FF - Dil se ..Part 18 Pg 32 - 28/6 - Page 14

Pari; 🤗

I really like the fan fiction. See below my comments for part 10.


• So sweet armi blushing 😳 loool if only ridz could see him 😆

• Love the romance between them 😍

• Armi wakes up and says ": aa…. Haaan anji tu .. tu ..tum kuch keh rahi thi arman is in dreamland 😆 😆

• Armi: kal raat theek se neend ayi aww so sweet the romance between them lool armi wants ridz to accept that she had a sleepless night like he did 😆

• Arm: aaj tum bahut khoobsoorat lag rahi ho. I love the way you have described their chemistry 👏👏

will read part 11 soon and post my comments 😊

awwwwwwwwwwwww reeeenie luv ya dear, n also luved the comments.............. plz do read next 2 parts soon as well as i luv ur detailed analysis

-Pari 😳

hey all i know you all are waiting for the party and the engagement and to know the reactions of muski and others.......

Sorry to disappoint you but in this part it is not the party as well...

i really need time to write the party part up as i want to make it realyyyyyyyyyyy nice but i just do not get enough time to type that good part (i really want to do justice to it), as i have to revise for my exams which are starting later this month...... my exams will finish on 16th May and after that i will get a really long and nice part pakka promise.....

so sorry for this 😭 plz forgive me

Here's part 13

Part 13

Recap: Armi-ridz went for a date on a lonely beach and there was a tent and there armi proposes ridz and they dance for some time but anji calls to remind them to come back as they have to go shopping next day n then armi drops ridz home

Armi texts ridz when he reaches home and ridz replies saying gud night……

They both are lying on bed thinking about the evening

Anji comes out of washroom and sees ridz lost in her world and decides to ask her about the evening

She taps on ridz shoulders

Anji: ridz?

Ridz coming out of the trance: haan … han di?

Anji: kya hua ?

Ridz (confusingly): kis bare mein di?

Anji: aree….. I mean aaj tum Armaan ke saath gayi thi na? toh kya hua date par?

Ridz blushed

Anji: plz yaar bata na?

N started tickling her

Ridz: ok ok batati hu

Anji stopped tickling and ridz told him where armi took her and how he proposed her and showed her the ring

Anji: OMG…. Ridz tum sahi thi Armaan wakahi tumse bahaut pyaar karta hai………

N she got up and hugged ridz then they both went to sleep… ridz was thinking of armi while on other side anji had a thought in her mind saying kya atul bhi mujse itna hi pyaar karta hai… but then she came back to her senses n pulled her cover up and went to sleep. Ridz also slept thinking of armi

NEXT MORNING

As usual ridz had woken up and freshened up and woke anji (ridz didn't go for jogging today)

Anji got ready n left for sanjeevani giving ridz a small list of things to buy for her

Ridz was having breakfast when door bell rang, it was armi and padma (armi had picked her up as she asked him to)….. they joined ridz in breakfast …. Armi sat next to ridz and was as usual… flirting and joking with nani n praising her cooking skills…

In sanjeevani locker room

Anji enters and all other interns were already there

Anji: hey u guys

All: hey anjali

Rahul: kya hua anji aaj tum akeli? Ridheema nahi ayi aaj?

Anji: nahi aaj uski chuti hai…

Muskan: kyun?

Anji: wooh meine aap logon ko party ke liye bulaya tha na? wooh usi ke liye shopping karne aur uski thodi arrangements ke liye usne chuti li hai.

Muskan, rahul and atul felt a bit weird but didn't say anything.

Muski: oye atul aaj Armaan nahi dekhai de raha?

Atul: aree haan yaar pata nahi kyun par meine jab usee aaj phone kiya to usne kaha ki usne bhi aaj chuti li hai…what a coincidence na ?

