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Posted: 17 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: newkidontheblok

hey wat a gr8 part i loved it isn't the wake up scene taken from the movie hum sath sath hai saif's part rite it was gr8 and wat kripa said one is arrogant and other is a big flirt ha ha it was too good ha ha and then zaib and angad touchin everything and checking each other that was the funniest thing ha ha ha in short just too good :)

thanx

u have a sharp i must say. šŸ˜†

yes it was similar to that scene because coincidently that movie was coming on and i really liked thta scene so i put it in.

yeah kripa is a very moody girl i guess both the boys will have to be careful 😃

im glad u found this part fun and amusing.

well continue reading and appreciating. šŸ‘

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Posted: 17 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock

cute part
kripa surely has a temper
continue soon

thanx

well thats kripa for you. one big bag full of moody and confused emotions

glad u liked it. well continue reading and having fun.

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Posted: 17 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

awesome šŸ˜† nice welcome

thanx

nice welcome, well it suely was a nice welcome.

catch the next part to find out how both of them would react.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Lovedd It! Awwww Zaib dreamingg hahaa it was so funny when Angad && Zaib were touching eachother šŸ˜† andd then the servents were like they both must be drunk 🤣 loll i couldnt stop laughing. Awww that poor servent lol smart plan by zaib though, i cant believe Kripa didnt no it was Zaib and then when she was chucking all that stuff at him šŸ˜† Thiss part as well good! cont soon x
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: P u j a- -*

Lovedd It! Awwww Zaib dreamingg hahaa it was so funny when Angad && Zaib were touching eachother šŸ˜† andd then the servents were like they both must be drunk 🤣 loll i couldnt stop laughing. Awww that poor servent lol smart plan by zaib though, i cant believe Kripa didnt no it was Zaib and then when she was chucking all that stuff at him šŸ˜† Thiss part as well good! cont soon x

thanx Puja

yeh our Zaib just doesnt stop dreaming šŸ˜†

u were laughing when reading it, hahaha, i was laughing when writing it so im glad i acheived in making u laugh.

yeh well kripa is just so engrossed in getting angry that at the moment she can't think straight so i guess catch the next part to find out what both of them wil do 😃

well continue reading and appreciating.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 7

Kripa stood there staring at a pancake covered Zaib. It was so hilarious that she just burst out laughing, as if all her anger had disappeared.

"Is this your way of welcoming?" Zaib said whilst removing the remains of the pancakes from his cheek and then to her horror he put it in his mouth. She felt disgusted.

Uggh! What the hell are you doing?"

"What? It's really sweet you know. Too bad you couldn't have a taste. Actually I think you still can."
he mischievously licked his lips and hinted her that she can also lick it off his face. She was even more appalled by him and now she really wanted him to leave.

"what are you doing here? I don't want anyone around me right now." She thought that Zaib would become offended and leave but to her surprise he just invited himself further in the room and made himself comfortable on her bed.

"I didn't see you this morning at breakfast so I guessed you would be hungry and even if you're not, you'll still have to eat. I mean itnee mehnat karke laaya hu tumhaare liye so you've got to oblige." He smiled at her and hoped that she would stop just staring at him like that and say something. At least make some movement.

She didn't know what to do as she was surprised by his actions. Was he for real? Now she felt like a fool in front of him because first thing she didn't realise it was Zaib all the time and now she was just standing there doing nothing.

The embarrassing expression wasn't hidden from Zaib so he got off the bed and stood in front of her. Then he touched her chin and raised her face towards him. "What's wrong? Are you still angry?" Of course he knew she was still angry because he had heard everything but he didn't want to make her even more uncomfortable by telling her that. She would be even more embarrassed.

Kripa didn't say anything and just stared at his gorgeous eyes. The eyes which had captured her from day one. These eyes showed innocence, sweetness and something even deeper. Was it love? Was he trying to tell her something? "I'm not angry. Why should I be angry?"


