“When I was broken” Part VI (ending) - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
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omg now i am waitin to know what prashant saya hey bhoomi fab part loved every bit of it cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oye..........prashant is cuming to meet me(for shaadi)😆..........ye sarika kaha se ayi beech me......kabab me haddi 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 👏 hey bhoomi hatz off 2 u...wat a story itz soo interesting n so touchy. 😃 ..m so exiting parshant kiya khata hai...i cant wait anymore plz post next part soon 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

omg now i am waitin to know what prashant saya hey bhoomi fab part loved every bit of it cont soon

Hi jyothi... u r waitign what prashant will say..that means u r enjoyign reading the story..wotn make u all wait for long..dear...😃

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: togepe30

oye..........prashant is cuming to meet me(for shaadi)😆..........ye sarika kaha se ayi beech me......kabab me haddi 😆

Prashant comign to meet u😉haiii uski choice pe main vaari jauuu...😆... ab kya karu sotry kya kehti hai u kow na... nahi malum malum hojayega..last part jo post honewala hai..😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ghazala_gr8

👏 👏 hey bhoomi hatz off 2 u...wat a story itz soo interesting n so touchy. 😃 ..m so exiting parshant kiya khata hai...i cant wait anymore plz post next part soon 😃 😃

Hi ghazala... awww so sweet of u ..am really happy to know u loved this short story..😃 prashant kya kehta hai..hmm end n last part post karne wali hun..u will kow ..kay hot ahi... will post it soon..akhir am writign for u guys and its ready with me..phri late nahi hoag ato post..

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part VI:

Prashant was a bit surprised as it wasn't his birthday. He opened the card n saw the painting, even the words. He smiled n said…..

Prashant: This is amazing; I think this is the best idea ever. I feel u can bring up this shop. It will rock.(Sarika was shocked. She asked him….)

Sarika: What r u talking abt? I made this card, did u read the line in it. U saw the painting. Did u understand? These flowers I arranged n brought. These r ur Fav na…

Prashant : That's it, I feel u can surely become a florist. See u love gardening, u arrange flowers so beautifully, u can paint those pots too n sell. Above that u can have ur hand made cards. This is great career option.

Sarika was disappointed, the idea of florist was great but her heart wanted to hear something else.

Sarika: I make a card for u n u tell me abt my career option. Cant u understand what I wanted to convey?

Prashant: This card is for me, but u havnt written my name or urs. I thought u had made it for some one else.

Sarika realised she had left the to, & from line to paint it later with different colours but she complete forgot to write that. She was embarssed. She was looking at Prashant now carfully reading the card. Prashant was looking at her in btw & she every time looked down. The waiter came to ask if anythign else to be served.

Prashant : No , Bill plz.(trying to search something not finding)

Sarika: Prashant u won't have some sweet, u like to have na in the end.

Prashant: No I think we should leave.

Sarika was a bit upset, Prashant wasn't glad abt her feelings. They paid the bill n Prashant drove his car. He had a staright face.

Sarika: Prashant, I like u very much. As my friend in these few months we have met n know each other. I have gradually felt I have certain fondness n immense respect for u. For me the feeling that I have such a wonderful friend is enough. If u don't love me it's not going to change anything. But just don't misunderstand me. I just wanted to atleast express myself & know u have the same feeligns or not.

Prashant: I know. We will always remain friends. That's never going to change. Its fine, nice u honestly told me ur feelings. It's a nice feeling that u like me. I can understand with how much love u made those flowers n card. It touched me.

Sarika had no clue what was his answer she thought may be he just want friendship to stay as it was. They reached Sarika's house. Sarika was entering in n he was driving back. Sarika told him,

Sarika: I am sorry Prashant if I hurt u in anyway. I had never thought in my life, God will be so kind, When I was Broken …I found u beside. U r a true friend in deed. Thank u for everythign . I truly mean it. Let this day not affect our realtionshio in anway. (Prashant nodded his head n drove off.)Sarika entered her house, puts on the light. She thought abt her meeting …

Sarika with stil tears in her eys…: U don't but I Do….she started going in her room. As she went in, she heard her parents discussing with some guests, she looked in the backyard she was shocked.

Sarika went & greeted uncle n aunty. Sarika was just not understanding

Uncle: Sarika, ur dad is ready to let his princess stay with us.

Sarika blushed…. Yet she was confused.

Aunty: Sarika , beti…..tum khush ho na. Tum dono ki khushi se jyada kuch aur mainey nahi rakhta. Mujhe to tum pehle se bahu ke roop mey pasand thi.

Sarika looked into her eyes, Aunty had so much love n affection …

Uncle: Sarika, tum aa gayi, Who gadha kahan hai??

Sarika: Ji….

Uncle: Aree baba, our son, Prashant where is he?

Prashant entered runnign from the other gate. Sarika was surprised to see him. She had understood eberythign now. Prashant hugged her n said. I Do….in her ears.. Sarika blushed….n started laughing…

Prashant took the blessings of all the elders n hugged Sarikas Dad. Sarika was so happy, they said that how Prashant had told he wanted to marry her n they had come her to finalise this proposal.They were just waiting for Sarika's answers n Prashant called up them n told Sarika had said Yes. Sarika looked at Prashant with a raised eyebrow. All went inside to open a champagne n celebrate. Sweets were served in the kitchen. As everyone were talking. Prashant took Sarika outside in the garden. Sarika started hittign him, why did he act as if he had no feelings for her. Prashant enjoyed it,…n said , "I had planned to tell u but unfortunately when I saw u forgetting the name on the card I remembered I had forgotten the ring I bought for u. So as we reached here I informed ur dad to bring that Sarika was blushing n shy n very happy. Prashant took the ring from his pocket, Sarika looked at the beautiful ring, she had tears of happiness, Prashant lovingly took her hand n softly puts the ring into her finger n both hugged each other.

Soon the rain started pouring, Sarika looked up, and she smiled remembering the day she had cried when she was broken n cursed the rain. She was crying now as well. But now it was tears of happiness. Prashant said, "See we got God's blessing as well." He cozily cuddled her walked along romancing in the rain.

When I am in love, I am feeling like dancing n singing,

The clouds seem to dance along n see now it starts raining……….

"Immature love says:' I love you because I need you.' Mature love says: 'I need you because I love you.'"

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Posted: 17 years ago
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😳 excellent.....maine rajeev - amna ko imagine kiya tha as prashant n sarika.....hehehehe!!

Awesome story 👏 apni baki sab stories bhi post karna jaldi se
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey such a wonderful story i just loved the character of prashant
i have imagined angad and kripa in their place
😳 😳 😳
write more stories yaar 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: togepe30

😳 excellent.....maine rajeev - amna ko imagine kiya tha as prashant n sarika.....hehehehe!!

Awesome story 👏 apni baki sab stories bhi post karna jaldi se

Hi Vandu... aww excellent kaha ..main to behosh hi hogayi thi padhkey abhi abhi hosh mey ayi hun😳... u imagined Rk and Amna oh hoooyy.... Amna se cheenlo Rajeev ko i dont have any problem u see...😆..u liked the short story na..oh baaki stories but am confused which to post...lets see which i feel i should..and hope u like reading them as well...

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