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Posted: 15 years ago
wow when everything was so fairytale like bet them then why did they get seperated gr8 part dear cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice part...ple continue soon...thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice part...................sk life going gooood....................but why they separated????????????
plz con't soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 34

Sujal comes to her and sits on the ground and holds her face- why are you crying

Kashish moves his hands- Priety kahan hai

Sujal- wo so gayi

Kashish looks away- I think ab tumhein jaana chahiye

Sujal- kyun

Kashish looks at him- kya matlab hai tumhaara

Sujal- main kyun jaun aakhir aisa kya kar diya hai maine...kaunsa gunaah hogaya hai mujhse

Kashish- wow tumhein yeh tak nahin pata keh tumnein kiya kya hai, tumhaari wajah se sab khatam hogaya...main...plz leave

Sujal- Kashish I can't live without you and Priety

Kashish- and I can't live with you

Sujal- Kashish plz....tumhein nahin lagta keh Priety ko meri zaroorat hai

Kashish- wo aadat daal le gee tumhaare baghair jeene ki

Sujal- jab eik saal mein wo mujhe nahin bhool paayi to ab kya bhoole gee

Kashish- tum usay dur raho aur wo tumhein bhool jaaye gee

Sujal- main nahin reh sakta usay dur...meri bacchi hai wo

Kashish- Sujal jao

Sujal angrily- nahin jaun ga main, aur agar gaya to tumhein aur Preity ko apnay saath le kar jaun ga samjhi tum

Kashish- zabardasti le jao ge kya tum mujhe

Sujal- Kashish please tum kyun kar rahi ho yeh

Kashish- just GET OUT

Preity- mommy

Sujal and Kashish look at the door where Preity was standing, she came in and gestured Sujal to pick her up and Sujal did so.

Preity- mummy why are you shouting, daddy are u and mommy fighting

Sujal- no beta

Kashish- beta come to me daddy has to go

Preity holds Sujal- NAHIN!!! Daddy wont go anywhere, I love you daddy

Kashish sternly- Preity he has to leave

Preity- but why, where do u have to go daddy....mamma I am going with him...I love my daddy and I cant live without him

Sujal kisses her and hugs her- daddy wont go anywhere beta and if he would then his princess will go with him

Preity- I love you daddy...see mummy daddy is not going anywhere now he'll stay with us, right daddy

Sujal smiles- yes baccha daddy has come to take his princess and her mom {he looks at Kashish who looks the other way} with him back to New York

Preity- yay mom we're going back home

Kashish looks at Sujal questioningly while Sujal just hugs Preity

Sujal- waise why aren't u in bed

Preity- I woke up when I heard you and mommy screaming

Sujal- u should go to sleep

Preity- daddy will you sleep with me tonight...please

Sujal- sure chalo

Sujal takes her to her room, Kashish sits on her bed and starts to cry.

After like 15 minutes Sujal comes and sits beside her and holds her hand, Kashish looks at him

Kashish- jhoote waade kyun kar rahe ho usay

Sujal- Maine koi jhoota waada nahin kiya usay

Kashish- Sujal plz chale jao humaari zindagi se

Sujal- tum donon meri zindagi ho, tum aisa keh kar mujhe marne keh liye keh rahi ho

Kashish- Sujal plz kitni baar kaha hai tumse keh yeh marne marane ki baatein mat kiya karo

Sujal- when u don't love me then why do u care if I live or die

Kashish looks away, but Sujal makes her look at him

Sujal- I love you

Saying this he hugs her and kisses her forehead

Kashish softly- Sujal plz

Sujal- do u really think that u can live without me

Kashish looks away and tears well up in her eyes and she softly murmurs a yes

Sujal- look at me Kashish please

Sujal holds her chin and makes her face him and Kashish starts to cry

Sujal wipes her tears and hugs her

Sujal- I love you....and I promise everything will be fine Kashish, {he kisses her head while hugging her only} I love you

Sujal makes her lie on the bed but doesn't leave her after sometime both fall asleep in each other's arms.

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Edited by aishwaria - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
grt part
dear
but pls dono ko alag at karna
sab kuch dik kardo jaldi
kashish morning mein phir se jhagda na kare pls
pls cont so soon
will be waiting eagerly
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part saba what had happened 1 yr back saba tat they had to get seperated
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow....that was a beautiful part. Sujal did a gr8 job by not leaving....even if this angers Kashish he very well knws to manage her. And Preity is really sweet.....luved her dialogues wid Sujal.

Wanna knw wat had happened btwn them. Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg...u have stop at the point where i cant stop thinking about whats gonna happen after...ple ple ple update soon...its so interstring to read...ple update...thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb part.......................romantic one...................priety was soooo cute not wanted to leave her daughter n wife tooo........................
plz con't soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice update thanks for pm

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