LRL by reet(rn fic) updt by GAZAL on pg2 - Page 13

wowwwwwwwww.......damn good.....updatnext part sooon plz... 👏

Hi Reet,
this update is really rocking 👏 i really love the way Raj & Naina both are react on the situation in front of them it's too good . waiting for Naina's answer which is i guess everyone knows already but want to listen from Naina so do update fast with a very long part with full of RN magic what say??? 😳 😳
waiting for next update.
keep wrtting keep smilling
Namita.

P.S :-Hey why you think that no one is replaying you actually this day's exams are conducted so may this is the reason that some of your fans can't replay you . so don't even think to stop writting warna humse panga lena padega 😡 😡 😡 samjhi.

Originally posted by: vvdn

Hi Reet,
this update is really rocking 👏 i really love the way Raj & Naina both are react on the situation in front of them it's too good . waiting for Naina's answer which is i guess everyone knows already but want to listen from Naina so do update fast with a very long part with full of RN magic what say??? 😳 😳
waiting for next update.
keep wrtting keep smilling
Namita.

P.S :-Hey why you think that no one is replaying you actually this day's exams are conducted so may this is the reason that some of your fans can't replay you . so don't even think to stop writting warna humse panga lena padega 😡 😡 😡 samjhi.

thnx for liking her fic...................n dont worry i'm not stopping updt.............

2mmorrow updt will b done

guys updt will b done by 2mmorrow

hmmm... waitin for your update... love your ff.. 😊

GUYS THNX A LOT FOR UR RESPONSE TO DIS FF................

REET IS GLAD..........N ON HER BEHALF THNX AGAIN TO U ALL............

HERE IT GOES NJOY.......................

wait....before u say anything....i want to make something clear……..

watever be ur answer…….i will allwayz be ur friend…ur mentor…….ur rajveer sir………and..........…..ur love….

i will allwayz be derr……………….look naina….i cant tackle it anymore……yeh jaanna mere lie bohot jarury hogoya hai…..plz….speak up……dnt be silent...plz....


Naina………taking a deep breath….. comes close to him…he iz now facing back to her...as he is affraid of her answer.....…..

she holds hiz arms ….and whispers……..sab kuch kaheke batana jarury hai kya……..??
.....huum....??.......
leaves his hand asking it.......

aur agar haibhi.to aur thoda intejaar aapko karma hoga….avi is thappad ka hisab jo chukani hai apko………!!huh......

chaliye….andar chaliye….vukh nehi laga aapko..??...and..enters d house….leaving raj perplexed…….!!!


She did dis….caz she knew it……after waiting so long time…if he gets dat wad he allwayz wanted…he couldn't be able to control…himself….so as her…..and…shaliny can come to check anytime…wad r dey doing so long outside…….!!!!!!!!!!!!!!and dey will be in big trouble…

so its not d right time…

Raj unmindfully…walks in….wad does she mean…??


Coming inside…shaliny notices…her wound….and asks….wad happened….naina….

raj starts to say something...but naina carts him.......kuch nahi mam.....vo bas....

bas...u hav a a deep cut in ur elbow...in ur forehead...wats wrong....bas kya...???a doctors eye has caught her .....


Who actually mam….having a glance at rajveer(who is now confused....sirf sir pe to chot lagithi tab....hath me...???...!!!) she says…bike ka accident ho goya tha….

KEYA….?

Dey yells in a chorus.....

actually…it was raining heavily derr….and skid kar rahi thi tires….aur pichese ek truck aa raha tha…

aur bas…hona kya tha.....

mujhe meri tuti huyi sir aur bike ke sath chod goya…….

and dat s y I m late….says d last sentence….looking at rajveer…….

Wad…………..????yeh abtak kaha kiu nahi....????

Capt main to tab aapko batanahi bhul gayi……..capt abhimanyu ko pata chal goya hai…who is d traitor inside kma… ……shaliny says at d dining….

And who is it…………….naina n raj both yells simultaneously…den looks in each others face….is it co-incidence.....?nyaaa......its derr heart dat beats in same lingo.

Well….its none other dan….major nair………….shaliny announces.!!

Wad………..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!..........again simultaneously…….

I guessed it before…but got no proof actually…..is he sure……??
i mean…is he saying dis based on something doc…?? Raj asks….

Yes capt….!!.....actually he had fitted a microphone in his cabin….and from d conversation ...nair has made in phone…capt abhi has came to d conclusion...

Puji thik hi kahetithi…..muchhad…!!.......iske alava expect hi kya kia ja sakta hai….mujhve lagti thi….woh ph ka voice…mucchad ka hi tha.

Par waqt haathse itna buri tarah fisla…ke kuch prove hi na kar sake…….!!naina…mood has became sulky……..

Relax naina…..raj assures her..it was not ur fault…d time was….not supportve….enough..!!


Leave it…lets plan…wad to do now…..we hav to find out…who is nairs boss….he is not d one who is dealing all dese….

derr is a master mind….and nair is just serving him….dey r ones…who had framed navin……
I m sure of it……….!!!!!d clues r leading me too dis…raj looks thought full….hummm……

Now dis was enough for today….come on get up…..naina suddenly breaks d discussion….kaal subhe baat karte hai….is bareme…

ab chaliye…sabhi so jaiye…!!kal raat to jagke hi beet gayi….aj sone ka arrengements bhi karni hai…

Shaliny says….raj needs someone…to look after him at night….he has a light fever till now….


