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Posted: 17 years ago
The morning arrived and the birds chirped and kanya opened her eyes....
she was holding on tight to ranbir....and ranbir was doing the same....
Then she moved away...and waked ranbir up
Kanya took a bath and was getting dressed and putting her bead necklaces n earring(wears jeans n top)when ranbir came out wearing a suit like alwayz
kanya noticed.......
K:ranbir...tum humesha itne formal kyun ho?
R:matlab?
K:i mean...u should start wearing jeans and t-shirts that r more comfortable....cuz wen ur in suits n stuff u look strict...n u sudnt b----
R:wateva....
K:uhhh.wateva?....fine
In the living room.......
Arth:hey guyz....ok so v r goin shopping 2 day rite?
R:kanya will go.....i have an important meeting
BD:ruk putar....are tu kanya aur bache log ke saat sarur jaye ga
R:BD...lekin...
M:its ok ranbir...ill handle it...
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Ranbir and kanya at the front..
.Arth....slok...era at the back....
R:mein aur shopping...mera dimak karab ho gaya hai kya?
Era:chachu...aap ab aa hi rahe ho toh phir itna ghusa kyun?
K:yea ranbir.....y?
R:listn guyz...get this staright....i hate shopping......just like i used to hate kanya
K:but now u luv me rite?
R:love u ?....yea rite
Kanya lightly smacked him on the arm
R:jus kiddin.....but i will never llike shopping
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they arrive...
RING RING
Slok:wat ?...sach mey....wow!(turns the cell off)...arth, era , eva ko humari madad chahiye
arth+era:(winks at slok) chalo....
Kanya grabs a hold of era
K:kya hua?...sab tik toh hai naa
Arth:aap log shopping karo..ehsi bhi koi baat nahi...v will take care...
K:hua kya?
Era:kuch nahi...hum aate hai...thodi der mey..
THey leave....leaving kanya and ranbir....alone..
K:chalo hum bhi chalte hai
Ranbir grabs onto kanyas hand
R:i think i like shopping now...that ur alone w/ me
K:ranbir....eva ko agar kuch hua toh....
R:ehsa hota toh woh log humare saat chalte...humhe ehse jodd ke nahi jaa te
K:yea..maybe ur rite
R: i no im rite...im alwayz rite....
K:u no wat...this is the time i buy u some real clothes..that r comfortable...and make u look relax
R:not again
Kanya grabs ranbir n pulls him to the stores(they r in the mall😆duh?!)
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ON the other side slok, era , arth meet ira n eva
they are just outside the mall, whisper in eachothers ears n walk back in...
Kanya takes Ranbir into a shop....n picks clothes looking at him making faces
and deciding whether it wud b the right one.....
.........WHILE..............all this is happening ..someone is filming them...
someone is taking them on tape......WHO?
Ranbir trys on each pair giving by kanya one after the other...
K:yea.....no.....ok.....ewww........wow.......
Ranbir gets himself some tight tshirts....some jerseys....some shirts......n jeans....n more...
They are heading out when they find a cafe....
they get themselves a milkshake.....a large one.....n drink out of one..but of course w/ 2 straws...awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww......
they stare deep into eachothers eyes.....finding the love for them from the other.........when
K:(looks around)
R:kya hua?
K:mujhe ehsa lagta hai ke koi humhe dekh raha hai
R:of course people go by n glance
K:no ranbir i mean keeping an eye on us..
R:kanya(makes her lok at him) its ok....come lets go home.....
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They go outside but the car is parked far away cuz it was a buzy day...n lots of people came.....n there was no driver......
Ranbir and Kanya are walking n its windy....n the wind makes kanyas hair blow....n she tries to move it back but it keeps coming back.....
Ranbir sees this n grabs her bags...letting her tie her hair up....
And then she goes back for her bags when their hands touch...and they stare...
until kanya looks around....
K:i seeriously think sum1 is keeping an eye on us....
r:kanya...woh sab choddo....acha tumhe yaad hai shaadi ki shopping ke liye gaye the tab bhi ehsa hi pawan(wind) tha aur tumare bal uud ne lage aur maine tumari bags pakad li thi....
K:aur phir humare(wraps her hands around his arm...n reat her hand on his shoulder...keeping on walking) haat chuye(touch)the
R:aur phir tumari saheli....nahi nahi..meri saali
K:bich mein aagayi
............they keep on talking(btw this shopping incident of their hands touching has happened b4 on pg 3 pt6 )..........................
They arrive home...and soon after the kids arrive w/ ira
K:tum log kaha se aarahe ho?
Ira:hum......bahar se
K:han lekin-
M:wow ranbir....
Ranbr arrives w/ his new bought pair of jeans n shirt......n he looked HOT!!!
Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
lol soo cute! 😳 especially them remembering everything from before..continue soon 😃
Edited by punjabi.princes - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
it was very nice.
it was great the way ranbir nanda remembers about their shopping inthe mall.

