LRL by reet(rn fic) updt by GAZAL on pg2 - Page 14

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey HI,
what i want to say is just SUPERB ! 👏
update soon waiting to know what next???
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Posted: 17 years ago

hi
It was beautiful.
omg Raj he is really a daffar sry.
but could not stop myself from saying that.
Just hoping that since the confession has ended maybe everything will be fine between raj and naina.

waiting for ur update and a long one 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
updt will b on friday...........
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Posted: 17 years ago
update soon dear.. waiting.. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

thnk u to all d readers on behalf of reet...............njoy dis part............

So tell me…wat was ur question…repeat plz…naina…asks mischievously...

Raj feeling very happy……..on cloud 99………shivers at dis….and with hearts content …he takes deep breath....

he has already got d answer…whispers……….nahh…koi sawal nehi…..mujhe jabab mil goya hai……tum agar mujhse…..peyar nehi karte…..to aise bejhijhak…aise mujhpe varosa karke…is barsaat ke raat mere itne kareeb nehi aati…


Hummm…naina blushes….and closing her eyelids…as raj is gazing in her eyes……says…der aaye durust aaye…kames kem apko akal to aayi…


Hummm….bas sirf ekbaar sunna chahta hu…..tumhare muhse…plz….ab koi saitani nehi

Raj is lying facing naina….naina facing upward…closed eyes....grinning shyly....

raj fingures are entwined wid nainas…

naina blushes…and ….suddenly….turns to raj…..and sinks her face…in rajs chest….raj….surprises…and smiles…at her gesture…and almost whispers…

kiu sharma gayi…?? ? ? ?.........!!!

...mujhe to harwaqt kaheti raheti ho…ab meri smart princess ko kya ho goya….??

Naina…presses her head more at dis to raj……

she feelz like heaven…..hummmm…

Ab kahe vi do na naina….bolona….plz...

Aapne jaanse jyada peyar karti hu…itna vi nehi samajhte…firse mujhpe shaq mat karna…I love only u….

Raj embresses her at dis…and brings her close to him……

I love u too naina…

meri dunia sirf tum the naina….hamesha se…bohot intejaar karwawa tumne…

par aj lag raha jaise…bohot kam intejaar kiya hai…tumse yeh sunne ke lie mai kuch bhi kar sakta hu…….......................................

accha…….tumhe dar nehi lagta…mujhse….itne barsaat me …itne kareeb…..mere bahonme…darr nehi lagta….??

Uhhhhunn….naina…nods…mai aappe apne apse jyada varosa karti hu….


Itna bhi mat karo….mujhpar iska aasar kuch jyada ho goya hai….soch raha hu…kya mai tumhare varose ke kaabil khud ko rakh payunga…..??

tum….itne kareeb…..!!

Tumhe kisne kahe diya……mai tumhe aankh bandh karke so jane ke lie khahi…



thode gifts mai bhi deserve karti hu….naina…whispers….clunging to him….

continues after a pause…par isbaar sorry mat kahena….fir …fir ……..fir mai kavi aapse…tumse bat nehi karungi…


Nehi kahunga…kiu ki tumbhi chahte ho…isbaar....

mai tumhare aankhon me ashu nehi dekh sakta naina…aur agar vo ashu mere bajase ho.....tab to....he sighes......

tumhe khus rakhna chahta hu…….jo khushi tumhe navin de sakta tha….jo khusi tumse jindegine chin lia…usse kahi guna jyada…ke tumhe kabhi dard chu bhi na paye…….

itna peyar…itna khusi…ke tumhe kavi beete pal yaad bhi na aaye…mai navin ko begunah saabid karunga naina…
bas tum mujhpar varosa rakho….chahe uske lie kuch bhi kiu na karma pade


Naina…pushes him at dis…and …gazes in his eyes…and says confidently...in a calm voice….

listen sir….i want bhaiya proved to be innocent……but not at any cost….pahele yeh galti kar chuki hu…aur aapko khoke uski saja vugat chuki hu…..i dnt want to loose u again....

chahe…uske lie bhayia ka case solve nabhi huye…I will not repent... aap vi yeh baat kan kholke sun lijiye…

dobara wo beokufi mat karma….mujhe maut mat dena…..apke bina mai nehi jee payungi…mai khudko mar dungi…samjhe…..?

