AMI JE TOMAR......Please choose which one - Page 5

Thannks rima, abhilasha, goldi, sukhi, ashwini.....for choosing 2nd storyline! 😃

Originally posted by: jdsean

Both great concepts, I don't know which one to choose, but I think I will go with 2. Can't wait for you to start another great story.

Thanks jdsean! Its number 2 its decided! 😃

Originally posted by: ~*~kom@l~*~

hey dii...both concepts are great...but i liked concept #2 better...this is my opinion rest is up to you...
start it soon...

komal<3

Thanks komal! Yes, most ppl chose no.2 so I will write that one first. 😃

Originally posted by: khnk_rox

2nd one is definitely better.. there are already a lot of religion based FFs here.. n very very serious ones they turn out to be.. not complaingin though since they;re lovely if beautifully written.. just love the 2nd one since the concept of fireworks appeals to me more than the drama n serious FFs.. comedy, fights, anger.. or i can put it as.. takraar aur phir pyaar..!!! 2nd one is the one i;d love to read.. all the best whichever u choose to write..

Thanks Dear! Yes, religion based ones are more serious and in this case can be controversial. Yes, A-K's takraar and pyaar is legendary. They sizzled when they fought! 😳
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Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

#2 sounds real good....it show's a-k's attitudes....lol....

Thanks Babygirl! Okay number 2 its decided... 😃

Originally posted by: patelniyati2004

although im a silent reader i love the second concept its sounds perfect...:)

Thanks niyati! 😃

Originally posted by: A&K_4Evr-S

i swear isnt there a song in bhool bhuaiyan called ami je tomar??? lol wat does it mean
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i choose the first one it sounds more romantic...bt im really gonna miss the godfather cauz it was one of the best FF cauz i didnt even mind that kripa was married to someone else lol AK still romanced haha

Thanks Hun! Im glad u liked Godfather! 😃
Yes, the title is taken from Bhulbhulaiya song: Tumi Je Amar. It means : YOU ARE MINE!
Sorry Hun, most ppl chose 2nd one so I will write Z-K story later! 😳

Originally posted by: sweetangle04

hi di..wow u r gonna a start a new one immediately..way to go!!...

i like both...i m such a sucker for romance..hehe..and a great fan of ur writing....

if i had to pick..out of the two..i will say SECOND one...it hints..the takrar.....and we all know wht happens after takrrar...will wait for u di..to decide which one u will start..

btw wht does the title mean ? ami je tomar?

Thanks sweetangle...for all ur appreciation! 😃
I have 3 more plots in my head, wish I had time to write all of them....but time is a constraint! 😭

Thanks for choosing....yes, most chose 2nd one so I will write that first. Im addicted to romance too... 😳
The title means I AM YOURS! 😳

Originally posted by: sweetchick786

i was just about to vote for the 2nd 1 !! but its already decided that, thats gonna be written first so im excited lolz! n*e wayz i cant wait to read them both im sure they'll be great !

Thanks sweetchick! 😃

Originally posted by: hi50

Thanks pallavi.. 2 toi darun concept!!! However, I'll also vote for the 2nd one.

Thanks hi5! Im glad tomar dutoi bhalo lagchhey. Will begin 1st one later. 😳

Originally posted by: MrsRanbirKapoor

i love the song tooo pallu....ami je tomar, shudu je tomarrrrr....hehe
im not even bengali, but i underatand btis of it thanks to Ouma! lol

Yeah, its a haunting melody....cant forget it! 😃
So ur souten taught u Bengali? GREAT! 😃 😆

Originally posted by: xoxIqbalxox

[Edit] Woww Di.. theyre both awesomee.. I think the second one though coz it sounds exciting and will have more Romaaanncee and then the first one.. dying to read another Bhalobasha frm yu But for now plzz the second one

Madiha<3

Thanks Madiha! 😃 second one it is then!
I will try to make it romantic and exciting! 😳

pallavi

Originally posted by: vallanki

WOW!!!

you have already good plots in store!!!!!

I'm attracted to 'Zaib khan' but it sounds usual love story.

2nd one has good concept..fighting for their possessions...very common in landlord tenant relationship 😳

I prefer 2nd one as it gives more sparks 😆

both are equally good, I hope.

more than soft romantic story...fireworks are preferable. 😳 so 2nd one😉

Thanks Vallu! Yes, most have voted for 2nd one....and I agree A-K fights adds more spark to the story....😉😳

Z-K story wont be usual love story though......like the novel it will have darker aspects.

pallavi

Originally posted by: hi50

Thanks pallavi.. 2 toi darun concept!!! However, I'll also vote for the 2nd one.

Thanks hi5! Im glad tomar dutoi bhalo lagchhey. Will begin 1st one later. 😳

Hi!! THANKS a LOT... 😛😛..

yeah pallu....my sauten is really sweeeeet LOL
2nd story....cnt wait 2 read it....ooooo punjabi aur bengali ke beech main takraar....even im Punjabi and Oumaz bengali, we fight alot toooo🤣

^ haha..You aint my saut hinnzy..your my bessie's (Akki's) wife alright..Ranbir Kapoor has one wife!! Me, myself and I! = thats equals one person..OUMMAH😃
~ I only teach my bessie' ife Bengali di😆 and Hinnzy your punjabi i thought you were Pakistani..now me getting lost😆

~ Btw Im sorry to say, but im stealing the Ranbir and SRK siggy..my 2 fav actor together!☺️

~ Right enough blabbering!! Back to revision and can't wait for the story Pallu di!

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go on then steal the siggy ill steal urs next timeee lol
I am Pakistani...Paki's can be punjabi too lol

Originally posted by: MrsRanbirKapoor

yeah pallu....my sauten is really sweeeeet LOL
2nd story....cnt wait 2 read it....ooooo punjabi aur bengali ke beech main takraar....even im Punjabi and Oumaz bengali, we fight alot toooo🤣

😆😆 Yeah, ur and Ouma's fights are legendary now on IF , just like A-K....😳😆

Punjabis and Bengalis usually have love-hate relationships...😉😃

pallavi

pallavi

awww but as they say, love is stronger than hate ;)
I LOVE YOUUUUUU OUMA AND PALLUUUU!!!
(pallu ur bengali right?)

Originally posted by: ~Ouma*n*Ranbir~

^ haha..You aint my saut hinnzy..your my bessie's (Akki's) wife alright..Ranbir Kapoor has one wife!! Me, myself and I! = thats equals one person..OUMMAH😃
~ I only teach my bessie' ife Bengali di😆 and Hinnzy your punjabi i thought you were Pakistani..now me getting lost😆

~ Btw Im sorry to say, but im stealing the Ranbir and SRK siggy..my 2 fav actor together!☺️

~ Right enough blabbering!! Back to revision and can't wait for the story Pallu di!

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Thanks Ouma! I will start this when GF ends! 😃

U teach Hinna Bengali? Thats GREAT cuz I will use lots of Bengali words in the new story....😆

Ouma, Pakistan also has a state called Punjab.

Ufff will u two stop fighting abt Ranbir? Let Neetu Singh Kapoor choose her bahu. 😆How did Akky come into the picture? hes too old for both of u. Hes good for mature ladies like us...😳😉😆

SRK is also too buddha for u gals....leave SRK and Akky to us old ladies. 😳

pallavi

Originally posted by: MrsRanbirKapoor

awww but as they say, love is stronger than hate ;)
I LOVE YOUUUUUU OUMA AND PALLUUUU!!!
(pallu ur bengali right?)

Awww me love u too....😳

Yeah Im Bengali too....from Kolkata....originally.😃

pallavi