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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice one. Luv Sujal n Preity's bond. Thats so sweet!!! And Kashish smiled at being called 'begum'.....thats a gud sign. But I really wanna knw wat had happened. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb update
too good
lekin kashish & Sujal ke beech kya jua tha??jo Kashish itna upset hai
great going
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
please add me to the Pm list!!
this FF is lovely dovely

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Nice part !!

Really curious to know that what happened between them that Kashish is soo upset with Sujal !
Luv,
Vandu



thanx Vandu..... well that would be revealed later... i have not started writing it so i cant really say when

Originally posted by: goodkashish

hey itts really cool part....i just love it...ple update soon i m ready to read more n more....thanks for pm

love
kashish



thanx Kashish

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey superb update thanks for adding me to ur pm list plz update soon



thank you and you are welcome 😊😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sun_423

interesting.. now i'am getting more & more curious to know about sujal, kashish.. i hope they patch up soon.. & i really want to see some sweet moments between sujal kashish.. anyway good going.. nice work....👏 saba please haan jaldi se continue karna.. i'am waiting for the next part eagerly..😊



thanx for commenting Suri and i am so sorry for not commenting on Hogi Pyar ki jeet, i am a bit behind and am still reading the parts but i promise as soon as i finish reading it, i will post a bada sa comment. Back to WIR, i'll try to put in as many sweet moments as i can but i dont think i am very good at that.

Originally posted by: cute_samrah

interesting part....................................kashish was shamed finding herslef in sujal arms.................................priety is qiute intelligent like her mom and daddy..............................

con't soon



thanx.....yup Preity is playing cupid and trying to re-unite her parents

Originally posted by: spvd

wow lovely part dear........am liking preity too much...................she will make sujal n kashish come together.........still dunno y they r living separately....................cont soon dear..............



thanx Deepa... it will be revealed why Kashish is upset with Sujal


Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Nice one. Luv Sujal n Preity's bond. Thats so sweet!!! And Kashish smiled at being called 'begum'.....thats a gud sign. But I really wanna knw wat had happened. Pls continue soon.



thanx Sumaiya..... i am glad that u liked the father-daughter bond.
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Posted: 15 years ago


i will



thanx

Originally posted by: sania_58

superb update

too good
lekin kashish & Sujal ke beech kya jua tha??jo Kashish itna upset hai
great going
plz continue soon



thanx..... everything will be revealed after some time

Originally posted by: rmanu7382

please add me to the Pm list!!
this FF is lovely dovely

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i've added you to the pm list manu 😊 and thanx for your comment

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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 36

Gauri was standing in the amusement park and looking at Shubh who was busy taking a ride. Her eyes fell on something or rather someone, Shubh comes to her.

Shubh- mom

He looks in the direction she was looking

Shubh- hey isn't that Preity…but who is she with

Before Gauri could go to them they leave.

Gauri- we're going to your dad's office

************** **************

Kapoor Industries {Shiv's cabin}

Kashish- it'll be done by the evening…ab I m going

Se gets up and Gauri and Shubh enter at that moment

Shiv- Gauri?

Kashish – bhabhi aap kaisi hain

Gauri- main to bilkul theeq hoon….yeh batao keh Preity kaisi hai

Shiv- what happened to Preity?

Gauri- actually aaj Shubh amusement park jaane ki zid kar raha tha to maine socha keh Preity ko bhi saath le kar chalein lekin jab Kashish ko phone kiya to pata chala keh Preity ki tabyat kharab hai

Shiv- Kashish agar tum ghar jaana chahti ho jaa sakti ho

Kashish- nahin bhaiyya ab wo bilkul theeq hai

Shiv- sure

Kashish-100%

Gauri- Kashish tum zara thodi dair keh liye Shubh ko apne saath rakho gee mujhe Shiv se kuch baat karni hai

