When It Rained-SK-note-pg59 - Page 5

great part yaar saba 👏 👏 cont soon

NICE PART....CONTINUE SOON !!! 👏 👏 👏

it is getting more and more interstring.......ple ple continue as soon as possible........cant wait to read the secreats of their life......ple ple continue......thanks......

love

kashish....

hey lovely set of parts cont soon

saba dear interesting parts yaar..going good.. as the story is going forward me biting my nails yeh soch-soch kar kii agge kya hoga..agge kahani kya modh legi.. very good going dear...very well written parts...just too interesting... 👏 saba yaar jaldi se continue karo..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃

Originally posted by: Arshie

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pata chal jaaye ga keh yeh mama kya hai 😉😉😉

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loely parts dear...
stry gng gr8... 😊

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NICE PART....CONTINUE SOON !!! 👏 👏 👏

thanx Vandu and am continuing now

Originally posted by: Ravinder duggal

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Originally posted by: goodkashish

it is getting more and more interstring.......ple ple continue as soon as possible........cant wait to read the secreats of their life......ple ple continue......thanks......

love

kashish....

thanx Kashish, the secrets of their life will be revealed quite later 😉 wo sab to maine sirf thoda thoda likha hai 😊😊...so abhi usmein kaafi time hai 😉😉😉

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Originally posted by: sun_423

saba dear interesting parts yaar..going good.. as the story is going forward me biting my nails yeh soch-soch kar kii agge kya hoga..agge kahani kya modh legi.. very good going dear...very well written parts...just too interesting... 👏 saba yaar jaldi se continue karo..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃

Suri nails mat bite karo.....kharab ho jaayein ge 😉 and yeh jaane keh liye keh aagay kya hoga...keep reading 😆....continuing right now

Part 4

Kashish- kya hua beta…aur Shubh beta tumhaare kapre itnay gande kyun hain

Shubh- bua wo Neil hain na

Kashish- haan hai to, kya kiya usnay {stroking Priety's back}

Shubh- usnay Priety ko dhaka diya aur tang kiya to meri usay fight hogayi aur mere kapre gande hogaye

Kashish separates from Priety- Kya kaha Neil ne tumse

Priety- usnay mere papa keh baare mein kaha…. {Kashish went numb hearing the word 'papa'} fathers day aa raha hai na to teacher ne humse kaha keh hum sab apne apne fathers' keh liye cards banaayein…Neil ne kaha keh mere papa hai hee nahin ……..usnay kaha keh mere papa kabhi Waapis nahin aayein ge…..mama papa se kaho na keh jaldi aa jayein yeh log sab mujhe bohat tang karte hain... kehte hain keh mere papa nahin hain {kashish hugged her and uski aankhon se bhi aansoon girne lage}

Kashish to her self- kaise bataun tumhe keh tumhaare papa kabhi Waapis nahin aayein ge ……….. Shubh tum ainda se kisi se bhi jhagda nahin karo ge ……. Good boys don't fight … right

Shubh- right

Kashish- accha ab yeh rona band karo….. ghar chal keh kapre badalte hain and then we'll go out for lunch

Shubh- Pizza Hut

Kashish- haan

Priety- yay

Kashish was upset to see her 3.5 year old daughter crying for her dad.

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As soon as they reached home, Priety and Shubh ran inside the room to change. It wasn't their house, it was the Kapoors', Shiv, Gauri and Shubh Kapoor. There was always a set of clothes of Priety's there b/c she used to have a sleepover there of and on.

Gauri came out and smiled at her- itnay dinon baad aayi ho and Happy Birthday

Kashish- kya karoon bhabhi time hee nahin milta

Gauri- time nikaala karo aur agar phir bhi naa milay to apna kaam apne bhaiyya ko de diya karo aur yahan mere paas aa jaaya karo…..main saara din ghar mein bore ho jaati hoon

Kashish- bhabhi u should rest

Gauri- har waqt wohi to karti rehti hoon…… Shiv mujhe kuch karne hee nahin dete

Kashish smiles- that's because he loves u

Gauri- yeh bache kyun itnay khush hain

Kashish- main inhe bahar le jaa rahi hoon

Gauri- anything special

Kashish tells her everything

Gauri- Kashish, Priety needs a father

Kashish- bhabhi plz mujhe is baare mein koi baat nahin karni…main New York jaa rahi hoon

Gauri- sach

Kashish- kaam keh silsilay mein

Gauri- oh… Priety bhi jaa rahi hai tumhaare saath

Kashish- jee

The kids come there

Shubh n Priety- we're ready

Kashish- to chalo

Kashish first took the kids to lunch and then to an amusement park, she dropped Shubh back to his place and set off for her own.

In the car

Kashish- Priety

Priety- Yes mommy

Kashish- beta we're going to New York

Priety excitedly- really and dad?

Kashish- he won't be there with us

Priety became a bit dull after that, she missed her father terribly.

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Kashish entered Priety' room and found her writing something in her notebook sitting on her writing desk.

Kashish- Preity what are you doing?

As soon as Priety heard her voice, she immediately shut the book

Priety- yes mom

Kashish- u should be in bed, kal school nahin jaana now go and brush your teeth and change into your night suit.

Priety- okay mom

Kashish saw the book in which she was writing, on the cover it was written 'My Diary', there was a pencil in it, she opened the page and read what Priety had written

Dear Diary,

Today was mom's birthday, I was waiting for dad the whole day but he did not come. I thought that he would come to wish mom but he did not come. I don't now where he has gone but I miss him a lot and want to be with him. Whenever dad comes, I'll hug him tightly and never let him go. Please God, send my dad back I promise I'll be a good girl and I won't ask u for anything else but please send my dad back. I miss him and I love him.

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Plz comment ,
Saba.

Aww the diary part was soo sad......what happened to her dad.......is he dead ya did he leave kashish 😭 😭 😭

verry sad i feel bad for her 😭