Okay now both of these are lying to their teeth. I mean what is this huh? Both of them know what each other are feeling but are denying it on the surface. Hmmm….perhaps this is love.

"But that's not what I see. If you call me your friend, then you've got to tell me the truth." He so much wanted to take her in his arms but refrained from doing so.

Truth? She knew that is what she couldn't tell him. At the moment she herself was not sure what the truth was. She just turned away from him.

Then he grabbed hold of her hand.
"come with me."

"Where are you taking me?"

"To show you the truth."
He carried on walking out of her room and right opposite to his room. He didn't let go and just made her follow him to whatever he was doing. He finally made her sit on the arm chair whilst he went inside his walk in closet and brought back a box full of some papers.

What's this?" she was surprised to find a box full of paintings of beautiful picturesque landscapes surrounding a beautiful woman. Almost every painting included the same woman but her face was hidden. What was the meaning of that?
"Wow! This is amazing. Where did you find these?"

"That's an interesting thing. Well let me see… I think I probably got it from Mr. brain who most of the time lives in dreamland."

"Dreams? Oh you're shocking me every moment, who could ever think a person like you could ever be so romantic. I mean these paintings reflect so much passion and and and…"
Kripa couldn't find such words to describe them anymore. The way Zaib had painted the woman really made her almost envy her, because she wished it could have been her.

"Well you see I haven't discussed this with anybody but seeing that you seem to have quite a few misunderstandings about me so I thought that maybe it's best to show you the real Zaib. Someone who people hardly know."

"I never…wait a minute; you heard everything I said didn't you?"
She felt like dropping dead at that moment because now he knew exactly how she felt about him. God this was going to be even harder.

"well kaafi taarife baandhee jaarahee thee mere baare me so how could I resist." He gave an innocent smile.

"I still can't believe you were standing there all the time whilst I was blabbering out all that nonsense."

"Actually it was cute."
He bit his tongue because he realised he just said something which would embarrass both of them. He could already see Kripa turning red.
"anyways I'm sure now you would consider differing."

What was about him that changed everything for her? There was definitely magic in his words which just made her forget everything and wanted to fall for him all over again.
"I'm so amazed. I never knew I was a friend of such an artist."

"You'll be amazed further. This is just the beginning."
Zaib thought whilst admiring the way how she kept on moving a strand of hair behind her ear as if it was bothering her in a big way. Perhaps that was a sign of her showing she was nervous.

"First rule of friendship, there should be no lies or secrets between each other. So how about telling me what do these paintings mean? I mean this woman is so beautiful." Now she wished even more to be this woman.

"These paintings I draw whenever I feel alone around everyone. They represent the dreams I have."

"Hmm…what exactly is your dream mister?"


Gosh she looked so amazing that Zaib turned around because he knew that he wouldn't be able to control himself and do something uncontrollable.

She became nervous that perhaps she pushed the wrong button. Perhaps he felt uncomfortable talking to her about something so personal. But she wanted to be part of everything that belonged to him. She was dying to know the story behind this mesmerising vision of the woman in the paintings. "You know what? You don't have to say anything if you don't want to. Rule no. 2; never force a friend in doing something they don't want to."

He knew how much she wanted to know about the woman. The way she gasped at it clearly showed her verge of curiosity. He just felt a bit embarrassed about discussing it with her. He was not sure what she would think of him. This was so girlish.

"There's nothing more than to have sensitivity in a guy. Oh it's just so cute."

Zaib smiled and turned around then stood there with his folded arms. "Okay imagine a beautiful town with dark and high skylines. Imagine a night where magic is sparking in the air, the wind is blowing softly swaying the leaves on the trees. Sound of wind chimes can be heard in the far distance. There is this unusual mist and right amongst all this is the one perfect person. She is covered from head to toe and only her enchanting eyes can be seen. She seems to be running away from something when she collides with that one presence which changes her life forever." Zaib began humming a tune and then he sang.

