Pyar Ishq Aur Mohabbat! NOTE PG33(27/7/08) - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey
nice prt yaar cho cho emotinal
luved rehaans prt so funny culdnt control my stomach yaar
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cont super soooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnn
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heyyy...plz continue soon 😕 😛
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Hey,

Thank you all for your sweet comments!!! 😳 😳
Sooooo sorry for the delay in posting the next part... i just had a lot of c/wrk to do!!!

This is part A, part b will be posted today aswell, just had to split up coz once i started writing.. it got toooo long.. 😆



CHAPTER 3A: FIRST IMPRESSIONS


First Day clothes


Atul's clothes





Sapna's clothes





Anjie's clothes
Click on Anjali's clothes icon

Anjali's clothes


Ray's clothes





Aliyah's clothes





Riddhima's clothes



Armaan's clothes





They walked in, to be greeted by the familiar scent of the hospital. It felt like they had an old acquaintance with this place. They had been here once before with their parents. But walking through the front doors, with their own identities, held it's own importance.

As they turned in to the corridor leading to Dr Kirti's cabin, they felt a little apprehensive wondering about meeting her and their fellow interns who they would be working with during the coming year at this prestigious hospital.

One of the guys turn around, as they walked in; Anjie recognised him to be the guy that helped them out yesterday.

Armaan turned around to be greeted by her astounding beauty, once again. Without realising it he muttered her name
"Riddhima"
"What did you say?" Atul asked, he turned to see what his best friend was staring at, then he saw the 2 girls again. "ohh! So that's what you were staring at..oho! you even remember her name…" Atul nudged him.

"Huh? no…I said… 'ridhu ma called today'" Armaan covered up quickly.
"Huh? whos that? Mums name's not Ridhu" he questioned.
"No no… I wasn't talking about mum…I was talking about erm…mums- uncles- nephews- daughters- friends mum" Armaan said waving it off with his hand.
"Kya kya kya?" Atul asked bewildered.

Just then they were interrupted
"Hey guys, do you remember us?" Anjie said, walking up to them. They seemed to be muttering profusely to each other oblivious to their entrance.
"Oh yeah, hey!! Erm…what was your name again? Sorry we don't remember…" Atul said a bit embarrassed. "Oh that's no problem, we don't remember your names either" Anjali said, as they all laughed, except Armaan who just seemed to be lost in his own world.

"Hi my name's Anjali and this is my younger sister Riddhima"
"Nice to meet you both, the names Atul and this is my friend Armaan" Atul gestured towards a lost Armaan. Then they all started talking about the internship, and Dr Kirti – their mentor. Whilst Armaan was once again lost in his own thoughts, remembering yesterdays encounter.

He saw her brush strands of hair off her face, he couldn't help himself

See how she leans her cheek upon her hand:
O that I were a glove upon that hand,
That I might touch that cheek.


Damn it!!! Janab-e-Shakespeare aap ki wajah se meri ye haalat hai… Romeo ko maar diya… abhi mujhe bhi maarne ka iraada hai…

Snap out of it Armaan, why were you reading the Shakespeare collective poems edition last night…Ye Shakespeare bhi naa…Armaan smirked to himself.

Riddhima turned to look at him just in time as his dimples appeared on his cheek.

He's being really quite…I wonder, is he always like this…no he cant be, he was very talkative at the multiplex yesterday…and I wonder what he's smiling about. But then again what isn't there to smile about… he's the most gorgeous guy I've ever seen, and those grey eyes…who knew a dull colour like grey could be so lively? It's so easy to get lost in them…and those dimpled cheeks are to die for…Soooo cute.


OMG ridz!! What are you thinking?? Tum tau usse janti bhi nahin ho…She now smiled to herself, as she saw him trying to converse with his friend and Anjie.

"So what are you all talking about?" Armaan asked trying to join their conversation.
Atul and Anjie were too busy discussing how Dr Kirti would be like? and what they will be doing on their first day? Taking no notice of Armaan.

