-Childhood Love- A&K- last&V-day part p35 - Page 25

Originally posted by: x hollister x

awww amazinggg part.😳😳

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Originally posted by: xoxIqbalxox

Hey

Laiba aweesomee partt.. loved the corridor scence 😉 awwwiess the ending was soo cutee. Cont soon

Madiha<3

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Originally posted by: rima791

great part luved the LKT confession specially AK part too that was kinda like 2 in 1 stuff 😆 😆 😆 i swear i didn't say that 😆 anyways awesome moment between SM 😛 plz continue soon 👏

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Originally posted by: angullgrl91

wow. cute part. 😃

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Originally posted by: armaghan0

really cute and awsome loved it

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Originally posted by: newkidontheblok

such a romantic part i luvd it :)

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Originally posted by: chocolate p

awww..thanx hon for such a sweet update..
it was really beautiful...loved it...

sam.

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Special Valentine and Last Part:

Kripa and Angad were at the airport waiting. They were both flirting with each other but were looking every time if Shabd had come or not. After fifteen minutes he finally came accompanied by Mahi. Seeing her Angad and Kripa were totally shocked with their mouth wide open. Shabd laughed seeing them together, he put his arm around Mahi shoulder and came to them.

A: Shabd who is she?

S(giggle): Angad, meet Mahi my Kripa

Kripa and Mahi were shocked to see each other, they were both speechless. Angad and Shabd just talked and then they both left in Angad car. Once they reached Kripa home, everyone went there and made themselves comfortable in the living room. While everyone took of their shoes and sat comfortably on the sofa and on the television, Kripa went to bring coke, chips and popcorn for everyone. Once she come back, she put the tray on the table.

A: Shabd, yaar how did you meet Mahi? I mean its strange I never knew Kripa had a twin sis

S: neither me(giggle)

K: guys if you don't mind can I talk to Mahi alone please?

S&A: Sure we'll just go for a walk

They both left leaving Mahi and Kripa alone. Mahi was confused whereas Kripa just sat on the sofa desperate.

K: Mahi, where are you parents?

M(surprised): huh?

K: I mean you're here alone, don't your parents mind?

M: oh, well I don't know who they are. I'm an orphan Kripa (sad)

K: no you're not

M(stared at her): what?

K: yeah, since I'm born i have always though that I was alone I mean the only one child of my parents but I recently got to know that i had a sister but the fact that she was my twin... I didn't know

M: (shocked): what? you're my....my.... sister?

K: yeah, we're twins it's true that there are 7 persons who have the same face as yours but not in the same world as us so it couldn't be true that you're one of them. When I lived with mummy daddy, they used to show me some pictures of two new baby born girls who looked same and I always though it was someone else but it was us.

M:.....

K: one day, I asked mum and she said that I had a sister and she lived in London with uncle and anti but since they passed away they didn't have any news of you. When our parents went to London saying that it was for business but mum told me it was because of you. They wanted to take you here but they didn't find you

M(with tears): I have a family?

K: yes you do, i know you must feel miserable, I was the same when I got to now about it but Mahi shouldn't we just forget about the past and live in the present?

M: yeah Kripa, you're right(wipe her tears) it's just that I feel so happy but shocked to know that I'm not an orphan

Kripa smiled and went hugged her tightly. They were both very happy but shocked too. Kripa gave a miss call to Angad and told him to come back with Kripa mum. After disconnecting the phone she joined Mahi who was in the kitchen drinking water. Kripa stared at her from the bottom to the top and smiled.

M: what?

K: we both are twins but our fashion style isn't the same at all(giggle)

M(giggle): I like my traditional suit more than those short clothes

K: but I like my short clothes more than those traditional suit

They both laughed and started chit chatting about their life. When Kripa got to know that Mahi has never date a guy and Mahi got to know that Kripa has always been changing guys like tissues papers they were both shocked but laughed non-stop too. After sometime, the doorbell ran, Kripa went to open it and saw Angad, Shabd, Gayatry and Surya standing there. Kripa told them to come in and told them the whole situation. Gayatry and Surya had tears in their eyes, they went to hug their daughter Mahi tightly and shared each other pain and joy. Angad and Shabd were both very happy about it even though they were quit surprised by this story who seemed like so filmy. The tears kept falling and the smiles kept on appearing on the Sharma family face. Shabd had enough to watch this emotional scene and though to do something.

