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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank you

Originally posted by: nazz14

good part 👏 👏 👏


thanx 😊😊😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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yeah ur right an odd turn, but even though i hope everything works out well.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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saba very interesting..good going yaar.. 👏 waise dear abhi tumne kashish ke jaane ka program cancel karwa diya aur sujal aa raha hai na..chalo koi baat nahii.. jab sujal wapas jaa raha hoga tho woh kashish aur apni beti ko saath le jaayega.... 😆 saba dear jaldi continue karo..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃
Edited by sun_423 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey what a twist yaar 👏 . yeh toh pura ulta hi hogaya 😉 . sujal is coming to india and what could be better than that 😳 . awesomeeeeeee.....i am really happy for kashish 👏 . abb usse waha nahi jaana padega . paar jaab sujal yaha ayega toh i know thoda ukhda ukhda sa rahega as he will remember his past and all . paar delhi issiliye aaraha hai na ki usse unki kismat kisi se milane wali hai aur woh hai kashish 😳 . wonderfulll....i can't wait for their meeting 😉 . the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzz.....................can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sun_423

saba very interesting..good going yaar.. 👏 waise dear abhi tumne kashish ke jaane ka program cancel karwa diya aur sujal aa raha hai na..chalo koi baat nahii.. jab sujal wapas jaa raha hoga tho woh kashish aur apni beti ko saath le jaayega.... 😆 saba dear jaldi continue karo..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃



thanx Suri, haan yaar Kashish bechari ko Priety ka skool n all bhi to adjust karna padta na so 😉😉😉 Sujal aa rha hai....and i never mentioned that Sujal was Priety's father 😉😉😉...will cont ASAP

Originally posted by: fravashi

hey what a twist yaar 👏 . yeh toh pura ulta hi hogaya 😉 . sujal is coming to india and what could be better than that 😳 . awesomeeeeeee.....i am really happy for kashish 👏 . abb usse waha nahi jaana padega . paar jaab sujal yaha ayega toh i know thoda ukhda ukhda sa rahega as he will remember his past and all . paar delhi issiliye aaraha hai na ki usse unki kismat kisi se milane wali hai aur woh hai kashish 😳 . wonderfulll....i can't wait for their meeting 😉 . the part was great 👍🏼 !!!continue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzz.....................can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊


thanx Nikki..and ya Delhi aanay ki bhi wajah wahan par eik aisi Kashish hai jo usay kheench rahi hai 😉😉😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey dont cry yaar....m sure sara data saved hoga n hopefully nothin would b lost .just DONT format the hard drive..hosakta hai computer ki koi fault ho ..n hard drive ko kuch na hua ho...bczo agar computer ki koi fault hair to hard drive nikaal kar doosrey computer pe laga dena...and all ur sata will still be avalable to u...so b optimistic n dont cry...have hope
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Posted: 17 years ago
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o ye n the last part was awesome👏👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great part saba 👏 👏 👏!!!!!.....can't believe that sujal is going to India just bcoz the" lady" has a 3 1/2 kid to take care of 😉!!!!!!......chalo kashish ko abb NY nahie jana parega 😊!!!!!......kashish se ziada khushi to shiv ko hora hie hai 😆!!!!..........i feel bad 4 sujal as he will feel more deppress when he goes to India n remember his past 😭!!!!!!!!.................but can't wait for him and kashish to meet 😉!!!!!!!!............eagerly waitting for that part!!!!!!!!!!..................continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...................great part!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sorry for the delay, my net crashed

Part 6


Sujal was sitting in the plane on his way to Delhi, he couldn't believe that he was on his way to India.

*********** ******************

Shiv- Kashish jaldi karo, flight land karne waali hai

Kashish- bhaiyya yeh kaam khatam ho kar he nahin de raha… aisa karein keh aap chale jaayein

Shiv- tumhaare baghair

Kashish- jee…..main unse baad mein mi loon gee

Shiv- theeq hai…main chalta hoon

Kashish- bye

Shiv- bye

***************** ********************

Airport

The flight from New York had landed and Shiv was waiting for Sujal to come out, his driver was holding a tag with Sujal's name and company on it. Sujal saw it and came upto him

Sujal forwards his hand- Sujal Garewaal

Shiv shakes it- Shiv Kapoor

In the Car

Shiv- thank you for coming

Sujal smiles- I m sorry for refusing earlier, I had some personal problems

Shiv- hope everything is fine now

Sujal- yes {but he knew that nothing was alright and it could never be either}

Shiv- the hotel is here

Shiv escorts Sujal to his suite

Sujal- thank you

Shiv- if u want anything or want to go to someplace then u r most welcome to ask me

Sujal smiles- no thanx, I know this place

Shiv- u've been to Delhi before

Sujal- yes I've been to Delhi quite a lot of times

Shiv- so hope u enjoy your stay here and one more thing

Sujal- what

Shiv- my company has organized a ball and I would like u to come

Sujal- when

Shiv- its tomorrow night in Hotel Continental

Sujal- isn't that quite far

Shiv- ya but its near the beach that's why and me, some of my staff will be spending the night over there only and I could book a room for u too if u want

Sujal- that would be great

Shiv- I think I would leave, have a good day

Sujal- you too

Shiv left, Sujal went to his suitcase and usme se eik frame nikaal kar kiss karta hai and then keeps it on the table. Sujal lies on the bed and closes his eyes, after like half an hour Sujal wakes up due to the constant ringing of his phone.