"Ghum sum, chandni ho, naaz neen ho, ya koi hur ho?
Dil nasheen ho, dil kasheen ho, ya jannat ka nur ho…Then the shawl that she has worn over her head falls and she reveals her face and the only person who can see her is the guy
.

Mashallah…mashallah…mashallah. Ghum sum, chandni ho, naaz neen ho, ya koi hur ho?
Dil nasheen ho, dil kasheen ho, ya jannat ka nur ho..."
Zaib froze because all of a sudden he saw Kripa's face in the painting of the woman.
"Mashallah….mashallah…mashallah."

She got up towards him and shook him a bit to get him out of his trance. He just smiled and went to pick up his paintings. Then he laid them out on his bed as if he was narrating a story. Then he imagined himself being the guy in the painting and the woman was Kripa and he was chasing her.

"tum sabah ho, ya ghata ho, kehkasha ho, sahibaan ho.
Subha kee pehlee, kiran ke jaise.
Bebaak alhar, pawan ke jaisee
Khushbue tum loota tee ho, masti me chure, chure."
He got turned away from the paintings and out of his imagination. He looked at Kripa and smiled. "Mashallah…mashallah…mashallah."

Kripa was quite pleased with everything Zaib was showing her because she hadn't expected any of it. The more he described this woman the more she fell in love with him. The more she wished to be this wonderful vision of his. She just wanted to hear more and more and never wanting it to end.

"tum haya ho, tum rida ho, tum wafa ho, tum nasha ho
Khamosh nazre, sadao jesee
Tumhaaree baate, dua jaisee
Her nafas me tum samaee ho, phir bhi ho itnee dhoore.
Mashallah…mashallah…mashallah."
He took Kripa's hands and lightly kissed them.
Then he stared right into her eyes making sure she didn't move. "Ghumsum, chandni ho, naaz neen ho, ya koi hur ho." Now as he said each line he laid kisses on both her cheeks. "Dil nasheen ho, dil kasheen ho, ya jannat ka nur ho." Both of them just stared as if time had frozen. "mashallah…mashallah…mashallah."


Wasn't that beautiful? Well I'm sure you guys must think that this Zaib guy is surely too forward that he just met Kripa two days ago and he has already begun being physical with her. He had no idea why he did what he did but he just felt it right. He didn't care about what she would think; he just knew that he couldn't help it anymore. There is one thing though that I can tell you with assurance and that is that both Kripa and Zaib were feeling affections for each other but they couldn't find the courage to say it out. Kripa didn't even mind Zaib kissing her because she so much wanted it. She had wanted it since last night, the time when they were alone in the corner. If this is the case then let's go and see what happens next…

Zaib had come there that morning to tell her how he felt but at that moment he no longer knew how he felt. What happened about the barrier he had created between him and Kripa last night in that corner? Hadn't he told himself to control then why did he just go and kiss her? He thought "If this is what I wanted from the beginning then why am I holding myself now?" He had made up his mind that he will tell her straight away no matter what response he will get. "um…Kripa, there's something I want to tell you. I…"

They were interrupted by Naina calling Kripa constantly. Kripa let go of Zaib and went outside to the banisters to see what had happened. What was so important that Naina had to disturb the most perfect moment ever.
"kya huwa aunty?"

"Kripa, tumhara India se phone hai."

She leaped with joy and rushed back inside the room to pick up the phone. In the excitement she forgot she had left Zaib just standing there with his unfinished speech. As she picked the phone with a big grin soon it began turning in a frown when she heard her mother crying on the other end.

Zaib saw that she looked really tensed and worried which indicated that the news she was getting was not pleasant. Her face turned red with fear and a trickle of tears could be seen coming down her cheeks.

"what are you saying? How bad is it?" she was really terrified.

That was enough for Zaib to know that something was surely wrong at her house because no one would cry like that for no reason. He saw Kripa putting the phone down and then standing there faced down with tears flowing like a fountain. She put her hand over her eyes but that didn't stop the tears. Zaib so much wanted to hold her in his arms and comfort her but then he thought it would just be taking advantage of her vulnerable state. He went over to her. "Is everything okay, what happened?"

