love comes only once (ff), Ch. 9, Pg 55 - Page 10

hey...very good! 👏 👏...I really enjoyed reading it..do cont..and thanks for the PM! 😃

hey tht was gr8 plz continue soon
luv ur ff
ishiqa

hey
ur soooo gud u discribe da ff so nicely yaar it was not at all borin luv the way u discribe things.... keep up n plzzzzzzzzzzzzz
cont super fast!!!!!! 😉 😉 😉
luv ya n tak care
mahru

hi.........this is not boring part at all...........this is most interesting ff i read...........ur writing skills are superb..................plz continue soon

tanxx pixie 4 dat gr8 part..
it was not borin at all..
gr8 wrk..cont son

Originally posted by: maha_elahi202

really cool part yaar really liked it plz updated soon

tnx fer d lovely comment maha...😉

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: ifrahnaqash

That was really an awesome part, Mia!! n the way you laid emphasis on each character's emotions was just superb! really enjoyed reading it!
Btw, i'm really sorry for being so late! Had some assignments to finish!

tnx ya....wanted to get across every characters feelings!!!

glad u liked it.....nd no prob ya, better late dan never!!!😆😆😆

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: Durga A.

I just read your ff right now Mia and I must say it is FABULOUS!!! The intense detail you put in your ff is like no other. It makes me feel as if this was written on a true story. Like it actually happend to someone before. I must say Mia you are doing a wonderful job in your first ff. Keep up the good work.

Love,

Durga

tnk u sooo much durga!!!😳😳

i'm a detail freak, dats why my ch r sooo long!!😆😆 You know i never mean to write so much bt i just can't seem to summarise it effectively!!!

m so glad u liked it, nd d continuity is wat i've bin striving for.....😉

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: jyoti1408

Hey......it was really good...u really describe things really well.......plz cont soon

will do jyoti....😉😉

tnx fer d lovely comment!!

luv Mia.

So sorry for the late reply..but was too busy to read..sorry! Now here is what I thought of itL:

It was not a boring part at all...I just loved the detail. Especially how you describe the traffic and how you portrayed Anjali as such a Mindblowing character. She is sweet..like in the actual DMG nowadays..wow it was super sweet.
And I also liked how you described Sapna's past..of ADITYA MALIK ..by the ending it seemed as though it was Armaan who was her past...or maybe he was just related to her past somehow...i like the second idea better..lol. I have one question, just a small misunderstanding i believe I had:
So Sapna is in the hospital to meet her friend Aditi who is teasing her of staring at Dr.Rajiv, but he was just in the doorway at the moment right? And then she began thinking about her past of her ex and how she couldn't ever be interested in a guy for a while...just was a bit confused because Aditi and Aditya were so close to each other...the spelling. Please correct me if I have any errors...thanks.
Also liked how you described Ridhima's thoughts of Armi and all. How she had only felt the intesity with him.

My fav part was when Armaan almost yelled/or did yell at Atul...it was so funny the way I was imagining it..and like his style too... a convertible...haha...

okay i think i have included all my thoughts! Continue soon was the only thing I forget to mention!!!

love,
Kajal 😊