Sujal- hello

Charlotte- hey where r u?

Sujal- in Delhi

Charlotte- no I mean…… u have a meeting day after tomorrow

Sujal- what!!!!!!....what meeting

Charlotte- its with a principal of a school

Sujal- why

Charlotte- actually it is a convent cum school so u know these schools work on donations only

Sujal- and u didn't inform me before

Charlotte- actually my friend works there and she asked me if u could u know

Sujal- and u said yes

Charlotte- yes...sorry

Sujal- it okay…when's the meeting

Charlotte- thank you…..it's around 12 o'clock

Sujal- which school

Charlotte- Jesus and Mary Convent

Sujal- okay, I have to go to a ball tomorrow

Charlotte- really

Sujal- ya Mr. Kapoor's company has organized it, so I must go

Charlotte- have fun

Sujal sarcastically- that I surely will

Charlotte- bye

Sujal- bye

******************* ********************

Shiv enters Kashish's cabin

Shiv- hello

Kashish- hey…. so how's he

Shiv- he is nice… better than I imagined any way

Kashish- that's great

Shiv- I invited him to tomorrow's ball we need to book a room for him too

Kashish- I'll do that

Shiv- have u finalized everything

Kashish- yup….just a few things are left and they aren't a big issue

Shiv- accha see u later

Shiv goes out of the room

Kashish thinks- pata nahin aisa kyun lag raha hai keh kuch bohat bada honay waala hai

Part 7

Kashish dropped Preity at the Kapoors the next morning, where she would be staying for the night and going to school. She went to the venue to see whether everything had been done properly or not.

****************** ***************

The ball was in full swing, Shiv was waiting for Sujal when he entered wearing a black suit, looking dashing. All the girls were drooling over him; Sujal ignoring all the girls went to Shiv.

Sujal- Hello Mr. Kapoor, I must say, the ball is really nice

Shiv- thank you but I haven't done anything, all the arrangements have been done by the person who was coming to New York

Sujal- your MD

Shiv- yes

Sujal- where is she? I would like to meet her

Shiv looks here and there- I can't find her at the moment but I would surely introduce her to u, enjoy the party

Sujal smiles- I will

**************** **********

Kashish was observing whether everything was fine or not when she bumped into someone

Kashish- I am sorry

Person- U should be

Kashish looked at the person- Monica

Monica {played by Shweta Salve} - hi Kashish

Kashish- hi…tum Waapis kab aayi

Monica- kyun tum mujhe dekh kar khush nahin ho

Kashish- nahin aisi koi baat nahin hai

Shiv comes over there

Shiv- kya baat ho rahi hai

Monica- kuch nahin bro bas Kashish se mil rahi thi {Monica was Shiv's real sister}

Shiv- Kashish wo Medivista {Sujal's company} keh saath jo humne contract sign kiya hai uski in charge Monica hai

Kashish- Monica?

Shiv- haan bhaee Monica is a fashion designer and Medivista is an event management company so hum donon mil kar eik fashion show organize kar rahe hain jiski designer Monica hogi

Kashish- that's great

Monica- bro mujhe us company keh C.E.O se to milwaayein

Shiv- chalo main tum donon ko unse milwaata hoon

Kashish- bhaiyya aap chalein main aati hoon

Shiv- theeq hai…..jaldi aana

********* ***************

Sujal was standing near the bar with a drink in his hand when Shiv approached him along with Monica.

Shiv- Mr. Garewaal inse miliye yeh hain Monica, meri behen aur is fashion show ki designer

Sujal- nice to meet u

Monica- nice to meet u too {thinks- Gosh he is so hot!!!!}

There is an announcement- Ladies and Gentlemen we would now request u to wear the masks kept in the basket in the middle of the hall and join us on the dance floor.

Monica- come on lets dance

Sujal- nahin Miss. Kapoor

Monica- plz don't call me Miss. Kapoor, call me Monica

Sujal- okay Monica I don't feel like dancing

Monica- plzzzzzzzz

Sujal jaan chudaane keh liye- theeq hai lekin thodi dair keh liye

Monica and Sujal take the masks and proceed towards the dance floor.

*********** ***********

Shiv spotted Kashish

Shiv- Kashish

Kashish- jee bhaiyya

Shiv- will u dance with me

Kashish- bhaiyya!

Shiv- chalo na, Gauri nahin hai warna plz mera bhi dil chah raha hai

Kashish laughs- chalein

Shiv and Kashish joined the dance floor

************ ************

Sujal was having a hard times, Monica constantly baqwaas kare jaa rahi thi.

DJ- Okay ppl its time to swap your partners

Sujal breathed a sigh of relief; he twirled Monica and then got another partner, he kept his hand on her waist and held the other hand, he felt very weird, Kashish held her new partner's hand and kept her hand on his shoulder, his touch was so familiar. Sujal and Kashish were dancing with each other.

Comments awaited,

Saba.

Edited by aishwaria - 17 years ago

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