FF:by rainshine_11:pg 51 ENDING!!!!!!!!!!

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Meena

@princessmandy

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

continue rain....its pretty good... its getting betta and betta!!! CONTINUEE plz

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Raina

@rainshine_11

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

Shaadi karke phaas gaye yaar------------------
All their familes were getting together a lot, lately and the wedding was rapidly approaching with only 4 weeks left..........Malika sent Riya ayaan ranbir and kanya shopping and the engagement was tomorrow..everyhing was ready except for the ones getting engaged.................esp. kanya and ranbir.......so they arrive at the stores and riya and kanya spilt up from ranbir and ayaan....
R:ayan ....mein toh yeh shaadi presure mein aakar kar raha hun..lekin tum
A:chachu...mein riya se pyaar karta hun
R:riya se..ya?
A:kya matlab?
R:kuch nahi...maine suna hai ki tum aur kanya saat mein goa gaye the
A:hum sirf aache dost hai...aur aap abse itne possesive...
R:ayan ..suno mujhe koi pharak nahi padta agar woh jiye ya mara
A:chachu?!
R:hum dono shaadi family ke pressure ke undar aake shaadi kar rahe hai....she has jus too much attitude
A:kya?!...woh bohot aachi ladki hai.....agar mein riya se shaadi nahi karta toh kanya se saroor
R:kya?
A:kuch nahi .......chale
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Riya and Kanya on the other side(btw i hope u remeber kanya doesnt wear salwar kamez....she has capris on with an aeropostal shirt and necklace of matching beads comin down to her stomach)are in the happy mood<kanyas happy cuz riyas happy>so they buy dresses and meet up by the parking lot.....its sunny weather and wind is blowing.....Kanya and riya arrive laughing
R:shopping ho gayi toh chale
Ri:sure jij
R:WHAT?!
Ri:shaadi ho jaye toh bhi mein aap ko jij hi bola vu gi.....kyunki ayaan se pehle mein kanya ko jaanti thi
Ayaan looks at kanya and she looks back but then shifts her eyes to ranbir
R:tik hai.....ab chalo varna yahi raat ho jayi gi
They head towards they car and riya and ayaan are talking leaving kanya and ranbir to walk side by side........wind starts blowing fst which results to kanya's hair to touch ranbirs face.....she notices
K:im sorry
R:fine
Kanya looks into her purse and find a band to tie her hair into a pony tail... she trys to tie her hair but with all the bags she was holding it wsnt possible...ranbir saw this and helped her out by grabbing her bags....
R:lao mein yeh bags pakad le ta hun
K:thanz
Kanya puts her hair into a ponytail with her bangs hanging out(btw she has bangs....i thought it mite suit her personality) and then grabs the bags from ranbirs hands which made their hands touch and they looked at eachother until riya came in and snapped her fingers
Ri:come on jij i no kanya is pretty but you can wait till tomorrow
She grabs kanyas hand and pulls her away to the car....leaving ranbir to think of what an idiotic thing he did....kanya turns looks and finds ranbirs face deformed from regret and says nothing the whole way home....they drop riya and kanya at kanyas house and head to the nandas house......

hope u guyz like it so far
ill continue l8r
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Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago

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aanyakunat

@aanyakunat

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

nice story... 😊 u write well...

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Raina

@rainshine_11

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#14

Ri:aunty ...aap mane gi nahi aaj toh jij ne kanya ka haat pakad liye
K:shut up!
P:are is mein sharma ne ki kya baat hai....tumari shaadi hone wali hai
Kanya gets irritated and goes to her room.........Riya comes in
Ri:dekh yaar ...tumari shaadi hone wali hai...use jiko tu pyaar nahi karti...lekin agar woh tumara paati hai ...toh..kabhi na kabhi pyaar ho jaye ga
K:kya?! mein aur woh ghadha?! hargis nahi....mein esa soch bhi nahi sakti..aur pyaar se toh mera vishvas hi utar gaya hai.....is liye ab toh mein sirf dusaro ki khushiyo ke liye jiyu gi
Ri:kyun?!....esa kya hua?!
k:uhhh.....esi koi baat nahi mein toh mazak kar rahi thi....
Ri:ok...vase ab mein chalti hun...kal mom ke saat bahar jaana hai..bye
K:bye
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Next day
Kanya gets up early and goes to painting club to relieve stress....which is the same building where swimming...sports..and other extra curriculars occur...Kanya is painting when she runs out of the color lime...so she heads to the floor below....where the sports are held to get to the storeroom with all the colors..(she has her hair in a pony tail..t-shirt w/rolled up sleeves and and rolled up sweat pants)...she has a can with water in it and twirling it w/ a pintbrush and walking down the hall to the stairs because it was much closer....