Wadaa…tumhari kasam…kabhi nehi…apne jaan se juda hoke kabhi koi jee sakta hai bhala…??raj assures her…

Naina blusses and plants a peak in hiz chest wher she has kept her lips..

Raj shivers nt phisically....but in contentment...

he can feel d warmth of her body….he can smell d fragrance of her stresses…d touch of her body…..she is mine….only mine….he lifted her face….holdin her chin….and said
tum bohot khubsurat ho....

naina lowers down her eyes....a red rose in her cheeks...she feels herself complete..in arms of her beloved

he rubs…his finger through her face..her forehead…her eyelids…her cheek…her…

chin..her nose…her red soft lips….rubbed with his…thumb….she can feel his love around her….his strong muscle…wide chest….d bare part revealed from...his white kurta...d smell of his skin...his intense love.

she can feel his adoring fingers on her face….rubbing it caressing it…and his body pressing hers…..
d intemate closeness made her aware of her womanity...she shivers......her breaths grew faster......

raj himself....hypnotized by her intimacy..........

Raj…bends on her face…and slowly…touched her lips…pressed her lips by his.....naina..responds…soon….she takes his lips in side …hers…and …he increased d vigour of d kiss….as if dey r exploring each others mouth...…...after a long time he released hers….and…lye beside her……and said….kya khati ho tum..?

kiu....?Naina…whisperd….keeping her head on his arm…facing him…keeping…one hand on his chest…sliping it …under his kurta…rubbing his chest…slowly…..softly….enjoying deeply his existence…..

Itna meetha kiu ho yaar…??.................??
waise dikhte ho to tikhi mirchi….


ahhh…..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...keya jamana…aagaoya hai….ab cadets apne seniors kitne bure tarahse pete rahe hai….nch….nch….nch...!!!!!

Accha…aur teachers jo apne studentko taste kar raha hai….usme…?woh….to najar nehi aaya…apko…kiu?

Hummmm…thik hai…thik hai…chalo ab so jao…bohot raat hogayi hai…aur tum sachme yehi sogi kya…subhe shaliny ne dekh lia to…

Aap ho na…subhe subhe utha dena…mai apne bed pe chali jayungi…ya fir avi chale jaun….tries to get up…but raj pulls her…and…keeps her…on hiz arm…and sayz…I think 1st one is better idea….

naina…laughs…so as raj

After some time…raj says…naina…so gayi…….??

...uhhun….naina rubbs her nose vertically on rajs shoulder…bolo…..

Abse mujhe raj kahena practice karo…akeleme mujhe raj sunna hai…sari jindegi sir kahogi kya…??.........avi bolo…

Naina…blushes…….and smiles…shyly

Uuuhunnn….apke ke dil luvane wali haasise mai nehi vulne wala…cal me raj….bolo…bolo…raj determind......

Naina…shyly whispers…rajveer…..emmmmm……….raj…and den again hides her face in his chest….

Aahhhh…!!!!!!!yeh huyi na baat….aurr mujhse shrmake mujhime chup gayi….?

Hummm…!!...sabse sabkuch sunke maine hamesha aapke sineme chup jati thi.....aur aj jab khushi aayi to apke paas hi aungi na...!!naina whispered....

hummm...raj...nudged her shoulder....adoringly...

.ab so jao…warna…kal tumhara tabiyaat fir kharab ho jayega…..naina....tried to be serious....!!

Hummm….muskil hain aj raat nind ana…!!

So jao…ab chup karo…mai saare jindegi rahenewali hu…kahin vagi ne ja rahihu….sobhi jao…ab…

Humm…raj closes hiz eyelids…embressing naina in one arm….

Shayed aj raj se jyada khus duniame koi nehi hai….aj dil var goya hai…uska….he is feeling so content dat takes no time to enter his dream world....

After some time both of dem dozes of…..lost in each others dream......


okkkkkkkkkk done.....................monday ko it will b long1..................


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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome very nice. 👏 aur ha main last time comment nahin kar paayi b/c main thodi busy thi but that part also very good. 😊

conti soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
tooooooooooooo good keep it up mind blowing mind blashing n keep write
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Posted: 17 years ago
intresting part
what a confession of love
too good
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Posted: 17 years ago
again superb update

plz update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
plz update the next part....jaldi karo kahan ho tum

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