"Its Armaan right; nice name" Riddhima asked sweetly trying to start a conversation with him.
"Yea, thanks, guess we'll be colleagues now Riddhima, so how was the chocolate cake then?" Armaan said with a smirk on his face remembering yesterday's incident.
"Urmmmm… It was very nice, you were right… thanks for helping me because after you left, Di came and she bought raspberry and I tasted some and it was yuck." She said while screwing up her face.

She looked like an angel with that face, he thought. "Its ok, the pleasure was all mine." Armaan said, truly meaning what he said.

As they continued to chat amongst themselves, the other three interns stepped in to the cabin. The 4 turned around to look at the new arrival, one guy (Ray) and two girls (Aaliyah and Sapna), they were about to familiarise with each other when they heard another voice from behind them,

"Settle yourself down interns!!"

A lady in her mid thirties wearing formal clothes (white shirt and black trousers) walked in through the door behind the new arrivals and took her seat in front of the desk.

The interns thought you wouldn't want to get on her bad side; she didn't even retaliate to Atul's smile.

She took the register, after which she introduced herself.
"My name is Dr Kirti, and I am going to be your mentor for the coming year, I will be assigning you duties and you will be reporting back to me" She turned around and gave them all piercing gaze before continuing "I am glad you all are on time, because I hate latecomers"
At this Ray smirked to himself

"Would you like to share the joke with us Mr-" she looked at the clipboard in her hand and said "Rehan khan?"

Ray cleared his throat "No ma'am"
Dr. Kirti then read his t-shirt and frowned, "appropriate attire Mr Khan, it suits your personality" she said sarcastically.
"thats what my dad said in the morning" Ray muttered, whilst Armaan who, was standing next to him, smiled.

Ray thought to himself she's gonna be a hard nut to crack.

"Did you say something?" Dr Kirti asked raising her eye brows
"No ma'am" Ray said looking down at his shoes.

"I thought so" she said smiling sardonically "where was I, before being rudely interrupted, ah yes…you will all collect your scrubs, pagers and ID cards at the security desk, Nurse Lovely who is waiting outside, will take you there, after that you will have 2 hours to familiarise yourself with the hospital and your fellow interns" Dr Kirti looked at them once again and said

"Then at 10:00 you will all go to the conference room, to be greeted by Dr. Shashank- the chief of Sanjeevani, I want you all to be there on time"

They all nodded their heads, looking like little school children being told off by a teacher.
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LOCKER ROOM

"Yeh raha aap logo ka locker room ji" Nurse lovely said.

They had already collected their belongings at the security desk and were brought to the locker room by Nurse Lovely. She gave them their locker number and keys.
They all stared at the locker room that they were going to be spending a lot of time in, tracing their hands over their lockers.

"Hi, my name's Sapna Patel" she said smiling to the intern whose locker was next to hers, as he finished putting his things in his locker.
"Hey Sapna" Atul said "Patel huh? You must be gujju" he said giving his cheesy smile. "My names Atul Joshi" Atul shook her hands.
"Joshi? Gujju huh?" Sapna said cheekily, mirroring the tone Atul had used earlier.

"Yes he's gujju, but don't expect him to be able to speak Gujarati" Armaan said joining the conversation, whilst putting things in his locker, Sapna laughed once more.
"By the way my names Armaan Mallik" he said putting his hand out for her to shake.
"Nice to meet you Armaan, and how do you know his gujju is useless?"
"Simple, I grew up with him" Armaan said whilst closing his locker.
"Yep Chaddi buddies" Atul added, at this Armaan rolled his eyes.

"Hey guys are we allowed to join the conversation, or is it just a three way" Anjali asked, she was sitting on the bench listening to their conversation, whilst Riddhima was fixing her ID on to her white coat.

"Hi my names Anjali you can call me Anjie" She said putting her hand out for Sapna to shake, Sapna was about to introduce herself when Anjie said "and you're Sapna, I heard"
"This is my sister Riddhima" she gestured to Riddhima who just shut her locker.
"Hi, but you can call me Ridz" Riddhima put her hand forward.