it was cute. kanya has great taste in clothes.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great parts 👏

pls cont. sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
aw so sweet.... pls do contine....
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Posted: 17 years ago
aww that was cuuute!
but hmmm ...mysterious...i wonder who's filming them....
awww i wish to see ranbir in a tight tee n jeans in the original serial now...haaaaailaa 😳..thanks rainshine!...as alwayz do update swn!
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Posted: 17 years ago
aww that was really.. cute.
continue soon.
really..
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Posted: 17 years ago
comment for the ones who commented
thanz 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Era:omg chachu....that looks so gud on you!
Eva:(whispers)i liked the blue one better
Slok:(whispers)shut up
.........Lunch..................
Everyone is eating and talking...
and Ranbir is messing w/ kanya..
.and something happens and she runs to the bathroom...
and comes back sweating.......feels uneasy....
BD:kya hua putar...tu tik toh hai naa?
K:ha...bas thoda.....shayad khane mey kuch aagaya ho
Kanya tries eating n soon she has to run to the bathroom again...
M:(thinking)kahi toh yeh.....(talking)Kanya shayad pregnent bhi ho sakti hai..
Ranbir had food on his spoon on the way to his mouth when it stpped and he looked at malika with his mouth wide open.....
And rewa and aastha bumped their heads like they were knocked out 😆
Riya:mein dekh ke aati hun
Riya went to the bathroom and waited outside....soon kanya came out....
Ri:kanya yeh log tumari pregnant hone ki baat kar rahe hai...
K:WWHHHAAATTT???!!!!(btw...if u havent read from the begnning plz do to know that they do have a relation like that)
K:yeh sach nahi hai....matlab...
Ri:kuch hua hai kya?...
K:ha lekin-
Ri:ha?!
Kanya didnt know how to react so she ran to her room
Riya was going to follow her but ranbir showed up
R:mein dekhta hun
Ri:tik hai
Ranbir went to her
R:kanya...tum tik toh ho naa
K:ha lekin-(she was NOT crying jus frustrated n felt uneasy)
Malika came in
M:kanya mujhe lagta hai ki tumko doctor ko bata dena chahiye
K:ha mummy-ji mein aaj riya ke saat jao gi
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AT THE DOCTOR
he got his files n reports...
Doc;nope u just had food poisoning probably from something that u ate...
but from ur pregnancy reports the result was negetive and i have to talk about that with u ....
Riya, Kanya, and the doctor had a talk
K:WHAT?!
Riya calms her down...
Doc:im sry that what the reports say....but plz come for daily checkups ill c what chances there are
Kanya and Riya walked out and kanya haad tears in her eyes...
K:riya tumhe meri kasam tum kisi ko bhi kuch nahi kaho gi
Ri:lekin ranbir?
K:no one....i tell them when time comes
Ri:ok...lets go home now...

Ranbir wasnt happy or sad that kanya wasnt pregnant but he was just not ready ....he thought...😕
............................................................ .
The next day was nikils wedding....
he had moved out since his family had showed up from Gujarat
and tomorrow was the day
Kanya was showed to be happy in front of everyone but something was wrong....
. ............................................................ .
The next day arrived and Riya was in kanyas room doin her sari
cuz they were all s'pose to wear the sarees the gujarati way....
SO riya was showing her how to wear it when ayaan called her and she had to go....
Kanya kept trying it wudnt wrk...she got it all except the patli...down by the waist( i guess u wont understand it unless u no bout gujarati sarees😕

SO ranbir saw this and walked up to her and did it for her....she was amazed
K:how did u .....u no this...???
R:come on i saw riya do it a billion times n i got it but u didnt?
Kanya turned around and making sure everything was right when ranbir put his hand on her bare waist and moved it up to her stomach.....and she turned around
staring at him and the luv in his eyes but then sometime caught her and she remebered and moved her eyes off him.....ranbir thought she was shy and pulled her chin up and they had a long passionate KISS!!!awwwwwwwwww....... 😳
they broke free...and stared while slowly catchin their breath...
there was a knock and era came in ...
Era:chalo sab intasar kar rahe hai
Ranbir and kanya moved to the door when
Era:chachu um....plz go n wash ur face..
R:y? wat happened
Ranbir looked in the mirror and so did kanya....
They noticed ranbir had lipstick on his face
((((((THERE WAS A FLASH))))))))))
Ranbir and kanya looked around....
Era giggles and grabbed kanyas hand and took her away...
Ranbir wondered if there was a flash...what had happened...but then he just smiled sweetly of how stupid he wud have looked if era din stop him....lolz...
😆

Edited by rainshine_11 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
me first yaaaay... love it but i wanna know whats the news that she doesn't want everyone to know.. i love the story pls continue sooon .. can't wait to read the next part..
Edited by dilkeroshni - 17 years ago

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