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ssh57

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Posted: 16 years ago

#61

Hey another nice story. This time pictures too? They wer also very nice especially the teary eye but best was the sentence abt mature and immature love - very correct.

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: ssh57
Hey another nice story. This time pictures too? They wer also very nice especially the teary eye but best was the sentence abt mature and immature love - very correct.

Hi,

Yup this story i wanted to add pictures for view and feel of the surroundings... at that time i was new in adding pics lol... hmmm ya mature love hmm.. am happy u are enjoying reading the ffs..😃 tc

Bhoomi

Originally posted by: aati1429
a very beautiful FF...

Hi ,

good to know u liked the ff..😊

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Sona

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Posted: 16 years ago

#63

Hi Bhoomi,

I loved this story! It was very refreshing.

-Sona

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: sparikh
Hi Bhoomi,

I loved this story! It was very refreshing.

-Sona

Hi Sona,

Good to know that u loved the story.. it was refreshing u felt.. i think this was amogn the first story where i tried to use english verses of two lines.. and it was enjoyed by my readers and then later i carried that style in many mroe of my stories.. good to knwo u loved readign it.. tc

Bhoomi

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: sana866

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Hi Sana,

glad that u liked this story... yup its written long time back but feels good to know it still holds its charm .. tc

Bhoomi

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seema mittal

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Posted: 15 years ago

#66

heyyy bhoomika
really loved this story
prashant's character was amazing
well i too thought that prashants enacting as sarikas bf will be the way to teach vinod a lesson
but ur way of doing that was amazing
just loved it how sarika confronted vinod
then sarika proposing prashant but her idea didnt worked
but wat happens next was too good
i really loved this short story

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2
heyyy bhoomika
really loved this story
prashant's character was amazing
well i too thought that prashants enacting as sarikas bf will be the way to teach vinod a lesson
but ur way of doing that was amazing
just loved it how sarika confronted vinod
then sarika proposing prashant but her idea didnt worked
but wat happens next was too good
i really loved this short story

Hi Seema,

Glad that u liked the story so much... prashant charcter yup , he is a gem of a person na..haha many here fell in love with him... yes even i had initally thought abotu it and later i felt prashant isnt a person who would ask her to lie and also be a party in that for the sake of Vinod, he surely will do much more.. and so i went to that aspect of the story where even after saygin friends people just feel what they want to ..and feel insecure na..

Awww u liked all that bit of proposign and later how it unfolds.. thanks for lettign me know what all u liked now i will keep in mind when i write my next..

thanks for ur kind words of encouragment.. .. happy that u loved readign this one..

Bhoomi

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Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#68

Awwe bhoomi di....thnk god ths topic is nt closed!!

this is so very awesome i loved it....frankly speaking i cld relate d convo betwn prashant n sarika so very well....maybe coz my frnd alwys says d same to me....bt sadly in ur story prashant understnds sarika....i mean hez der by her side....in my case my frnd is nt by my side....bt nevertheless his words alwyz are.....

this is really a grt work of art....im speechless di....not only by ths one bt by all i've read....!!.....

I'm actually looking forward to another short story by u...u r my inspiration at some point..
I may have read many stories n complemented the writers n also be moved by their work...bt ur d first prsn jinka work mein padha tha n i loved it frm d bottom of my heart.....what i feel i convey be it thro' comments .... i feel i need to....😊

and evn d short 2 line verses u wrote were lovely and truly touching !!

-fatima

Edited by charming.angel - 15 years ago

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Bhoomi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: charming.angel
Awwe bhoomi di....thnk god ths topic is nt closed!!

this is so very awesome i loved it....frankly speaking i cld relate d convo betwn prashant n sarika so very well....maybe coz my frnd alwys says d same to me....bt sadly in ur story prashant understnds sarika....i mean hez der by her side....in my case my frnd is nt by my side....bt nevertheless his words alwyz are.....

this is really a grt work of art....im speechless di....not only by ths one bt by all i've read....!!.....

I'm actually looking forward to another short story by u...u r my inspiration at some point..
I may have read many stories n complemented the writers n also be moved by their work...bt ur d first prsn jinka work mein padha tha n i loved it frm d bottom of my heart.....what i feel i convey be it thro' comments .... i feel i need to....😊

and evn d short 2 line verses u wrote were lovely and truly touching !!

-fatima

Hi Fatima,

I am also very glad that this is open and I cant get ur comments directly hear on the page..

Awww felt so touchign that u could relate to the conversation between prahsant ans sarika.. and had prashant kinda friend in ur life.. that itself is such a great support atleast u had somewhere in ur life.. but but but.. he doesnt understnad u or is by ur side..hmm.. ya reality is much bitter at times.. but i guess time phase r meant to change..change is the truth..so it will.. :D

glad u liked the story.. awww u r specchles and my smile is getting too broad.. i think this is one story where most of u have lovely veyr very tiny segments.. though i never thought they woudl be such affective .. glad u enjoyed reading .. awww dont call me inspiration.. no noo..i am not.u know what every thing that happens..and every moment u share with others.. slwoly that s the inpisration..good bad all mix up to make u know inspire u ..ur life and the ones who r clsoe to u.. the comments ur readers may give u.. talent is in all..its the push to let it come out.. i am more than glad if even for a percent somewhere i played the part of theat inspiration.. waise ..u r my inspiration. as my readers every comment..makes me to learn, to move forward and feel the direction of thoughts r good.. enough to share..

u know the verses.. writing the verses started from this story.. so this story is special for that very reason as well.. :D.waise with ur comments..u truly made me feel so special i am hugely falteered honoured and touched..

Bhoomi

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