Ray was leaning against his locker admiring all the girls, contemplating on which one to flirt with first.
Aaliyah was busy stuffing things into her locker; she quickly shut it and said
"Hi my names Aaliyah"

Everyone looked at her…even Armaan, who was once again lost in riddhimas beauty, stared.

"What?" Aaliyah asked feeling self conscious.

"You have such a British accent!!" Atul said, his eyebrows were bobbing up and down again, staring curiously at Aaliyah.

Aaliyah laughed, sighing with relief. She thought that maybe they were all staring at her because she forgot to put her pants on or something.

"That's because I am from Britain…duh!" She said grinning. In her mind she was brewing up a little plan. golmaal hain bhai sab golmaal hain

"OH, she's from Great Britain, where they walk and talk and do everything else British" Ray said imitating a British accent, whilst smirking and waving his hand imitating the Queen.

"Oh haha, very funny Mr-?" Aaliyah asked
"Ray" he said winking at his first shikaar.
"Full name please" she said smiling mockingly
"Rehaan Khan…naam tau sunna hoga"

Aaliyah was about to retort when Atul said
"HAA maine naam sunna hain!!"

Everybody looked at Atul and started laughing.

Whilst ray was thinking lagta hain larkiyaan se zyaada mein larkau kau impress kar raha hoon...

"Arrey guys! im serious" Atul scratched his head

Ray was just staring at Atul with a pathetic expression on his face, when he recognised Atul…

Hailaa!!Rehaan agar usne tumhe pehchaan liya, tau teri izzat ki tau waat lagayi…

"Atul how do you know him?" Armaan asked perplexed looking at Atul.

But before Atul can answer back, Ray cut in
"Dudes..." he looked at the girls and added "Dudettes, do you all just wanna sit here and chat?" he asked "or 'familiarise yourself with the hospital'" Ray imitated Dr Kirti.

"Wah kya nakal mari!" Atul said
"I get it from my dad" He popped his collar.
************************************************************ ************



That's 3A, part 3B will be posted in half an hour....or more 😃
please leave comment.

thanks

Naina
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Edited by Naina123 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44
yay I am first today😃
Awesoome parrt👏 Omg i like their freindly conversation😆

eagerly waiting for your next part😃

-axita😊

*reserved* 😳
Edited by aspatel2 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow yaaar tht was really cool part plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon im waitin
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part
do update soon
i am waiting
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Yippeee!!!
Amazing as usual!!
Yours one of my favs 😳

Will comment in detail later 😛

Have to finish a PPT as of now
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chapter 3B guys continues here...

CHAPTER 3B: FIRST IMPRESSIONS


The yellow walls of Sanjeevani welcomed them, the colour of hope. Sunshine, a sign of happiness. As they walked the wide halls of Sanjeevani, realisation kicked in. They had finally made it, their endless nights of revision and preparation for exam had not gone to waste.

The interns knew that the field they had chosen allowed no room for mistakes. One wrong move wouldn't have ended one life, but it would have killed many hopes. But they were prepared to shoulder the burden that came along with being a doctor.

Riddhima noticed that the patterns on the walls weren't just patterns, they were quotes beautifully painted, which at first looked like carefully painted art.

"Hey guys look at this" she gestured for the other 6 to come.
"Are these…are these words?" Sapna said scrutinising at the wall.
"They're quotes" Atul realised.


The wall read:


Only one rule in medical ethics need concern you - that action on your part which best conserves the interests of your patient. ~Martin H. Fischer


Faith and knowledge lean largely upon each other in the practice of medicine. ~Peter Mere Latham


Diagnosis is not the end, but the beginning of practice. ~Martin H. Fischer

And countless others…


Medicine is an art in its own right. Whether it is a doctor's practice or few words of wisdom.

They were all captivated by the artists' perfect stroke of the brush, or the symmetrical calligraphy.

It spread odd warmth through you; Rehan looked at his fellow interns…their eyes following the perfect waves of the words.

"Are we sure we are in Sanjeevani and not an art gallery?" Ray asked, immediately lightening the mood.

