Do Jism,Ek Jaan!- Very Imp Note on pg22! - Page 14

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Posted: 17 years ago

😉Hey guys..!!Sorry for the late update..!But u wouldn't be dissapointed because this is a very long part...This part has fun,comedy,romance and.....??..(anything u want)..
I hope u all enjoy this part..I will try to post the next part as soon as possible
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RECAP--- 1 month leap!!Padma knows about AR...Shashank-Padma married..Sapna-Amit married..Shubhanker-Kirti married...Sapna gone for her honeymoon..

Riddhima got up from her sleep thinking about the previous night with Armaan..The previous day was Valentine's day...She thought about Armaan and how much he loves her..She looked lovingly at the beautiful ring in her hand given by Armaan...She thought that she is the happiest person in the world to have someone in her life who loves her so much..As the days passed Armaan's love for Riddhima kept increasing and Riddhima's love for Armaan also increased..!
JUST then her phone rang!!
Riddhima looked at the caller's name and smiled..
Riddhima "hello!"
Armaan "hi jaan!..meri yaad aa rahi thi?"
Riddhima "hmmmm....nahi,apne dudwaale ki yaad aa rahi thi"
Armaan "kya?...mujh jaise handsome ladke ko chod kar tum apne dudwaale ko yaad kar rahi ho?"
Riddhima "..offo...tum hi to mere dudwaale ho..!"
Armaan "matlab?"
Riddhima "dekho...subah-subah logo ko unka dudwaala doorbell bajake uthata hai par mujhe tum mujhe mobile phone ring karke uthate ho...to huye na tum mere dudwaale??"
Armaan "hmmmmmmmmm.........baat to sahi hai...at least tumhe har roz uthane ka to naseeb hai mere paas"
Riddhima "aur batao..kyun phone kiya?"
Armaan "tumse baat karne ke liye bhi vajah chahiye hoti hai ka?....bas dil kar raha tha to tumhe phone kar liya "
Riddhima "oh..! to tumhara dil kar raha tha.."
FROM back- Anjali "Ridz,apne loverboy se baat karna band karo aur Sanjivani ke liye taiyaar ho"
Riddhima "ji di...bas taiyaar hone hi jaa rahi thi"
Riddhima "Armaan....phone rakho!"
Armaan "nahi...mujhe tumse baat karni hai"
Riddhima "Armaan...tum khud bhi jaake taiyaar ho aur mujhe bhi taiyaar hone do...BYE" (she cuts the phone)

Armaan "Ri.....offo.! ab to taiyaar hona hi padega aakhir meri jaan ne order jo diya hai"

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All get ready and go to Sanjivani but first Armaan used to pick Atul and Anjali & Riddhima came together but these days Anjali goes to pick Atul and Armaan goes to pick His Love of life,Riddhima..!

Locker room--

Armaan & Riddhima were in the changing room doing romance before duty..!
Riddhima "Armaan ..jaane do"
Armaan "na."(kissing her neck)
Riddhima "Armaan gudgudi ho rahi hai"(laughing & blushing)
Armaan "main nahi chodunga"
From outside a Voice "hi!!...yahan koi hai?"
Riddhima "Armaan...shit...ab....tum jao main yahin wait karungi"
Armaan nodds and goes outside..!

Outside --
Armaan goes out and sees Sapna dressed in a sari with sindoor in her maang and mangalsutra in her neck..
On seeing her Armaan started imagining Riddhima in a sari with sindoor & mangalsutra..He smiled..
Sapna "aise kyun has rahe ho?...Aur baaki sab kahan hai?...Maine Anjali se baat ki to usne kaha ki Riddhima Sanjivani mein hi hai...kahan hai wo?"
Armaan "a...wo....actually...jaan...i mean Riddhima....wo..."
Sapna "hmmm....Kahan hai wo?"
Armaan stood there smiling,blushing and looking embrassed at the ground..

Riddhima was confused that what was happening outside so she rushed outside and she was shocked to see Armaan & Sapna staring at her..
Riddhima "Sapna...tu...hi!(hugs her)"
Sapna "hi!...aur waise tu aur Armaan andar kya kar rahe the?..hmmm"(She smiled suspiciously and looked at them with a raised eyebrow)
Armaan "wo....humm..."
Riddhima (trying to change the topic) "t...tera honeymoon kaisa raha?"
Sapna "hmm...bahut accha ..bahut mazza aaya"
Riddhima "Gud..!"

