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Posted: 17 years ago
hey,
i just read the FIC of yours its really nice
ok so accident lets see i think its shabd's ya...or mahi's or angad its just not kripas lol... šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜† i wonder tho..accident..... 😭 no im not scared of it..such turn are expecdeted in FF's..lol okay im going crazy..i reall;i liked the update it was really nicw..waiting eagerly for the next part..

sam.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

i read just now last 3 part awesome dear šŸ‘


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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

wow. cute part. cont soon.


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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: *~Kaynaat~*

i finished reading all the parts, i like ur FF!
cant wait till next part! 😃


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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: x hollister x

awww mahi and shabd are soo cuteee😳 and i think lakshyaaa is in love with kripaašŸ˜•


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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: chocolate p

hey,
i just read the FIC of yours its really nice
ok so accident lets see i think its shabd's ya...or mahi's or angad its just not kripas lol... šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜† i wonder tho..accident..... 😭 no im not scared of it..such turn are expecdeted in FF's..lol okay im going crazy..i reall;i liked the update it was really nicw..waiting eagerly for the next part..

sam.


thanks a lot😳 lets see what'll happen šŸ˜†
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Posted: 17 years ago
Note:hey guys, thanks a lot for the comments. Well i was planning an accident but then i though i shouldn't as it would get into a sad storyšŸ˜†.Therefore there is no accident mean no tears.😊

Part9:

Lakshya and Angad were in Angad red sport car heading toward Lakshya college. They both were chit chatting while driving and having fun. After a while, they finally reached a big four buildings of two floors white college. They both got out and went in.
L: bro are you sure she'll say yes?
A: well if she likes you then she'll say yes
L: yeah, I'm nervous yaar
A: don't be yaar
L: trying to
They both reached the canteen where all the girls stared at them once they entered. They just ignored them and went to sit at a table. They made themselves comfortable and looked around.
A: where is she?
L: I don't know, she should be here normally
A: ok, then just tell me once she comes
He laughed and got up to leave just then Lakshya caught his hand, he turned to face him who was looking at the door. Angad laughed and then looked at where he was looking and was shocked to see a petite figure standing there. She was wearing a short white skirt and orange turtleneck short top. We see her face it was none other than Kripa. Angad looked at Lakshya then at her shocked and not knowing what to do or say. Lakshya got up and stood by him.
L: here she comes
A(more surprise): what?
L: han, anyways let me go and tell her
Lakshya went to walked toward Kripa leaving shocked Angad behind. Lakshya went toward her which made Angad eyes get teary. Lakshya kept moving toward Kripa and once he reached her. He stood there, put his hand on his heart and stared at her.
L: I love you
Angad heart broke into million pieces, Kripa smiled and just from behind her we see KT coming out. She blushed lightly and went to him.
KT: I love you too
Hearing KT voice, Angad looked up and seeing Lakshya hugging KT tightly and Kripa smiling at them. Angad was even more shocked. Lakshya and KT apart, they both went to Angad.
A: Laksh??
L: bro, meet the love of my life Krishna Tulsi aka KT
A: huh... KT? oh nice to meet you KT(smiles)
KT: same here
They both shook hand and left leaving Angad still in shock but happy too. He looked up to see Kripa smiling at him, she winked at him then left. Angad ran behind her and once he caught her in an empty corridor he pushed her against the wall locking her between his body and the wall.
K: leave me
A: why?... why did you make me scare like this?
K: what?(confused)
A: you knew it that Lakshya loved KT and you made me come here, you pretended to be the girl he loved and made me almost get a heart attack
K: I didn't do anything, I didn't pretend to be his girlfriend you were the one who though this and for your kind information I'm not in his college. KT is my cousin, she told me that she wanted to confess Lakshya that she loved him and ask him if he would agree to come with her at valentine party so I came here
A: oh...
K: yeah, and Angad it's easy to tell others how to confess but hard to understand your own feelings
A: what do you mean?
K: do you still remember what you said to Lakshya?
Angad made a confused face and then remembered again the scene when he proposed her and she just left and got what she meant. He looked at her smiling which made her blush. He bent his lips towards his ears and whispered so you love me don't you?
Kripa just blushed and looked away. Angad got his answer and start caressing her waist, he kissed her moving from her shoulder to neck then cheek and was about to kiss her lips but before he could, she pushed him and ran away showing her tongue to him. He smiled mischievously and ran after her. They both kept on running and reached the beautiful beach which was right five minutes away by walk from the college. Angad finally caught her from the waist and picked her up then turned her around making her laugh. They both played a lot and a enjoyed each other company. At night, Angad and Kripa both were walking holding each other hands in the calm and peaceful beach. Angad hugged her from behind and put his head on her shoulder.
A: Kripa do you really love me?
K: hmm
A: really?
K: hmmm
A: ok then
He came in front of her and bent on his knees, he gave his hand to her and said Kripa, will you be my valentine?
Kripa blushed and slipped softly her hand into his which made him smile.
On the other hand, in London we se Shabd and Mahi in a shopping mall. Shabd was holding lots of bags while Mahi was checking some clothes and trying them. They were in a traditional clothes shop.
M: Shabd, is this suit nice?(showing a pink churidar kameez)
S: hmm nice, but i think the red one will suit you better
Mahi turned around and looked at what he was pointing and saw a short, sleevless and backless red dress. Mahi eyes got big as if she saw a ghost.
S: kiya houa?
M: no way, i'm not wearing these clothes at any cost
S: Mahi please atleast try it you'll look beautiful
M: no, never
Mahi made a face and left leaving a hopeless Shabd. Once they were done shopping, they both went to the beach and sat on a rock. Mahi rest her head on Shabd shoulder while he was resting his head on hers.
S: Mahi
M: hmmm
S: you know, in four days it'll be valentine
M: hmm, so what?
S: will you be my valentine
M(surprised): what?
She looked at him confused, Shabd stared at her and smiled.
S: yeah i know, you think of me like a friend but i love you. The day i saw you i can't stop myself from loving you. When i was in India, i met a girl named Kripa and trust me she was just like you the only once difference was that she was a modern girl who wears short clothes and has lots of attitude. But she loved someone else, i came here and trust me i was totaly heart-broken but then i met you and i felt like living again, i felt like that you're the right girl for me, Kripa was just a way to make me meet you. See, if she wouldn't have said she wanted to be friends, i would nevre lose hope and never come here so never meet you, but i'm very greatful to her because she brought me here
They both stared at each other, they were totaly lost in each other eyes. Mahi blushed and just hid her face while putting her head on his shoulder and he put his arm around her shoulder.
Hope you liked it!
Laiba😊
Edited by -Laiba- - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey loved the part
it was awesome.... šŸ‘

do continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey, loved the part. Very cute with AK, loved it how Angad got emotional thinking Lakshya loved Kripa. Loved how he proposed to her. It was very cute. Continue soon Take care 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
awww very sweet part!! I loved the a-k scenes and s-m scenes a lot!! 😳 šŸ˜›

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