"Shut up Ray!" Aaliyah said annoyed
"Darling I'll shut up the day the queen gives us back the Kohinoor!" Ray said once again mocking her British accent.
She looks at him with a sarcastic smile and was about to retort when Atul said
"Guys chill lets make a move to the caf, otherwise we won't get time later, and I'm hungry" he pouted
"Erm….sure" Armaan said "where's the caf again?" he asked.

"It's on the first floor 2nd corridor to the right" Riddhima replied instantly.
They all stared, apart from Anjali.
"How do you know?" Armaan asked. Wow she's good looking and intelligent, yeh tau all rounder nikali he thought on the inside.

Anjali was about to tell them, when a voice interrupted their conversation
"Anjali, Riddhima beta?" a lady in a nurses attire approached them.
"Kaisi hain aap Neelu aunty?" Anjie asked
"Aunty, aap se mille huwe aik saal hogaya" Riddhima said hugging her after Anjie.

Whilst the other interns were looking utterly confused.
"Haan, beta, I think last time hum Delhi mein miley tehy, how are you finding Mumbai?" Neelu aunty asked.
"Yeah Mumbai's good, but were missing Delhi" Ridzie said
"Did you both come with Padma and Shashank?" she asked

All the interns were mystified as to why Anjali and Riddhima would come with the chief of Sanjeevani.

"Nahin hum mummy, papa keh saat nahin aaye" Anjali said biting her tongue as soon as the word escaped her mouth.

Riddhima and Anjali looked at each other and were mentally banging their heads on the wall.

"Okay, well take care. I should get going" and with that Nurse Neelu left

"Well guys should we go to the caf?" Anjali asked
But none of the interns except Riddhima seemed to hear her.

"What did that lady say to these two?" Aaliyah whispered to Ray. "I didn't understand"
"Ek minute" Ray said
"Huh.. Whats Ek-" She was about to say before Ray cut her off and said
"My Lady I meant one minute" once again putting on a British imitation.

"You 2 are Dr Shashank Gupta's daughters?" Atul asked.
"Yeah, but we don't you to treat us differently, that was the reason we didn't tell you guys earlier" Riddhima said looking at them.

"That's not the problem" Ray butted in.
"Then what is?" Anjie asked.
"I can't flirt with you 2 anymore, you're dad might kick me out" he said melodramatically.
Sapna laughed, whilst Aaliyah rolled her eyes.

"Oh shut up Rehaan" Riddhima said hitting him playfully
"It's Ray-not Rehaan"
Everybody laughed at his childish tone "chaley caf, ab late nahee hau rahein hain?"

"What did you just say now?" Aaliyah asked, to which Ray thought that this is my chance to line maro on her.
"Come let me explain to you in the caf."

"Yeh guys lets go" Armaan said nobody noticed him giving Ray a lethal look, because Riddhima had touched him, as they all started walking.
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CAF

They are all sitting on one table with their teas, coffees and hot chocolates; Armaan and Ridz were next to each other, to his right was Atul, then Anjie, and Sapna and Ray and Ali were seated opposite them.

"Yaar main hindi mai bolunga taake is angrej ki aaulad ko kuch samjh nahin aaye" Ray said slyly pointing towards Ali.

"Maine ek baat notice ki hai, ke angrej ladkiyon ke saath flirt karna easy hota hai kyunki inse aap kuch bhi kaho inhe kuch samajh hi nahi aayega aur maar se bach jaate hai"
Atul started chuckling, while Armaan high-fived him.
Anjali said "you guys are disgusting"
Riddhima said while looking at Armaan "Armaan mujhe nahin pata tha, tum bhi aisa hi sochte hau"
"Nahin nahin… main aisa nahin sochta" He tried to justify himself in front of riddhima quickly.
"Yaa… ye sach keh raha hai… wo aisa nahin hai…he's worse than Ray" Atul laughed.
"Oiii ye tu kya bak raha hai?" Armaan poked Atul in the stomach.
"Sach hi to bol raha hu, tumhe tau apni dates ke naam bhi nahi yaad rehte" Atul said rubbing his stomach.

At this statement, Ridz just shook her head in disbelief at Armaan thiking Guys.

