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Posted: 15 years ago
very beautiful part.................what happened between them n y is kashish behaving like that????????????looks like even sujal too doesnt know y kashish is asking him to leave their lives................sujal wont leave now or ever..............cont soon dear.................
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 35

Next morning

Preity comes in her mom's room and jumps on the bed

Preity- daddy!!!

This sudden action of hers causes Sujal and Kashish to wake up, Kashish was a little embarrassed to find herself in Sujal's arms while Sujal just grinned at her.

Sujal hugs Priety- kya hua

Preity- nothing I m just happy that u r here warna I thought that u will be gone

Sujal- beta I promised you na that I wont leave you na

Preity- ya and daddy always keeps his promises right mom

{She says this to Kashish who was half way out of the room}

Kashish hesitantly- right'.umm'Preity go brush your teeth and wash your face'.kapre tak nahin badle tumne'go and change aur breakfast keh liye aa jao

Preity goes out of the room, Kashish without looking at Sujal says- tum bhi fresh hokar breakfast keh liye aa jao

She goes out of the room and Sujal goes in the washroom, Sujal later joins Preity at the table

Sujal- where is your mom

Preity- She is in the kitchen

Sujal- so don't u have to go to school

Preity laughs- daddy today is a Saturday'school is closed on Saturdays

Sujal laughs- really, I never knew that

Preity- daddy!!!

Sujal- so since u don't have to go to school, do u want to go out

Preity- yes!!!!

Kashish comes there- Preity why r u shouting

{She keeps a cup of coffee in front of Sujal}

Preity- daddy and I are going out

Kashish- u have school

Preity- mom u and daddy seriously don't know the 7 days of the week, it's a Saturday

Sujal- Preity u will have to teach us now

Preity laughs

Kashish- no

Preity- what mom!!

Kashish sternly- u r not going anywhere

Sujal- Preity go and get ready, we'll leave in 15 minutes

Preity leaves

Sujal- Kashish please mujhe at least Preity ko bahar to le jaane do

Kashish- nahin'main tumhein apni beti ko nahin le jaane doon gee

Sujal- for God's sake kashish, wo meri bhi beti hai

Kashish- Sujal

Sujal- Kashish mera pura haq hai usay bahar le jaane ka samjhi, Kashish tumnein dekha nahin, Preity kitni khush hai at least uski khaatir Kashish, plz

Kashish- theeq hai lekin mere office se Waapis aanay se pehle mujhe Preity wapis ghar mein chahiye'.samjhe

Sujal- jo hukum begum {he smiles}

Kashish hides her smile- theeq hai tum Preity ko le jaa sakte ho

Preity comes there- mama what should I wear

Kashish- uff tauba kisi party mein jaa rahi ho kya kuch bhi pehen lo

Preity- mamma u always take out my clothes

Kashish- chalo

Kashish takes Preity inside, Sujal smiles and picks up the newspaper and sits on the sofa

After like 15 minutes Preity comes and sits beside her father

Preity- I m ready

Sujal- okay'.so lets go

Preity- where are we going daddy?

Sujal- well first we r going to go to my hotel and I'll change and then we will go wherever you want

Priety's eyes widened- u're staying at a hotel

Sujal- yes..'so?

Preity- u should be staying with us, not at a hotel

Sujal sees Kashish- and why should I stay with you

Preity- because we're your family and people stay with their family

Sujal smiles and usko apni goad mein bitha kar kisses her- kitni hoshiyaar hogayi ho tum

Preity smiles proudly- daddy I m very intelligent

Sujal laughs- chalo {he says this to Kashish} I'll bring her back by six'.bye

Preity enthusiastically- bye mom

Kashish smiles- bye

She closes the door when they leave and goes to her room. There she takes out a frame and keeps it close to her heart.

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Guys i will try to update as soon as possible, its just that this month is terrible and hectic, i am continuously having tests. I don't have any test tomorrow that is why i could update and i think this is why i am being really hyper right now and eventhough its one a.m i have no plans of sleeping.

😃Saba.

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Edited by aishwaria - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

U just posted the same part again !!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

U just posted the same part again !!



i know i realised it and have edited it

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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice part !!
Really curious to know that what happened between them that Kashish is soo upset with Sujal !
Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey itts really cool part....i just love it...ple update soon i m ready to read more n more....thanks for pm
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kashish
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey superb update thanks for adding me to ur pm list plz update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
interesting.. now i'am getting more & more curious to know about sujal, kashish.. i hope they patch up soon.. & i really want to see some sweet moments between sujal kashish.. anyway good going.. nice work....👏 saba please haan jaldi se continue karna.. i'am waiting for the next part eagerly..😊
Edited by sun_423 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
interesting part....................................kashish was shamed finding herslef in sujal arms.................................priety is qiute intelligent like her mom and daddy..............................
con't soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow lovely part dear........am liking preity too much...................she will make sujal n kashish come together.........still dunno y they r living separately....................cont soon dear..............

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