Kripa wiped her eyes and looked up at him. She also wanted him to comfort her and hold her in his arms but she knew that it won't be proper at that moment. "it's my younger brother, Varun. We just got the results from the doctors and he says…he says he has leukaemia." She burst out crying and she put her head on his shoulder. Zaib wanted to touch her back but he held himself back and just let her rest there.

Soon Naina entered after hearing her crying so harshly and she took Kripa in her arms. She comforted her and asked her what happened. After hearing the sad story she told her to calm down and stop crying.
"Kripa, now you've got to be strong for yourself and for your family."

"Aunty, I've to go back to India, they need me and I've got to be there for Varun."
Kripa let go of Naina and headed out of the room towards her room. As she walked off Zaib couldn't stop thinking of how ten minutes ago they were so happy and out of this world and then how a five minute call changed the whole scenario.

He went and sat on his bed quite stunned. What was happening? Then it struck him that he was going to loose Kripa when he hadn't even expressed his love to her. He couldn't let that happen but he couldn't exactly tell her now because it was not the right time. Then he contradicted himself that if this was not the right time then he will never get another right time because she would go away. The best thing was to tell her now because he didn't know when he will be able to meet her again, it could be never. He immediately picked up his feet and took giant leaps towards her room. When he reached midway his feet stopped as he thought "I've to tell her everything before I loose her forever. I want to be there for her in all her problems and travails in life. But how shall I say it all at this delicate moment?" He was confused about what to do, there were so many people to think about and the importance of things that were happening. This was also important but at that moment not as important as what Kripa was going to go through for the rest of her life.


End of part. Was this part too sad or was it sweet and romantic?




Edited by arwa72 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Awwww loved it! had the perfect mix of Sadness, sweetness & romance. Awwww Zaib showed her his painting so adorable! lol! anybody would be wishing they were the woman in his pictures šŸ˜† The scene with the song from saawariya was so romatic i could imagine it in my head! Varun! 😭 Awwww Poor Kripa...& Zaib hopefully Varuns pulls through! but i hope Zaib goes with her to india or Varun comes to London for treatmentšŸ˜› Lol im just trying every possible idea to keep K&Z Together šŸ˜† There was no Angad in this part though 😭 lol only jkin cont soon! x
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part.i hope they dnt get separated without confesssing their feelings.zeb shud confess bef she leaves otherwise it may b too late.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: P u j a- -*

Awwww loved it! had the perfect mix of Sadness, sweetness & romance. Awwww Zaib showed her his painting so adorable! lol! anybody would be wishing they were the woman in his pictures šŸ˜† The scene with the song from saawariya was so romatic i could imagine it in my head! Varun! 😭 Awwww Poor Kripa...& Zaib hopefully Varuns pulls through! but i hope Zaib goes with her to india or Varun comes to London for treatmentšŸ˜› Lol im just trying every possible idea to keep K&Z Together šŸ˜† There was no Angad in this part though 😭 lol only jkin cont soon! x

thanx

ahh so u thought it was sweet and romantic? yes

that song is just so beutiful and i luv the video so i had it all pictured in my mind.

its pretty sad i know but don't worry i'll zaib will get everyone out of their misery. thats what he's there for. 😃

so you dont wnat them seperated well lets see what happens in the future ad yes Angad will pop up in the next scene but right now lets concentrate on zaib and Kripa for the time being. 😃 after all they can't seperate now.

well continue reading and enjoying.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: proud_2_b_mysel

awesome, sweet but sad, wonder whta this seperation will arouse and who's feelings will it arouse

thanx

mixture of feelings, hmmm? well this sepearation is going to do alot of things which will change both Zaib and Kripa's life.

to find out be sure to catch the next part

well carry on reading and appreciating.

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