When It Rained-SK-note-pg59 - Page 6

soo sad, poor kid, i hope her wish is fulfilled soon.

nice and very sad stoory saba plz priety ko us kay dad se mila do.......................con't soon

another great part. but feel sorry for priety she misses her dad. Pls cont sooon waiting eagerly

Originally posted by: togepe30

Aww the diary part was soo sad......what happened to her dad.......is he dead ya did he leave kashish 😭 😭 😭

her dad would be revealed later and whatever happened to him

Originally posted by: monikaseth

verry sad i feel bad for her 😭

ya the poor kid is missing her dad

Originally posted by: Arshie

soo sad, poor kid, i hope her wish is fulfilled soon.

hmm....if her dad comes back then SK keh milne keh chances kum hain 😉😉😉

Originally posted by: cute_samrah

nice and very sad stoory saba plz priety ko us kay dad se mila do.......................con't soon

mila dungi agar dil chahe ga 😆 agar dad se milwa diya to Sujal ka chance gaya 😉

Originally posted by: golu_1677

another great part. but feel sorry for priety she misses her dad. Pls cont sooon waiting eagerly

ya the poor kid is missing her father, as a father is very important in ones life...willlc ontinue soon

Originally posted by: le_me_star

hey saba 😊, interesting way to open a story 😉!!! ......love the way how the story is developing 😊!!! .....sujal part was sooo sad 😭, missing the love of his life 😭 😭 😭! ......kashish has a daughter 😲....how missing her dad alot 😭! .......is kashish sujal love? is sujal neha's dad? if so why aren't they living together 😕????????????????.................continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz....................eagelry waitting for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thanx dear, but i never mentioned that theb person he was missing was the love of his life 😉....but how can Kashish be Sujal's love.....she is/was married and has a kid, Neha nahin Priety 😊😊😊 and her dad would be revealed and uskeh saath kya hua and why he left her and her mum...will conintue soon

Part 5

Tears started to flow from Kashish's eyes; Preity came out of the washroom

Priety- hey, that's my diary

She snatched it from her mom

Kashish bent on her knees and hugged Priety

Preity- mom will dad 'ever' come back

Kashish- u should go to bed

Kashish tucks Priety into bed and kisses her good night and goes out closing the lights.

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Kashish was sitting on the arm chair in the living room, she was thinking about the past; about her family; about him, her husband. Tears welled up in her eyes as he invaded her thoughts, why did this happen they were such a happy family, why did God do this to us, why, why, why?

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Priety woke Kashish up the next morning

Preity- mama utho

Kashish woke up- kya hua beta

Preity- mama school

Kashish looked at the clock, it was 7.15, she quickly got up

Kashish- I want u in the shower fast

Kashish quickly ironed Priety's clothes, she gave her clothes to her and made her a sandwich while she changed, and quickly made her hair and drove her to school. She then came back to her house to get dressed for office, she was late today.

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Kashish entered Shiv's cabin

Kashish- Good morning

Shiv- u r late

Kashish- sorry

Shiv- its okay first time hai is liye maaf kar raha hoon main

Kashish smiles- thank you 'sir'

Shiv smiles- Shut up……..eik good news hai

Kashish- kya

Shiv- tumhein ab New York nahin jaana pade ga

Kashish- kyun

Shiv- kyun keh wo khud aa rahe hain

Kashish- ajeeb aadmi hai

Shiv- maine usay call kiya tha to finalize everything, I told him about my problem and a little bit that u have a small daughter and u would have to leave her behind.

Kashish- lekin main to usay apne saath le jaa rahi thi

Shiv- thoda sa jhoot bol diya anyways I think he likes kids so he agreed to come to India just because of my darling Priety

Kashish smiles- shukar hai I don't have to go

Shiv smiles- haan shukar hai

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Charlotte- Sujal whats this?

Sujal- whats what?

Charlotte- u r going to India

Sujal- yes

Charlotte- but u didn't want to go

Sujal- actually the lady who was coming has a 3 1/2 year old daughter and she would've had to leave her behind.

Charlotte- u did this for that child, right?

Sujal- yes waise bhi, I m going to Delhi not Mumbai

Charlotte smiles- I m glad that u r going

Sujal thinks- pata nahin kyun maine Delhi jaane keh liye haan keh dee pata nahin aisa kya hai Delhi main jo mujhe……………….

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A kaafi stupid turn but Kashish ko bhejne ka dil nahin chah raha tha 😆😆

hehehehehehe!! Haila ye kya hai........hehehehehe! 😆 kashish ki phoren trip cancel kyu ki......hehehehe!! 😆 😆

Originally posted by: togepe30

hehehehehehe!! Haila ye kya hai........hehehehehe! 😆 kashish ki phoren trip cancel kyu ki......hehehehe!! 😆 😆

umm....bas dil chah raha tha to cancel kardi 😆😆😆...lekin dont worry Sujal aa raha hai na 😃😃😃

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

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Jyothi tumhare words kahan gaye 😆😆😆...anywaus thanx 😊😊😊

Originally posted by: golu_1677

great part

thank you