Anjali & Atul enter the locker room chatting about some Plants(he...he)..!
Anjali "hey!! Sapna...its gud to see u back"
Atul "kaisi ho Sapna?"
Sapna "ekdam theek "

ANNOUNCEMENT---"Saare interns abhi Dr.Keerti ko report kare!!!"

Atul "chalo Hitler ka bulawa aaya hai"
Sapna "Atul...tum ekdam nahi badle"
Armaan & Riddhima were walking slowly talking to each other while Anjali & Atul also moved together...

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With DR.Keerti---

Keerti "dr.Armaan and Dr.Riddhima in the ICU(Armaan & Riddhima smiled)..Dr.Atul & Dr.Anjali in the general ward and Dr.Sapna u will assist me in an important case today"
Keerti "now back to work"
All "Yess mamm"

ALL leave for their duties..!

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Armaan was checking his patient but more of his attention was in Riddhima who was standing at the side and checking her patient...
patient "dr...dr.."(the patient was a boy of 15yrs)
Armaan "h...haan boliye!"
Patient "Aap mera check up karne aaye ho ya us dr. ko ghurne?"
Armaan "dono....i mean tumhara check up karne"

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After the duties--Locker room

Armaan "hey.! jaan mujhe tumhe aaj kahin le jaana hai"
Riddhima "par..Armaan hum kal hi to bahar gaye the"
Armaan "Jaan,main tumhe date pe nahi kahin aur le jaa raha hun"
Riddhima "kahan ?"
Armaan "tum chalo to sahi"
Riddhima "hmmmm...ok.."
Armaan "Great..thanks jaan"(kisses on her cheek and she blushed)

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In the car--

Riddhima "Armaan hum jaa kahan rahe hai?"
Armaan "that's a surprise ..Jaan"
Riddhima "batao naa"
Armaan "lo...hum pahuch gaye"

They both come out of the car and Riddhima sees a huge white bunglow..

Riddhima "Armaan,ye hum kahan hai?"
Armaan "Jaan,tum apne future sasural mein aayi ho"
Riddhima(blushed) "matlab..ye tumhara ghar hai"
Armaan "hmm..aur tum mere gharwalo se bhi mil lena"
Riddhima "par Armaan tum unse kya kahoge ki main kaun hun?"
Armaan "main kahunga ki ye Meri Jaan hai"
Riddhima "Armaan..."
Armaan "offo..main un sabko pehle hi bata chuka hun ki main apni ek Friend ko dinner pe laa raha hun"
Riddhima "oh..ok!"

They both enter....!
It was a very big house..their was a stairs which led to the first floor and their was a huge sitting room in the front..
Riddhima was looking at the house and Armaan was looking at her..

Voice "Armaan tu aa gaya"
Armaan "ji Bhabhi....isse miliye ye meri dost Riddhima hai"(remember i named Armaan's bhabhi as Tanvi)
Tanvi "oh..to ye hai Riddhima "(looks at Armaan and then at Riddhima and nodds her head as if she has understood everything)
Riddhima "Namaste"
Tanvi "Namaste...Andar aao Riddhima "

Then Riddhima meets Armaan's brother Swapnil,Armaan's mother,Armaan's sister Shifali and Aditya(Tanvi & Swapnil's son,about 6yrs old)...Armaan's father was not there..

Riddhima due to her nature gets very friendly with Aditya & Shifali who enjoyed her company as much as she did..Everybody started liking Riddhima specially Armaan's mother...

Armaan's Mum "Armaan ,jao Riddhima ko ghar dikha do"
Armaan "ji mom"
Armaan & Riddhima leave ...Armaan shows Riddhima all the rooms..Then they go to Armaan's room...

Armaan "Aur jaan,ye hai mera room jo jald hi hamara room ho jayega"
Riddhima blushed....
Armaan "Oye Hoye!! aapka is tarah shramana to hamari jaan lelega"

Shifali "bhaiya...Riddhima aap log neeche aa jayiye ..khana taiyar hai"
Armaan "chalo"

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Dinner--

Everybody was busy eating and nobody noticed that Armaan has held Riddhima's right hand under he table bcoz of which Riddhima was trying her best to get her hand out of his grip and was eating with her left hand...
Just then Aditya's spoon fell down and he bend to take it up and saw that Armaan was holding Riddhima's hand...
Aditya "Chachu aap ne Aunti ka haath kyun pakda hai?"
At this Armaan & Riddhima were shocked..Riddhima was eating her food and her food was stuck in her neck..
Riddhima "*cough**cough**cough**cough*"
Armaan quickly took the glass of water and gave it to Riddhima..She drank it..