Whilst this was going on… Sapna had kicked Ray under the table for his remark.

"Haila, what was that for?" Ray looked at Sapna in disbelief.
Aaliyah asked "why did you just kick him Sapna?"
Sapna was just about to answer when Ray pleaded in hindi "Usse kuch mat batana please, mujhe uski thodi taang kichni hai"
"Ok theek hai, lekin jyada mat karna, varna main usse sab kuch bata dungi" Sapna said to Ray and then turned to Ali and said
"Oh nothing… I just kicked him by accident"

Ray said to Ali
"Just look at the menu here and see what you would like to have?" and then added cheekily to Sapna "Actually woh kya hai na Sapna isse flirt karna thoda easy hai, kyunki woh thappad nahi maar sakti"

"Lagta hai tumhe thappad khane ke bohut experience hai" Sapna asked Ray smiling.

"Haaa.. lekin tumhe kaise pataa?" He asked looking bewildered at her comment.

"Kyunki mujhe thappad maarne ka shauk hai" She warned him sweetly.
"Ise liye to main keh raha hu, isse mere liye chod do, kyunki Anji aur Ridz se toh main flirt nahin kar sakta, aur phir tum se to thappad padenge" He added putting his right hand on his cheek.

He then turns his attention to Ali..
"What is this Idol Samba? I thought that Samba was a dance?" She asked Ray.
The others all looked up from the menu card smirking…

Ray looked at what she was pointing to on the menu card and said
"Its not Idol Samba, its Idli Sambhar" trying to avoid his laughter.

"What is this Matter Pannar? What does it contain? Do they have mineral water here? Who makes it? And How do they make it? And is the kitchen clean? Why are you not answering me Ray?" Ali asked non-stop.

The rest of the interns were stifling their laughter, looking at the reaction on Ray's face.

Ray had no clue what to say to her, Is she for real he thought.
"Urmm… What did you say? Repeat please!!! On second thoughts don't repeat"

He added looking irritated and thought Haaila I don't want to flirt with her, kaha phas gaya mai.

"Ok forget all that, what is this Maa-saala dossar" Aliya asked looking down the menu.

"Saaali… Maaa pe gayi tu… Idhar aaa, main tumhe dikhata hu…Maa-saala dossar kya hota hai!" Ray trying to roll up his sleeves realising that he was wearing a t-shirt today.

"Ray calm down… usse nahin pataa what she's saying?" Armaan got up from his seat to get hold of Ray while still trying to control his laughter at this scene.

"Oooops sorry, did I say something wrong guys" Aaliyah said looking at the scence playing before her eyes.

"Anyways what is Awlaw ka panthaa?? She asked, with that she hit Ray's last nerve.

Ray who was still being held on to by Armaan, tried to muster himself out while Armaan grabbed him more tighter.
"Arrey Ray, Yaar chod na usse"
"Nahin yaar… how could she, Aaloo ka paratha is my favourite"
Everybody laughed at this statement.

"Ok Ray stop it now, stop being so childish" Armaan and Riddhima said together.

At this comment they all laughed again, including Ray and Atul added
"Guys, we have 10 mins to get to the seminar room, let's make way"

As they got up to make their way Ali smirked inside and thought you haven't lost your charm yet hun, this was so much fun…
Ray oh Ray...
Golmaal hain bhai sab golmaal hain…



That was end of part 3b, hope u had fun reading... please leave a comment or suggestion... 😉

Thanks
Naina
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Edited by Naina123 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey naina!!
i jus read ur new part 3b..
n it was superbbbbbbbbb👏.
i luvv da way u describe everything...
n i also luv da quotes too😳..hehe it sure looks like a art gallery😆
btw u used da name Ray too.. i luv tht name.. even in ma FF i named Armaan Ray😆😆 wah a coincidence ehh😆

neways ur a grttttttttt writer hun..
plzzzzzzz cont soon
n can u plzz PM da nex part..
wud luv to read wah happened nex😳

lotsssa Luv:Hira😛
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Awesome part 👏

really great 😆 I love ali and rays chem. 😆

pls cont. soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon 😊

-Axita 😊

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