S: ok , now you guys stop crying it's quite annoying to see everyone caring today

Su: why? what is special today?

G: oho, it's valentines day Surya ji

Su: oh no, I totally forgot

A: i saw that (giggle)

K: anyways mum, me and Mahi are going for shopping as there is a party tonight at college. Everyone will be there and i want Mahi to be Shabd date so better go to get some new clothes

G: you always need a reason to do shopping(slapped her lightly on the cheek)

M: oh no, I hate shopping(made a face)

G: aw my daughter Mahi is better than Kripa because shopping is just using money

S: no way Kripa is better than Mahi because every girl should do shopping

S(surprised): what a liar Mahi, you're the one who made me hold all your fifteen bags when we went shopping before coming

Mahi made a face and showed her tongue, Gayatry understood that she said it just to get a compliment from her mother and laughed then Surya went to Mahi and hugged her, Gayatry hugged both of them and Kripa came and hugged the three of them whereas Shabd and Angad laughed then hugged each other too.

The whole day spent just doing shopping for Mahi and Kripa who went alone as they didn't want Shabd and Angad to know what they were going to wear. The guys just got bore the whole day and when it was 6pm they started to get ready for prom night party. Angad and Shabd both wore a black suit, with matching black shoes, their hair were gelled, their earrings made them look even more hot and cool, to finish they just put some perfume on. They were now ready, they both went in their car and left toward the college. Once they reached it, they saw everyone was there enjoying each other company and dancing together. They both went in a corner and stood there waiting for their valentines.

S: man, where are they?Mahi never take ages to get ready

A: Kripa does so i think Mahi is getting some lessons how to take ages just to get ready from my girlfriend

They both giggled, just then everything stoped, everyone was starring at the door in shock and memorized. Shabd and Angad confused turned around and they were as shocked as everyone. They saw the two most beautiful women in the world. It was none other than Kripa and Mahi.

One was wearing this:

She curled lightly her hair, she has light make up on, her silver hoops were caressing her shoulder and cheek and had her sexy red heels sandals on.

The other one was wearing this:

(just imagine the suit red with black work insted of blue😳)

She had straightened her hair, she has light make up on, her long silver earrings caressed her shoulder and had her red sexy heels sandals on.

They were both looking gorgeous, Shabd went to the trouser suit girl and Angad to the girl who was wearing a dress, then they hugged their valentines. When hey apart, the girls giggled and exchanged their patner. The traditional suit girl put her arm around Angad neck and said "I'm Kripa" while the dress girl took Shabd hand in hers and stared at him then said "I'm Mahi". The guys were shocked but then smiled and hugged their valentines. They night spent dancing, singing, hugging, talking and enjoying each other company. They night was the lover night and we could see both couple starring in each other eyes. To Finish, we see Shabd and Angad say "happy valentines day" to Mahi and Kripa, they slipped two beautiful silver diamond ring in their patner fourth finger. The girls were speechless, they just hugged them and once they apart, Angad and Shabd looked at each other and after winking they just approchiate at the same time their patner, bent to their lips and kissed them.

Hey guys, thanks a lot for all the comments and support. I really enjoyed writting this fan fiction but i had to end it as from the start i had though to end it on valentines day. I'll maybe come back with another fan fiction not sure. Thanks again for liking my fan fiction i really appreacited your comments and support and Happy Valentines Days to veryone.

xxx Love, Laiba xxx

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Loved it. It was so cute and romantic . Love how Mahi and Kripa are sisters.

Hopefully you write another one 😛

good work Laibiiiiii!!

waiting for ur other fiction!!!