MEANWHILE.......
ayaan phones ranbir and asks him to pick him up from playing tennis....as for ranbir and him have to get to nanda house by 2pm as for the engagemnt is at evening.....so he came and was heading upwards.....

Ranbir gets out of the elevator and kanya is on the same floor.Ranbir is walking looking left and right while kanya is looking down at her paintbrush and it results to kanya and ranbir bumping.....ranbir gets a few small wet patches on his coat....and kanya looks up
K:omg...im so sry(kanya says trying to help him out)
R:hehhhhhhhh....dont touch me....mein tumare gande haat mere upar nahi chaata
K:excuse me....ek toh tum aandhe ki tara chalte ho aur upar se-
R:kya..kya?!what?! tumne mujhe aandha kaha?
K:andhe ko aandha nahi kahu gi toh behara kahun....
R:ehh u mind your lanuage...varna..
K:varna kya...huh....kya karlo ge...
R:ehh just shut up..mujhe tumare siva bhi bohot kam hai......timepass..
Kanya gets really mad and with the can of water shes holding ...she pours it alldown on his head...and when he clears his eyes shes walking away....
R:ehhh........tumhe toh shaam ko dekh lu ga...pehle toh yeh ayaan kaha hai
he walks the oppisite direction to where he can find ayan ......with his dripping wet clothes.......

When kanya arrives home...riya and everyone os waiting for her....
An:kaha thi tum beta? sab tik toh hai na?
K:yea dad...mein toh sirf painting karne gayi thi
Ri:come on you have to dress me up....pooja se pata chala ki tumhe sab type ke arts aate hai
K:hai lekin mein itna aacha nahi-
ST:ehh...chup re...riya yeh kanya kya mast kam karti hai...waha america mein bhi sab log iske paas aate the
Ri:tik hai..toh to ab tum hi mujhe tayar karo gi
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Its 5pm and they have to get to the hall before 7pm
so riya and kanya go to get ready...riya changes and kanya goes in and curls her hair...and does all her makeup and makes the set of bangles of diffrent matching colors and when done...riya looks spendid....btw shes wearing something like this

http://www.utsavsarees.com/pages/sarees-large.asp?icode=SGS1 216A
And then Kanya was watched by riya as she herself made her hair and her hair and...her dress looked somthing like

http://www.utsavsarees.com/pages/sarees-large.asp?icode=SGS1 202B
PLZ GO ON THESE WEBSITES AND ADORE THESE DRESSES I JUS LOVE THEM 😛
Everyone left and kanya said she and kanya will get there in half an hr.....as soon as everyone left kanya went outside and layed down on the sofa....
Ri:im really nervous
K:why? your marring someone you love so why?
Riya and kanya talked until they recieved a phone call on kanya's cell phone...RING RING....it was ranbir......kanya was still mad from the morning so she turned her phone off...and said it was noone....then they recieved a phone call at home..riya picked it up
Ri:hello
Harpal:come on where are you guyz...come on hurry ...were waiting..
Ri:ok were leaving
Riya tells kanya and they grab their heels and head out the door ...kanya drives and they reach the hall.....as they come in they go and stand by kanya and riya's family

IF N E 1 HAS MISTAKEN RIYA IS NOT SHANAYA...SHES IN HERE BUT RIYA IS SOMEONE ELSE....

Everyone comment and adores riya and kanya for their dresses and ho they look...and then ayaan comes pulling raanbir with him to riya and kanya....ayaan cant get his eyes off of them and when ranbir notices he adores kanyas beauty
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Then all the grown ups come.....
BD:oye putar tum log toh bade sonde lag rahe ho
Ri:thanz BD yeh sari pasand kanya ki hai
Reva:wow i just love ur dresses so modern
K:thanz(kanya fakely smiles....somehow she doesnt really like reva or aastha)
M:kisi ki nazar na lage(she plants black dots from her eye make up onto knya and riya)
P:ab sari formalities ho gayi ho toh chale
Kanya and riya hold hands as riya is nervous and kanya just doesnt want to do this and hope it ends as soon as possible..

SRY g2g ILL CONTINUE TOM.