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Posted: 17 years ago

PART 15

Sana did not know what other things or people she would end up meeting here.

They started out towards a theme park.

Since Sana was afraid of heights she did not want ride most of the rides and she ended up sitting on everything due to Rakhiya who had forced her to do so.

She had tried almost everything and only big roller coaster was left.

Just by looking at it Sana felt a little down. She refused to everyone who wanted her to ride it.

" Won't you give it a try?" asked a voice behind her.

" I've said no and I am not going to change my…" Sana left her sentence incomplete on seeing that she was talking to Kashif.

" You were saying?"

" No I was just saying that I don't think I would like to ride this thing." Sana said as she pointed at the roller coaster with a scared look on her face along with an embarrassed look.

" Why not? It looks great does it not?"

" It will look great if you are not afraid of height."

" I see so that's your problem."

" Yes that is my problem."

" Come on Sana you could sit on the third row and I am sure you won't have a chance to look at where the thing is headed."

" How can you be so sure?"

" People and their heads will block your view?"

" And you are sure that the person in front of me will be tall enough to block my view because?"

" Hmm, lets see well I will sit in front, now come on."

Kashif dragged Sana and she was sitting on the coaster before she knew what was going on and before she had the time to think of a way to deny.

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Posted: 17 years ago

i have noticed that not many people read this ff... if you guys don't think i should continue tell me and i won't and trust me no hard feelings.... continuing or not depends on the replies.

Arshie

Edited by Arshie - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
HI dera i am sorry i am not able to comment before , but i love to read what is gona next. 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey very sweet part........Im not active on IF nowadays......Isiliye comment karne me late ho gaya.....Post the next part soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

HI dera i am sorry i am not able to comment before , but i love to read what is gona next. 👏

its ok yaar u don't have to say sorry... i just thought that u did not like the story so i thought i'd ask... i'll post the next part soon.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Hey very sweet part........Im not active on IF nowadays......Isiliye comment karne me late ho gaya.....Post the next part soon 😳

thanks di...hope ur more active from now..better late than never will wait for ur comments...and the next part, here it comes.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 16

Sana was really tensed and to add to it the ride started.

She found it ok and it was smooth going until it reached its first drop.

Kashif was right, he was tall enough to block her view in front but there was no one to block it on the sides.

Sana saw the height at which she was at the moment and gulped down trying to push away the fear.

1,2, her heart counted and on the count of 3 she found her self going right down at full speed and her stomach doing all sort of turns inside.

She could she herself back on the ground and she closed her eyes and took a deep breath, and once she opened it she did not blink on she that there was another drop maybe a little, no a lot higher than the previous one.

She closed here eyes and before she knew it the ride was over was over and she saw herself getting down from it a little shaken all over.

Kashif came in front of her and he to her surprise was all red.

" Why are you red?" she asked.

" What else could be expected when your neck is pressed to an extent where breathing is impossible?"

" Oh my God!! I am really sorry I did not realize that it was your neck I was pressing on the way down…. I am really sorry."

" Its alright, I'm glad that you were able to enjoy your ride even if it was by almost chocking me."

" I'm really very sorry."

" Its absolutely fine and don't worry about it."

" Hey Kashif were where you all this time?" Arhan asked from behind Sana.

" Somewhere you weren't." Said Kashif.

" Enjoy yourself and see you around." Kashif said to Sana as he walked away with Arhan.

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Posted: 17 years ago
hahahhahaha!! Omgg.........She cudve killed my shona 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

hahahhahaha!! Omgg.........She cudve killed my shona 😆

she would not kill him even if she wanted..main yahan kis baat ke liye hoin?😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

PART 17

" Poor guy," Sana said to herself as we started walking towards her friends, " but he needed it, he was the one who forced me to sit on the ride. But still poor him."

Sana had reached all her friends and Rakhiya was looking at her with a strange glow in her eyes and a strange long smile on her face.

" Did not want to come when I called, and when Kashif called, you came at once. What's going on?"

" It's not like that Rakhiya, he did not give me a chance to reply and deny him, and before I knew it I was on the ride."

" Yeah Sana, sure, I believe you." She said with a sarcastic smile as she moved in front and beckoned Sana to follow.

They spent a few more hours in the theme park and then they started towards the hotel.

Sana was as tired as possible after a day of exhaustion and experiments. She changed and fell asleep at once.

The next few days Sana and the others spent going around and having a look at the monuments in Wisconsin.

During this period Sana grew close to Arhan and Kashif, though involuntarily.

Both she thoughts were as good as the other and were sweet in every way.

" Whom do you like more?" asked Rakhiya on their last day in Wisconsin.

" I actually can't seem to decide. How about you?"

" I feel that Kashif is better than Arhan."

" Really? I think both are as good but some how feel that Arhan is better."

" Maybe but I feel that Kashif is better."

" Fine you think that Kashif is better and I don't agree with that but lets keep this for later as I want to enjoy this last day of this paid trip." Sana told Rakhiya getting up.

" Yeah lets go."

They spent the whole day shopping.

This was one of the fields that was not touched for the past few days, and they thought that it would be great to go shopping and get some souvenirs.

That took the entire day and everyone was completely exhausted.

Before they knew it they were back at the hotel.

Everyone day dinner and assembled near the garden.

" Kashif will be heading down towards his place now and won't be with us till next morning, and so I thought we can bid goodbye now." Said Arhan as Kashif arrived and took his side.

Everyone wished him a safe trip back.

" Thank you so much for allowing me to try and come out of my fear sir." Sana said to him, as everyone assembled near the fire, and they were standing behind the crowd.

"Its not a problem at all Sana, I am glad I could help, and you know we are not here on some official matter, so you don't have to call me sir. You might as well call me by my name."

" Sure, but on one condition."

" Oh so there is going to be a condition as well is it?"

Sana smiled and nodded.

" Go on."

" I picked up this for you when I was shopping. Don't say no."

Kashif smiled and said, "I can't say a no now." And took the gift-wrapped article from Sana's hand. " What's there in it Sana?"

" You might as well find out on your own. I hope you will like it."

" I am sure I will not dislike anything given with so much of affection." He said smiling.

Kashif was about to open the wrapper when Rakhiya called for Sana from the crowd.

" You go ahead I'll let to know how much I liked it later on."

" Thank you once again for your company and have a safe trip back. Hope we'll meet later on."

" Hope we will. Bye Sana."

" Bye."

Sana headed towards Rakhiya and everyone else as Kashif had a few words with Arhan and started towards his car.

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