love comes only once (ff), Ch. 9, Pg 55 - Page 11

Originally posted by: Nisha Kishor

hey...very good! 👏 👏...I really enjoyed reading it..do cont..and thanks for the PM! 😃

tnk u sooo much fer d lovely comment Nisha....really app. it!!😉

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: me_coolgul69

hey tht was gr8 plz continue soon
luv ur ff
ishiqa

tnx ishiqa fer such a sweet comment!!😉

Mia.

Originally posted by: mahi4u

hey
ur soooo gud u discribe da ff so nicely yaar it was not at all borin luv the way u discribe things.... keep up n plzzzzzzzzzzzzz
cont super fast!!!!!! 😉 😉 😉
luv ya n tak care
mahru

Tnx soooo much mahru (dats a lovely name bdw), dats a wonderful comment!! m glad u like my description, hope my penchant fer deets didn't get too tedious!!!😉

will cont quickly,

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: dillmillgayee1

hi.........this is not boring part at all...........this is most interesting ff i read...........ur writing skills are superb..................plz continue soon

tnk u sooo much for such a sweet comment, m really glad u find it interestin lol!!!😉😉

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: if.addict

first , soo sorry mia for late reply.
very well writtn part .
and its not boring sweety .it was nice .

armaan to gya , abhi to ridhima nahi pahunchi whan , jab aayegi uska kay hoga .

once again ,
very sweet part , loved the bonding btwn ridz and anjie .

kehan

tnx kehan, verrry glad u didn't find it boring!!!😆😆

nd yeah....armaan to seriously gaya....he's gonna have a very tough time ahead fightin his feelings....😆

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: rhea26

tanxx pixie 4 dat gr8 part..
it was not borin at all..
gr8 wrk..cont son

tnx fer d lovely comment rhea, really app. it!!😉

luv Mia.

@ yupi
@ diksh,

tnx guys fer d lovely comment!!! 😉

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: *Armaan*

So sorry for the late reply..but was too busy to read..sorry! no prob. yaar kajal.... Now here is what I thought of itL:

It was not a boring part at all...I just loved the detail.aww, tnx sooo much,😳 😳 ws really scared u guys wud find it borin!!! Especially how you describe the traffic and how you portrayed Anjali as such a Mindblowing character. She is sweet..like in the actual DMG nowadays..wow it was super sweet. I wanted angie ridz to have an awesum rapport, glad i ws able to put dat across.And I also liked how you described Sapna's past..of ADITYA MALIK ..by the ending it seemed as though it was Armaan who was her past...or maybe he was just related to her past somehow...i like the second idea better..lol.even I like d second option better, bt u'll hav to wait to find out if its romantic or not!!!😉 😉 I have one question, just a small misunderstanding i believe I had:
So Sapna is in the hospital to meet her friend Aditi who is teasing her of staring at Dr.Rajiv, but he was just in the doorway at the moment right? And then she began thinking about her past of her ex and how she couldn't ever be interested in a guy for a while...just was a bit confused because Aditi and Aditya were so close to each other...the spelling. Please correct me if I have any errors...thanks. nope sweety, no errors!! you got dat abso right.....man, never thght abt d closeness of der spellin nd d confusion it cud insinuate....i'll def keep dis in mind!!!
Also liked how you described Ridhima's thoughts of Armi and all. How she had only felt the intesity with him. i've only concentrated on her dreaminess by nw....wait till she becomes a go getter....ar better strap on his seat belt!!!😆😆

My fav part was when Armaan almost yelled/or did yell at Atul...it was so funny the way I was imagining it..and like his style too...a convertible...haha...

loved the almost yelled bit myself!! 😆😆

okay i think i have included all my thoughts! Continue soon was the only thing I forget to mention!!! Will do

love,
Kajal 😊

tnk u soooooo much kajal for such a lovely detailed comment.....made my day!!!

luv Mia.

Hey Mia…I loved the change.Now its perfect sweety.and why do u say its boring.It so grippin.
U kno what I loved…the way ur shaping Sap's character.
Hey I loved the Pun…"denial is soo pass dese days... bold is in" So its is.
😊 👍🏼
Customising One ....hehehh 😆 😆 😆 That was good..well, in the show we need to customise Ridzee. 😉

U made angie a nervous wreck, nice to c that quite an opposite from the show & Ridzee calm…Good for a change. 😛

Armaan... she said the name softly, testing its weight on her lips, feeling the perfect ease with which the name just rolled of her, 'like it was the most natural thing in the world for her to say it."
Gottcha Mia, that was really good…considering how badly she needs some diction classes…and I particularly don't like when she Rolls her tongue when calling ARMAAN.

Suld have sworn she heard the bells tinkling
Like Muskaan sez.."Ghanta baj raha hai"
😉

Mia enjoyed reading every bit of it....now waiting about the cliffhanger...hmmm now how does Armaan Know Spaz...that was Aditya rt???

Ab Kya chakkar hai.... 😛
Hey u did really good by mentining that Armaan has a convertible...shows his affluence.

Keep it up babes.

Ash.

Originally posted by: pixiecuty

tnk u soooooo much kajal for such a lovely detailed comment.....made my day!!!

luv Mia.

hey mia, no it was so good and glad u liked my comments! Omg I wonder what will happen when she will become a go getter, now I cant wait!! Do continue soon and dont forget to PM!!

Kajal 😛