A story I created......Plzzz do read it!! - Page 8

Originally posted by: Nandini Bhat

Oops....do u really take me as an inspiration....am I????

yes really nandu 😛 😆

and bye GN SD and TC 😳

Recap:
Dharam scolds Veer bt he is in his own world of MC... 😳

Contd:
Since she breaks her room mirror,her friend...a boyfriend .... comes to her room and asks her what the matter is... 😊 ....she says....
MC:Kuch Nahin....Basss....
Boyfriend:Kuch toh hai....varna tum muh phulaai kyun baithi ho.... 😆
MC:Maine kaha na kuch nahin hai....Samajh mein nahin aata kya??? 😡
BF:Theek hai....vaise main soch raha tha....kyun na hum dona....sirf hum dono mele mein chalein... 😳 ....bahut dinon se hum akele kahin mele mein nahin gaye aur mujhe tumse dher saari baatein bhi karni hain!!!!
MC:Toh yahin karo....ya garden mein....mele mein jaane ki kya zaroorat hai....mujhe kahin nahin jaana!!!
BF:Mela zyaada door bhi nahin hai....paas hi mein hai jahaan maine suna hai ki ek Blacksmith aur uska dost Prince aaye hue hain....kyun na dekh aaye??
MC:Blacksmith 😕 ....Naam Kya Hai Uska???
BF:Mujhe kya pata....tum chalogi tabhi toh pata lagega,na!!!
MC:Theek hai....Hum Chalenge....Aakhir hum bhi toh dekhenge ki ye dono hain kaun,kahaan se aaye hain aur hum unse mil chuke hain ya nahin....(she knows that itz Veer bt somewhere deep in her heart therez a feeling for him....that she isn't aware of 😳 ....and so she wants to see him.... 😳
To be continued....

Originally posted by: Rash2cool

yes really nandu 😛 😆

and bye GN SD and TC 😳

Ok....Bye....😛

Originally posted by: sexc_111

wwwwwwwwwowow omg if this happens in DV i m sure its gona be a super super hit!!!! gd imagenation hunny!! yeh sum1 plz continue

😆Super-Hit....that'd be gr8....😆

Originally posted by: Nandini Bhat

😆Super-Hit....that'd be gr8....😆

well superhit work great work👏

wow very well written Nandini and Rashi 👏 👏. Good going. 😳
veer in MC's dearmworld 😆 and the background songs 😉 😆 nice ones. Mela part seems interesting. But whats the name of this boyfren of MC. i mean is he a prince, childhood fren. ufff yaar main swaal bahot puchti
pls do continue guys. 😍

Originally posted by: castrafa

wow very well written Nandini and Rashi 👏 👏. Good going. 😳
veer in MC's dearmworld 😆 and the background songs 😉 😆 nice ones.(Really i'll continue pgiving backgroung song's) Mela part seems interesting. But whats the name of this boyfren of MC. i mean is he a prince, childhood fren. ufff yaar main swaal bahot puchti
pls do continue guys. 😍

Yup we would really do continue... 😳

but plz we require some time dear........

BTW thanks for ur resopnse........ 😛 😳 😃

👏 👏 👏 gr8 imagination nandu 😃

Originally posted by: Innocent Ishita

👏 👏 👏 gr8 imagination nandu 😃

what abt me ishu..... 😭

hey rashi i didn't finf ur thread yaar..... 😭