Is it ok mam?.roj raatko fever aana…?? ?i mean…

Actually cadet singh…raj is moving….he should have taken rest…
but…he is not listening to…dats y..d exsertion bringing d fever…aur shaamse bohot jyadfa tensed tha tumhare lie…


Naina..blushes feels uncomfortable..
naina says….mam…aap andar so jaiye….mai sir ke pas rahungi…emmm…I mean…I will take care of him…

No cadet singh….u had had enough last night…tonight…I will take care of him….

Raj remains silent…as he dint like shalinys decision……….he wanted to talk wid her personally..

Having a glance in his face…..naina…says…well..mam…u r our guest….i cant be so inhuman to u….
though u r a doctor…den also…u had taken care of sir…d whole day…and now I should take d responsibility….

dnt worry abt me mam…I had slept quite well bat d morning…I m fine mam….!!


Ok as u wish…!!!!!!!!par agar koi jarurat ho to bejhijhak bula lena….understanding…dey need some privacy…dey need to talk….shaliny agrees to naina and goes inside ..


Lemme set our sleeping arrangements…


And makes derr beds…herself …perpendicular to rajs…having d bonfire in between…
Shaliny is going to sleep inside….


After some time dey gathered at dining…to bid everybody goodnight…


Capt….please hav d medicines…shaliny…checks his pulse and pressure….stop taking pressure capt….

kiu baat nehi maante…?u r having a high bp captain….take care of him naina…turning face to naina…who is lookin worried…

yes mam I will..naina replies..and gives raj hiz medicines and water…

Cadet goodnight….hope everything turns out good tomorrow..winking at naina…she wishes gdnight to raj…..

Naina….after so many days…tonight relieved….takes a deep breath…and looks back to raj…

wat r u waiting for sir….sleep…dats an order sir….!!!!!!!!!!!

Wad……………..?

So now my cadet is giving me order…..emmmmm…………impressive…!!raj amused...

naina…chuckles…

And goes to wash room to freshen up herself….

In d meantime raj thinking…should he ask her once again or not …??

[ uuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhh…………….screwed man……….!!!!!!!!!!!!!......yeh aadmi sab cheezme itna smart hai…itna expert hai….itna bada officer hai…itna intelligent hai….peyar ke mamle ise ho keya jata hai yaar…??]

Wen naina…comes back to hall…she finds raj is not in his bed….and…says…ab keya ho gaya…..!!kaha gaye aap…sir….!!!


And as she suspected….standing at d verandah…wat sir…aap baat kiu nehi mante…

bahar kitna thand hai…barish horahi hai…ap iha keya kar rahe ho…chaliye andar chalke so jaiye….and turns back to enter d hall again…


Raj quickly holds her hand….and says…mujhe kya saza milegi us thappad ka….??

uhhh...!!so jaie......naina struggles to get rid him....

R : Pahele woh batao…fir mai andar jayunga…

N : Kiu…??achanak yeh sawal…

R : Ha……kiunki jabtak tum mujhe saja nehi dogi tabtak mere sawal k jabab nehi dogi….

N : Naina smiles…says…smart move…well…..apki saja hai jake so jaiye….!!!

R : dats not fare….Nah….mai yeh saza nehi manti…aj mujhe janna hai….sacchai…

naina comes closer to him…his breaths grew faster….

naina says….mil jayega jabab apko aj..avi jaiye aur jake so jaiye….and hits his forehead lightly…pagal…


R : Tumne banayi hai……

N : Accha…..to apko batein karna vi aata hai…ummmmm…impressive…

R : Wad do u mean by dat….?mujhe baat karma nehi aata…

N : Uuuhhhunn….nehi aata….islie to….itne din laga die woh bat kahene ke lie….

R : Accha…par tumhe pata nehi thi kya..?

N : Aapko pata nehi hai kya…?

And giving him no time she succeeds to get away …and slouches to her bed…

Huh………..!!!!!!!unsuccessful raj groans........saying raj goes to his one…..

And gazes at naina…..lying infront of him…though too near…though too far…who is lying closing her eyes…

Sir …so jaiye…mujhe baadme dekh lena….kahi vagi nehi ja rahi hu….!

Raj blushes and turns other side trying to sleep….but thinking…
she has said she will answer me tonight…but wen….she is sleeping…asking me too sleep…


Should I ask her….nahh….!!!!!!!!....

itna intejar kia hai…thoda aur sahi….and completely lost in d dayz thoughts….
he dozes off very soon….

Hiz sleep breaks wen he feels….somebody…covering him up…wid d blanket …

its naina…for him allwayz…!!!!


But dis is only one….whr is urs…..??raj asks her….


She doesnot reply…and wid his utter surprise…places herself next to him.

I m going to share it….may i......??

Rajs jaws left open……………wad………???he dumbstruck.....

so shocked to ans her…she is going to sleep wid me...!!!!!

Excuse me…..??....!!!!
may i..??


Aahhh…………!!!!!!!emmmmmmmmmmmm….well sure…please….

ahhhhhhhhh…and himself shifts a lil….to make d place comfortable to her..

OKKKK DONE.........................

awwwwwwwww...very cute especially theend...he got so nervous..hahahaaa

update next part soon plzzzzzzzzz... 😛 😛

superb again.....
I'll give more comments next time ok?

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