love comes only once (ff), Ch. 9, Pg 55 - Page 44

WOW, Mia! You have a natural flair for writing... 😳 And I love your use of vocabulary, gives me practice for the SATs too 😛 Atul is so different from real Atul 😆 😆 Like Naina said.. Bindaaaasss!

Can't wait for more!

~Zainab

mia u finally updated.i missed u sooooooooooooooooooooo much.this part was outstanding.it was superb yaar
continue soon

heyy mia.......just read ur ff.must say itssssssssss veryyyyy veryyyyyyy cute n sweet........all d characters r so much different from d dmg ones.....n atul wid his wiity dialoges r just tooooo gooooooood...plzzzzzzzzzzzz plzzzzz update dnxt part sooon........ 😛

hey mia ur really talented..love ur style of writing.
hey y no updates?? really waiting to find out abt sapna....gr8 job

i dunno wer 2 start..i cme across yur FF tdy n i coudnt stop myself frm readin it all...
i felt like i was readin a book..book of love..book of life mixed wit a touch of fairyland!(my fav!)
i luv yur ritin..yur language..yur vocab mkez me go short on simple wordz..did u hve a thesaurus by your side did u under go a surgery n gt it all pinned dwn in yur brain?
really!!!
i luved it..u excell at voicin emotionz...
tis surely is 1 of d best FFz ive read..

My fav line in d entire FF..m never forgettin it ..
"Its the beginning of the end, end of me and beginnin of US" (though i like puttin it end of u n me)

I reaslised u last update in May...u koe its been a mnth already..dunn ya think itz time for 1..SERIOUSLY!
i can never put dwn a book if till i read d last word..soo pen dwn more thouts n readlity..as fast as yur mind n handz let u..n u HAVE 2 PM me!!
no excuses..its a MUST!


👏 ***"Applause"**

nijaL!!

P.S U r a lil off wit yur index..u mite wanna fix it..

Mia i was like bored and this was looking at this as it was my fav list!!

hey Mia 😊