Rahul felt something weird but didn't say anything
Soon they got their duties and all were working

AT GUPTA RESIDENCE

All finished chatting and having their breakfast and then went to do shopping in armi's car, armi was trying to flirt with ridz and have her on her own but wasn't being successful as nani and padma were not leaving her alone and after all day's shopping they got everything and went home

They went home and it was evening so armi dropped ridz and nani first and then went to drop padma, padma invited him in

Padma entering her house: aao beta, toh I hope ki tumhe saab pasand aya

Armi: ofcourse mom

Armi looked around the house

Armi: nice house mom, aap isko itna clean kaise rakhti hai, I mean hospital ka kaam aur aap toh akeli bhi rehti hai to phir?

Padma laughed at this

Then they sat and padma got them some juices n sat with him

Padma: Armaan tumse ek baat puchu?

Armi: haan ma, yeh bhi koi puchne ki baat hai? Puchiye na aap ka haq banta hai

Padma: beta, tumne jab muskan ki help iss tarah karne ka faisla kiya to kya tum ur ridhima ek saath the… i mean…

Armi: haan, jab meine muskan ki help karne ka decision liya toh I was dating ridhima, yeh alag baat hai ki hum kabhi date pe nahi gaye … n laughed a bit

Padma: toh phir tumne ridhima ko tab sab kuch kyun nahi bataya?

Armi: muskan ke promise ki wajah se, muskan ne mujse promise liya tha ki yeh baat mein sanjeevani mein kisi ko nahi bataunga

Padma: lekin jab tumne uski help karne ka faisla kiya to kya tumhe dar nahi laga ki agar ridhima ko yeh baat kahi aur se pata chalti toh?

Armi: (smiled a little) laga, dar to laga tha, lekin muje kahi aisa laga ki iss wajah se mere aur ridz ke relation me koi farq nahi padega, shayad yeh mera apne pyaar par yakeen tha. Ya phir ridhima par mera bharose ki agar usse kahin aur se yeh baat pata chali bhi toh wooh muj pe shak nahi karegi aur mujse baat zarur karegi aur tab mien usee saab kuch bata dunga sach sach aur muskaan mera saath degi iss sach ko kehne mein… lekin muskan ke behaviour ki wajah se meine ridhima ko sab sach bata diya is se pehle ki koi bhi misunderstanding ho hamare bich……aur aab meri yeh samaj mein aa gaya hai ki aab mein ridhima ko bina puri baat bataye kuch bhi aisa nahi karunga …

Padma seemed satisfied n smiled

After that they chatted about some snajeevani issues and some other general issues and then armi left and went home and was sitting on his arm chair and remembered all gud times with ridhima and also thought of what padma said "what if it went wrong and he lost ridhima because of this" n became firm that he will not hide anything from ridhima now n then he thought of their engagement and txted ridz saying "hope u enjoyed today, I wish we could have enjoyed more ;) couldn't get chance. Gud night and my dreams, luv Armaan"

At gupta residence

Ridz showed anji her shopping and later was lying on her bed with the teddy in her hand (the same teddy that armi gave her) and was thinking of armi when she read armaan's txt and smiled and replied

"I enjoyed did u? I got so many things today, good night and no dreams, (as I know u won't be able to sleep if u have my dreams and I don't want u to be awake as it is a special day tom.) so go and sleep see you tom. Ridz. "

Then ridz and armi went to sleep thinking about next day and each other.

Precap: the engagement party... kya hoga? kaise? kahan? kaun hoga? kaun kya sochega? kiska reaction kaisa hoga...?

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reallllllly niccceeeeeeeeeeee
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waiting for the for the bomb blast on every one
plz pm me update asap

hey
dt was really nce
great updte
cnt wait 4 da nxt part
will b waitin eagerly
updte asap plzz
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hey wow yaar vryyy nce prt
wonderful update lvd it.....
bt no AR scens 😭 😭 no pro
eagrly waitng fr ur nxt prt my dreams......
cont soooooooooon
luv yachna 👏 [=D>👏] 👏

i read ur whole ff now and its amazing jus like dmg cute do cont soon plz i beg you 😭 😊 😊

pari amazing part sweety toooooooooooooo gooood
swansea

woooowwwww.........tht was great..........cant wait for the next part.....plz continue soon
luv ur ff
ishiqa

wonderful part. can't wait for the next part. wonder what's going to happen in the party. please continue soon