Kashish- of course….Shubh aao mere saath mere cabin mein chalo

Shubh- okay

Kashish and Shubh go out

Shiv- kya baat hai

Gauri- Shiv aaj maine Preity ko park mein eik aadmi keh saath dekha

Shiv- kya lekin Kashish to keh rahi thi keh

Gauri- Shiv aap khud hee sochiye keh aaj tak jitni bhi baar Preity ki tabyat kharab hui hai chahe kitni choti si baat hee yun na ho Kashish ki first priority humesha se wohi hai…to phir aaj jab uski tabyat kharab thi to Kashish office kaise aa gayi…aur aapne notice kiya wo thodi pareshaan see lag rahi thi

Shiv- haan pareshaan to wo tab se hai jabse wo ball hui hai

Gauri- Shiv aap usay baat kijiye mujhe uski fikar ho rahi hai

Shiv- I'll talk to her and I'll find out who that man was

An employee comes in- Sir Mr. Garewaal is here to meet you

Shiv- oh ya call him in

Gauri- main jaun

Shiv- nahin he has just come to get a file

Sujal comes and he and Shiv shake hands

Shiv- hello Mr. Garewaal, this is my wife

Sujal- hello Mrs. Kapoor

Gauri was just looking at him- hello

Sujal- so can I have the file plz…actually some1's waiting for me in the car

Shiv- Oh just a minute

Shiv uses the intercom and asks Kashish to bring the file

Kashish enters the room and does not see Sujal- bhaiyya yeh rahi wo file {she then looks at Sujal and quietly gives the file to Shiv}

Shiv- you haven't been introduced yet, Mr. Garewaal this is Kashish Mital our company's MD and Kashish this is Mr. Sujal Garewaal

Kashish- nice meeting you

Sujal just smiles at hers and Kashish avoids looking at him

Sujal- can I have the file plz

Shiv- oh yes, here u go {he hands it over to Sujal}

Sujal- so I take your leave…have a nice day

Shiv- same to you

Sujal looks at Kashish and then goes out of the room

Kashish- bhaiyya main abhi aayi

She goes out

Shiv- isko kya hogaya

Gauri- Shiv yeh kaun tha

Shiv- abhi to itni dafa naam liya…Sujal Garewaal a business associate

Gauri- Shiv yehi hai wo jiske saath maine Preity ko dekha tha

Shiv- what…yeh kaise hosakta hai, he lives in New York abhi yahan aaye hain wo bhi humaare is project keh liye

Gauri- Kashish bhi to pehle New York mein rehti thi na

Shiv- haan…lekin…tumhaare kehne ka matlab kya hai

Gauri- kahin yehi to Kashish ka pati nahin

Shiv- Gauri yeh tum

Gauri- Shiv aap sochiye…Kashish aisay kaise Preity ko bhi kisi keh saath yun bahar jaane de gee….wo uski zindagi hai, she will only trust her with someone she trusts

Shiv- Gauri meri kuch samajh mein nahin aa raha

Gauri- Shiv sochiye…..uske pati ka naam

Shiv- Gauri mujhe nahin pata…main usay Kabhi mila nahin…..Kashish ne aaj tak humaare saamne uska naam nahin liya...she always used a pronoun when she was referring to him she never took his name

Gauri- Shiv eik hee jaga hai humein jahan se uske pati ka naam aur uske baare mein sab kuch mil sakta hai

Shiv- kaun…..Gauri no I m not calling her

Gauri- main baat kar loon gee…give me your cell phone

She takes the phone from him and dials a number

Gauri- hello…Sneha


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Saba 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
saba that was a interesting part.... now very soon gauri & shiv will get to know kii sujal is none other than kashish's hubby.. tab aayega asli mazaa.. kyunke i'am very sure sujal preity, shiv aur gauri kii madat lega to manaofy kashish.. that will be very sweet to watch.. anyway dear a sweet part.. good one.. keep up the good work going....i'am very curious to know agge kya hoga...👏 yaar saba please continue soon.. & ya it's a request i want to see some cute romantic scenes between sujal, kashish in the present... do continue soon..😊
Edited by sun_423 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice...Interesting part..!
I hope Shiv and Gauri sort out the misunderstanding between Sujal and Kashish !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi dear nice part................shiv n gauri r gonna find out abt sujal................but y has kashish kept this a secret....................cont soon.................

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