They persumed eating and after the dinner--
Riddhima "main chalti hun Aunti"
Armaan's mum "accha beta ..aati rehna"
Aditya "Aunti aap mat jao naa"
Riddhima bent down and gave him a kiss on his cheek..
Riddhima "Abhi to mujhe jaana hoga..But main phir zaroor aaungi"
Aditya "Promise"
Riddhima "Promise"
Armaan's mum "Armaan..Riddhima ko chod aao"
Armaan "ji mom"

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Armaan dropped Riddhima home and went back to his house..He was in his room thinking about Riddhima...
Armaan's mum enters "Beta"
Armaan "yes mom"
Armaan's mum "tujhe Riddhima bahut pasand hai naa"
Armaan "wo...mom.."
Armaan's mum "haan ya naa"
Armaan "wo..."
Armaan's mum "to matlab nahi pasand hai!"
Armaan "nahi nahi..maine aisa kab kaha"
Armaan's mum "matlab pasand hai! &n bsp; &n bsp; &n bsp;
Armaan blushed & nodds her head...
Armaan's mum "Mujhe to pehle hi pata tha bas sure karna tha"
Armaan "par aap ko kaise pata"
Armaan's mum "tu ne mujhe se ye kaha tha ki tujhe teri jeevan sathi mil gayi hai..aur mujhse hamara Pushtani kada liya tha...Maine vo kada Riddhima ke haath mein dekh liya tha"
Armaan "Oh!!"
Armaan's mum "Pehli baar mujhe teri kisi choice pe garv hai"
Armaan smiled...
Armaan's mum "Ab jaake so jaa"
Armaan "yes Mom"

Armaan's mum
leaves....

Armaan calls Riddhima ...
Riddhima "Armaan..is time pe kyun phone kiya?...i hope koi important kaam ho kyunki main bahut accha sapna dekh rahi thi"
Armaan "Tum ye news sunogi to sabkuch bhul jaogi"
Riddhima "Aisa kya hai?"
Armaan "Mom ko hamare mein sab pata chal gaya and she is very happy"
Riddhima "ok"(reacted as if nothing has happened)
Armaan was shocked that after listening to such a news Riddhima wasn't excited...Riddhima realised what Armaan has said and jumped on her bed..
Riddhima "what?..Aunti ko sab pata chal gaya?"
Armaan "haan aur unhe tum bahut pasand ho"
Riddhima blushed...."ab main rakhti hun..."
Armaan "ok>..Bye Jaan"

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Edited by *riddhima* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow ridz finally u hv updatd nd gv us vryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy vryyyyyyyyyyyy lng prt u hv covrd it lng prt ke liye lng reply to mangta hai...........so lts strt
wow ridz wht cn i sy it ws rckng,awesom,amazng,superb yaar toooooo good i lvd it all only fr ARlvd it soooooooo mch their romance in chngng room nd caught by sapna it ws toooooo good nd ar family so sweet of thm thy like ridz nd ye hamara room wow i ws also blushng sch a sweatheart its grt............cont soom luv u soooooooo mch...........
yachna
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey amazing sweety
plz continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
AWWWWW
dat was sooo cute
nce 2 kno dat most
ppl no bout ar
really nce
updte soon
👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwww first thanx 4 uploading. second that was fab 👏 . loved each and every bit of it. 😃 hope u updated the next part ASAP.
Love Heena 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
awww...ur ff is sooo cute!!
n finally ridz is accepted by her sasuma!! lol!

do cont. soon!!
lukng 4ward 2 read ur nex par!!


Marisha 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
owesome part!!..continue soon..! 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
it is just toooooooooooooooooo cute wow ridz met armi's parents and family wowww i luved it ....

-Pari 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
heey nice part pls continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Aww cute part!!
Hehee, aditya caught them!!
And woow, His mom knows about them now.
Yayyy!!
Do continue soon!

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