waiting to see the dreams that naina keeps seeing come true once again...

Why has raj chosen this life..with lala proved guilty...can he not be proved innocent...

Waiting to read more...please update soon

I am very sorry , I could not for last two days. I am very busy with office work. Please give me couple of more days. I will post then.